describe yourself as if you were a character in an erotic story you were writing

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describe yourself as if you were a character in an erotic story you were writing

does exactly what it says on the tin...
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I couldn't be one of the active participants.

My hat would fall off. Most undignified.

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oggbashan said:
I couldn't be one of the active participants.

My hat would fall off. Most undignified.

Og

You could be the subject of one of the other character's unbridled lust. Then you wouldnb't have to be actually *active*.

Come on guys, do I have to start the ball rolling here?
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Vermilion said:
You could be the subject of one of the other character's unbridled lust. Then you wouldn't have to be actually *active*.

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But that would be unlikely. Unless the other character was deranged.

Of course, several of my characters are based on real-life persons. Jeanne D'Artois' Fag-Ash_Lil (in Unatit) was based on a real person, now deceased. Some of the men might be based on what I would have liked to be when much younger. Many are nothing like me.

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Vermilion said:
describe yourself as if you were a character in an erotic story you were writing

does exactly what it says on the tin...
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Ten pounds of mountainous cleavage jutted obscenely from her chest, springboarding off a scaffolding of black lace corsetry. Her face was turned slightly away from me, obscured by a ragged asymmetrical curtain of hair. The flesh on her arms was round and creamy, easily bruised.

She broke out in laughter at some obscure witticism, unheard from my vantage point. I noted the fullness of her lips, and mentally pictured them nursing my stiffening erection. She was so soft, so pliant and sweet, I wanted to seize her and leave my teeth marks on her skin
 
impressive said:
Isn't that people describing *other* literotica people, though? I want people to describe themselves.

And to start the ball rolling...

She was a sumptuous young woman with a pink and white english rose complexion and long, dark gold hair. Her green eyes sparkled with amusement and when she smiled her eyes almost closed. He noted the way her generous hips swayed when she climbed the stairs ahead of him and was mesmerised by the tiny pearly toenails peeking out of the toes of her bright scarlet high heels.
She went in and out in all the right places - especially out, and when she talked her low, melliflous voice oozed sexuality.

OK. You go...
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He was a tall man at six foot four inches. His broad shoulders looked strong, and his blue eyes had a piercing gaze to them as they scanned the room over and over. The large bulge in his pant revealed his thoughts to those around him, though he didn't seem the least bit embarrised about it. His longer than average brown hair fell in front of his left eye from time to time, and seemed a tad unruly. He couldn't wait for spring to arrive, with the warmth that would make shaving his head again a comfortable decision. he felt tormented by a man mistreating his woman on the other side of the bar. He wanted to help her out, feeling a burning inside at the uncouth fellow, but had a feqar inside that it wasn't his place to step up and help the lady out. Afraid that she would chastize him for getting in the way. So he stayed where he was, alone and without a smile, one that would brighten the room if he were to ever show it, but he never felt the need unless he was already happy.
 
oggbashan said:
I couldn't be one of the active participants.

My hat would fall off. Most undignified.

Og

I can believe that magnificent hat didn't come with an optional chinstrap for windy weather etc....
 
Vermilion said:
describe yourself as if you were a character in an erotic story you were writing

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I don't do a lot of description of my characters, I tend to let the reader form their own opinions....

My description of myself would be....

He was a man, much like other men. He had dreams and hopes. Part of him lived in the present, and another part of him lived in the past. His eyes sparkled when he smiled, and the crinkles at the edge of his mouth showed that he smiled often.
 
drksideofthemoon said:
He was a man, much like other men. He had dreams and hopes. Part of him lived in the present, and another part of him lived in the past. His eyes sparkled when he smiled, and the crinkles at the edge of his mouth showed that he smiled often.
He had a horse. He had a hat. He had a heart that fell in love once, and never forgot.

Ok, sorry about the heart bit.
 
damppanties said:
He had a horse. He had a hat. He had a heart that fell in love once, and never forgot.

Ok, sorry about the heart bit.

I rather like that....

I dunno, I thought the heart bit was quite good
 
drksideofthemoon said:
I rather like that....

I dunno, I thought the heart bit was quite good
Well, the heart bit won't really attract the chicks to you, and it is the description for an erotic story after all... ;)
 
I don't think I can really do this for two reasons. One I've never written an erotic story and don't have any plans to do so and two TheEarl has already descibed me in 3 of his stories which is kind of the reason I appeared here in the first place!

Elsie :rose:

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Vermilion said:
describe yourself as if you were a character in an erotic story you were writing

does exactly what it says on the tin...
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As though I were a protagonist, or as though I were a bit-part?

A sinister pagan near the fifteenth prime of life, he lived at the witch's rock in the field of stones with his black cat, and commanded daemons to do his will by means of arcane symbols in ancient, long forgotten scripts...

And every word of that is true.
 
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Elsie Grey said:
I don't think I can really do this for two reasons. One I've never written an erotic story and don't have any plans to do so and two TheEarl has already descibed me in 3 of his stories which is kind of the reason I appeared here in the first place!

Elsie :rose:

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Wait - characters really do come to life????????
Hell. <gets back to MS Word>
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;)
 
SimonBrooke said:
As though I were a protagonist, or as though I were a bit-part?


As though you were worth describing... and it's got to be so that if someone you knew read it they wouldn't laugh and go - 'You? Dark-haired? What?' kind of thing (sentence used for illustrative purposes only)
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Vermilion said:
As though you were worth describing... and it's got to be so that if someone you knew read it they wouldn't laugh and go - 'You? Dark-haired? What?' kind of thing (sentence used for illustrative purposes only)
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Oh, well, I edited into the last post, but seeing you've already read that...

A sinister pagan near the fifteenth prime of life, he lived at the witch's rock in the field of stones with his black cat, and commanded daemons to do his will by means of arcane symbols in ancient, long forgotten scripts...
 
You actually want me to say out loud that I'm short, fat, old, silver haired??

In your dreams!!

:D ;) :D ;) ;) :D
 
Most of my male leads are based on me, so I guess I'd be me in my stories. That is to say that I was based on me and not someone else.

Now I've gona and confused myself. :confused:
 
Trombonus said:
Most of my male leads are based on me, so I guess I'd be me in my stories. That is to say that I was based on me and not someone else.

Now I've gona and confused myself. :confused:
Although I think I know what you mean - hee :D
 
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