Desperate Naïve Couple in Dire Straits

[NegateGivity]

So this is a take on the Indecent Proposal trope with a bisexual twist.

Jack and Diane are a young married couple that made the mistake of going all in on a MLM scheme. And when they should have cut and run, they made the mistake not only doubling down, but tripling down. Now instead of the quick fortune they planned on achieving, they find themselves saddled with and insurmountable debt that will that they will never be able to pay.

Enter Warren and Jeanie, a wealthy older couple who learn of the younger couples plight. They invite the desperate duo over to discuss their Indecent Proposal, which involves the the older couple takes on the younger's debt and in exchange the younger couple become virtual sex slaves. With begrudging acceptance the young pair agree to the wealthy perverts terms.

"Excellent" Warren exclaims, "Well no time like the present to get started, let's see how good you two are with your mouths!"

Warren starts to remove his pants, while Jeanie hikes up her skirt and leans back in her chair. After a shared look of grim determination Jack starts to approach Jeanie while Diane moves towards Warren.

"Ohh babies, try again" Jeanie says while hungrily eyeing Diane.

The young husband and wife again share a look and already know that even this won't be a deal breaker and have already accepted their fates.

 

[Rob_Royale]

This would be huge with the right readers. Between the bisexuality and the age gap, it would be very successful if written well. It's not my cup of tea, male on male would be very difficult for me to write, but I know a good idea when I read one.

 

[LupusDei]

I see the desire to go all the way like that right away, especially if hard play or a quick and dirty romp is all that's intended (and nothing wrong with that), but for a longer story a bit of slower buildup and "boiling the frog" until the gay combinations come mostly naturally could perhaps widen the appeal.

 

[ElliottEden]

Interesting idea. One suggestion though, is that if this were to become a series. Regardless how the young couple accept their new owners tastes, they retain a dislike for the activities they engage in. Of course that means Jack and Diane become expert in knowing how best to get their owners off - so as to make their service as quick as possible. They trade suggestions, with conversations such as Diane explaining how not to gag during a blow job.

Of course Warren and Jeanie know what's going on, and take advantage of it.

 

[jaF0]

They could do a little ditty 'bout Jack and Diane. Two American kids growin' up in the Heartland. Diane's sittin' on Melanie's lap, got her hands between her knees. Oh yeah, life goes on.

 

[NegateGivity]

I see the desire to go all the way like that right away, especially if hard play or a quick and dirty romp is all that's intended (and nothing wrong with that), but for a longer story a bit of slower buildup and "boiling the frog" until the gay combinations come mostly naturally could perhaps widen the appeal.

I kinda just wanted to put everything right up front. Also it's not a gay arrangement, it's a BISEXUAL arrangement. Every time I start reading a story in this vein, it usually goes gay and gay only.
Here the younger couple become the toys of the older couple. The initial same sex pairing is just for "shock and awe" for the younger pair. To subvert their expectations and ascert dominance.

 

[Wifetheif]

That's pretty much the plotline of my years-old story Internet Offer https://literotica.com/s/internet-offer A young couple is taken under the wing of an internet millionaire. He's older. The wife is more game than the husband. His first act is to cut all her clothing off in a crowded restaurant.

 

[maxthecat123]

That's pretty much the plotline of my years-old story Internet Offer https://literotica.com/s/internet-offer A young couple is taken under the wing of an internet millionaire. He's older. The wife is more game than the husband. His first act is to cut all her clothing off in a crowded restaurant.

You may been influenced by the movie indecent proposal. Most people don’t know the original script was Robert redford character had sex with the couple and not just Demi Moore.

OP: I think the idea is great. Love the bisexual aspect! Hope to read it soon!

 

[gunhilltrain]

You may been influenced by the movie indecent proposal. Most people don’t know the original script was Robert redford character had sex with the couple and not just Demi Moore.

OP: I think the idea is great. Love the bisexual aspect! Hope to read it soon!

I guess audiences just weren't ready for a Woody Harrelson-Robert Redford sex scene, but that would be been pretty awesome.

By the way, when I read the thread title, I immediately thought of Mark Knopfler's old band.

 

[Wifetheif]

The movie is better than the original novel where the guy paying the money is an Arab. The Robert Redford character is a nebbisy Jewish guy and the wife is a blonde gentile. The ending is all messed up with the wife committing suicide out of guilt! The novel certainly carries an erotic charge but is all kinds of messed up