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[Cosmic Knight]

Jack Garmisch
age 40, 5-8 200 lbs.
Jack runs Garmisch New & Used Car Sales, he has the Toyota dealership on highway 17.
Jack is an honest man, he sells the trade ins cheap to local people, He has a good mechanic, and makes sure all hus used cars are in the best condition possible.

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I sat in the pickup, on the corner, watching until the kids had gone to school, I did not want to let her kids know she was in trouble. She being, Mrs Carla Angilotti.
She had come to me for a nice car, as she put it, about 9 months back. And I showed her a real nice Celica, with a clean and good engine, for two and a half grand. I knew she could not afford finance company rates, so, as I often did with local people, I did a deal with her. One twenty five a month, for two years. She would pay me 2.750 for the car, where a finance company would have been 4 grand at least.
I did warn her though, she HAD to meet the payments, and this month, second in a row, she had not paid, and was now 250 in arrears.

I rang the doorbell, and pretty soon there she was, still in her night things, which surprised me. I didn`t beat about the bush, it was quite simple.

"Mrs Angilotti, you have defaulted on the payments for the car, for two months in a row. And as it says on the agreement, that means I take the car back. So you have two choices I am afraid, give me the money, 250, or the keys. I am sorry it has come to this Mrs Angilotti, but you did sign, and it is you who didnt pay."

I looked at her sympathetically

"I hate doing this , maybe you have something you could sell? Something to negotiate with even?"

 

[1FreakyGirl]

Name: Melissa Angelotti
Age: 29
Occupation: Waitress (at Galaxy [a strip club])

For the past 3 months, I, Melissa Angelotti, treated every day as if nothing had changed. But things had changed.

My husband, Robert, had left me and the kids. It was a classic story. He left me for a younger woman. I mean, I wasn't much older, both Robert and I were about to hit our early 30s. But he met a younger woman, some 18 year old bimbo.

I didn't cry about it--that was for sure. I let him leave. The only thing with him leaving is that he cleared out our bank account in the process. I had no job and had been looking for the past 2 months. I did get the asshole for child support though. I would not deprive our children nor would I let them suffer because of their idiot father. I also kept the house.

Being behind on all the bills was something that stunk. I did what I could though, paid for what desperately needed to be paid for. Like food and utilities. I didn't have much after. Seriously. I was flat broke.

So, really, it came to no surprise to me when the doorbell rang on my day off and there was the guy I got the car from. With a deep breath, I opened the door, I knew why he was here. He wanted his payment.

Damnit!

My heart fluttered, not in a good way either, when he said he needed the keys or the payment.

"Listen, Jack," I steepled my hands and sighed, I would not cry. I hadn't before and I'd be damn if I would start now. "I dont' have any money but I swear, I can get you $200 next Wednesday?" I looked at him hopefully, "Please? I will do anything or if you want to take something as collateral---" my voice trailed off. I knew he wouldn't take anything as that because well, I didn't have anything.

 

[Cosmic Knight]

"Listen, Jack,"

I listened, even though I figured it was almost certainly going to be pointless,but, I had to let her try. While she was speaking I looked at her face, and then her body. She certainly wasnt wearing much under that dressing gown, if anything I thought.

"I dont' have any money but I swear, I can get you $200 next Wednesday? Please? I will do anything or if you want to take something as collateral---"

It was hard for her, I knew that, but I had a family too, and bills to pay. I needed to sell 2 cars a week to stay solvent for chrissakes.

"I know it is tough Mrs Angelotti, but it is tough for me also, we are deep into a recession, my sales have slumped. And as for collateral? You have children Mrs Angelotti, can I call you Melissa? And I am not a bad man, I dont want to deprive them of anything."

I looked around to see if the neighbors were watching, and thought I saw a curtain twitch.

"Might it be a little better if we talked inside, the neighbors? Ya know?"

 

[1FreakyGirl]

"Might it be a little better if we talked inside, the neighbors? Ya know?"

With a frantic nod, I ushered him inside my home, "Let's go talk in the living room." I told him in a defeated voice. I knew that no matter what I said, he probably wouldn't fall for the list of excuses I wanted to tell him. He was a smart guy and it made me feel so awful that he too mentioned a family.

All I knew is that I had to tell him the truth. Perhaps then he would ease up on me.

"Have a seat Jack." I pointed to the couch as I took seat next to him. It had never occured to me that I was still in my night clothes, let alone at how skimpy they were. I had just gotten home at 4 am and hadn't been to sleep yet as I wanted to see the kids off.

If my husband leaving me wasn't a shame all ready for me, I would say where I worked was an even bigger shame. I mean, I had married Robert at a young age and we started a family early. So I had never gone to college and so here I was, working as a cocktail waitress at a strip club in the city.

"Jack," I started of tentively, "Please, please, don't take the car from me. Like I said I can have $200 by next wednesday. I need the car to get to work. And I understand you need the money too but seriously, I will do anything if you could just wait." I looked at him, I could tell my eyes were all ready watery from all the stress of everything thus far. I placed my hand on his lap and leaned over, "Please Jack? It's Saturday now, I'm only asking for 4 more days."

 

[Cosmic Knight]

I followed melissa throu go the living room, and it was obvious that they did not have much. No 50inch HDTV in here, not even a game console as far as I could see.

"Jack, please, please, don't take the car from me. Like I said I can have $200 by next wednesday. I need the car to get to work. And I understand you need the money too but seriously, I will do anything if you could just wait."

She put her hand on my lap, and leaned closer.

"Please Jack? It's Saturday now, I'm only asking for 4 more days."


Her wrap had fallen open a little, and the top of her nightdress was loose, giving me a tantalizing view of her breast. Beautifully rounded, with a delicate pink circle around a nipple of darker pink. It wasn`t erect, but it was still beautiful. I just stared at her tit for a few seconds, before regaining my composure, and looking at her face.

"I know Melissa, I know, and believe me, I am not a bad man, nor do I want folks saying Jack steals his cars back.
I want to help you, I went out on a limb letting you have the loan. And I know things have been tough. I know how hard you work in Billy Rae`s club, I have seen how he works you waitresses. But at the end of the day, a deal is a deal. Now supposing I said OK to the 200. Would that mean your kids would suffer next week? I hope not. And if you cant raise the money, 2 weeks later, and we are up to 450. I am sure you see my dilemma Melissa. I dont want to take the car, but, what else can be done......."

 

[1FreakyGirl]

What else could be done? This was something I wasn't sure of. But I was desperate. I had noticed the way he was looking at me so perhaps I could convince him otherwise.

"Jack," I said slowly as I tucked my legs under me and leaned forward toward him, letting one strap of my nightie slip off my shoulder, "I'm pretty sure we could work something out. Please?" I asked him as I moved my hand from his knee and slowly up his thigh.

I was down on my luck but I was working hard to keep things as normal as possible and that sometimes meant one had to sacrifice things. I would do anything for my children. I just needed more time!

 

[Cosmic Knight]

I was right, she had seen me looking at her tit, and probably noticed the slight bulge that her nipple had caused.


"I'm pretty sure we could work something out. Please?"

Her hand caressed my thigh, and I smiled

"Negotiation is always good Melissa, many a good deal has been struck that way, it is just a matter of working out the terms, and the conditions of course, as well."

I moved my hand to her shoulder, and pushed the other strap of her nighty off her shoulder. I did nothing else though, this had to come from her.

"I get the impression Melissa, that you have some sort of plan, you know, an offer, a way to clear your 250 dollar debt, is that so?"

 

[1FreakyGirl]

I only nodded to his last question as I leaned up on my knees, my hand had to leave his leg as I shrugged out of the top of my nightie. It fell, exposing my breasts to him.

I was a little nervous as to what I was doing but also to how Jack would act. What would he do? Would he think me too old? I mean, Robert left me for a younger woman so my self confidence wasn't exactly up to par.

When he didn't hint that he wanted me to stop. I kept going. I leaned forward, my breasts dangerously close to his face, "I know we can work something out Jack. Just name it and I'll do it." I told him in a low, desperate voice.

 

[Cosmic Knight]

Her tits were practically in my face, and they were beautiful

"I know we can work something out Jack. Just name it and I'll do it."

I lifted her left tit, sort of weighing it in my hand, then I kissed the nipple, no tongue, before speaking.

"If as you seem to be suggesting Melissa, you want to clear your debt, by letting me shall we say, take 250 dollars from your body, then yes, I am open to that offer."

I reached for her tit once more, this time tweaking her nipple a little, and moving her hand closer to my cock.

"But Melissa, we do need to negotiate the terms, and conditions as I said. I mean, a quick feel and a blow job is not going to clear your debt now is it? Think about it, as you take off your nighty and wrap, I want to see what I am getting for my money, if I agree. For nothing is decided yet Melissa."

My guess was that she would have a landing strip, rather than a bush, maybe even bald, and I hoped that soon I would know.

 

[1FreakyGirl]

I could only nod at what Jack was saying. I knew he was right. He was a business man and so this was to be a deal and he'd have to agree. And it was all ready obvious that I would agree to what ever it was we settled on.

"Mmmm" I said as I felt him pinch my nipple. He had such big hands. I loved that about a guy.

I let my wrap fall to the couch as well as my nightie, I wore no panties, no thong. My pussy was bare and exposed, almost quivering to be touched by something--anything!

"Take your time looking and thinking about this Jack. I'm pretty sure we can work something out that benefits you for all that I owe you and perhaps we could even work on a bonus offer. The ball is in your court now Jack."

 

[Cosmic Knight]

She had a stunningly beautiful bald pussy.

"Take your time looking and thinking about this Jack. I'm pretty sure we can work something out that benefits you for all that I owe you and perhaps we could even work on a bonus offer. The ball is in your court now Jack."

I put my hand out, and ender her butt, as she slightly parted her legs. My big hand covered her pussy, and it was damp already, I discovered while slipping a finge rinside.
I looked up at her, and sucked on my finger, smiling as I did so.

"You do taste delicious Melissa, but, we have things to dicuss first. Although I am a little uncomfortable right now."

I stood, and dropped my pants, kicking them aside, before sitting back down in my boxers.

"Now then Meliisa, as we both know, you work in BillyRae`s Galaxy Strip Club. Yes, I know, you are a waitress, not a stripper. And as you know, I use the club, quite a lot. And because of that, I am aware of what you might call, the going rates.

For instance, if I have a Private Dance, I know the girl will blow me, for fifteen bucks, some even do it for ten. And one girl there, Cindy Lee, will let the guys fuck her in the ass for fifty, even do a double header for eighty. I am not saying that this is sacrosanct, what I am saying is bear this in mind when you make your offer Melissa, also, that 250 you owe me? It goes up by another 125 in two weeks time."

 

[1FreakyGirl]

I shook my head softly, "If there's one thing I can promise is that I'm not like the other girls. You see, they do those sort of offers and deals all the time with a lot of guys but with me, I'll save myself for you and do whatever it is you want."

Finally, I reached over and shamelessly felt his cock (which I was secretly impressed with it's size), "I've never had my ass fucked before Jack. And so I'm sure that has to be worth a little more than old Cindy's offers."

I have his cock another firm, squeeze, "Besides, should this deal go through and you like the terms, then I'm pretty sure we can work out an extended plan, if you will."

 

[Cosmic Knight]

"If there's one thing I can promise is that I'm not like the other girls. You see, they do those sort of offers and deals all the time with a lot of guys but with me, I'll save myself for you and do whatever it is you want."

I nodded at that comment, and then she felt my cock before continuing.

"I've never had my ass fucked before Jack. And so I'm sure that has to be worth a little more than old Cindy's offers."

I instantly thought, "well that can be arranged, me fucking you in the ass"


"Besides, should this deal go through and you like the terms, then I'm pretty sure we can work out an extended plan, if you will."

I pulled my cock free from my shorts, and smiled at her, then again I reached to finger her pussy, and felt her pushing back on my hand.

"OK Melissa, we have opened negotiations, and this morning you will make a downpayment by getting down on your knees to suck my cock. The negoriations will then move to me eating you out, here on the couch, and the final stage will be me fucking you, here, this morning. That will mean that I will not take your car today, but, I will return, at ten am on Monday, to continue the negotiating process."

 

[1FreakyGirl]

I looked at his cock. Stared at it for a long while. He was only semi erect but his cock was all ready huge. My ex-husband had been of average and well, compared to Jack's, I had to admit, my ex-husband had a small cock.

I could feel my mouth watering as I could only nod to what he had said. Get down on my knees to suck his cock. Oh, that was not going to be a problem. And if his finger felt good in my pussy just now I could only imagine how his cock would feel inside of me also.

With no other words from myself, I quickly got off of the couch and onto my knees in between his legs. I didn't wait as I reach over and took his dick into my hand and felt it. His skin was so soft to the touch that I couldn't help but lean forward and give the tip a small kiss.

I studied it for a little bit more before I took it in my warm mouth and wrapped my lips around the tip. Gently, ever so gently I pushed down, allowing more of it to enter my mouth. Almost immediately I could taste the precum in the back of my mouth and it was like heaven!

 

[Cosmic Knight]

Her eyes were wide, when she finally realised how big I was, but she was smiling, and when she took me in her mouth, oh God, she was good.
I had not had someone suck me this well in an age, her tongue was magic, as she made the vacuum around my shaft. And I was leaking precum, I could feel it almost, on her tongue as she swallowed. I didnt want to come in her mouth, not today, so i spoke to her.

"My turn Melissa darlin`."

She got up and so did I,

"Sit mear the end of the couch, with one leg over the arm"

I knelt before her, and moved to stroke her sweet bald pussy, just letting my fingertips trail across her labia, up and down, gentle and slow, picking up the moisture that was now seeping.

I used my thumbs, opening her up, and marvelling at the beauty of her sex.
I kissed it, slowly, lovingly, letting my tongue tease her entrance, then I pulled back, and looked at her. Head back, eyes closed, gripping the couch.

I opened her again, this time, I kissed her love button, and trailed my tongue all over it, around it, licking, sucking, and flicking, wondering, was she ready yet, or did she want to come orally first.

 

[1FreakyGirl]

"Oh my God!" Melissa cried out as she let her head fall back on the couch, her back arching as Jack ate her out!!

It had been so damn long since someone treated her in this manner. Paying attention to making her feel good, it was unbelieveable! She almost came right then and there.

"Please Jack--fuck my cunt--" she told him. "I need to feel you inside of me!!" She was practically humping his face as he continued to use his magical tongue!!

 

[Cosmic Knight]

"Please Jack--fuck my cunt----I need to feel you inside of me!!"

I heard her, and lifted my head,

"Soon baby, real soon, first my fingers need to go lookin` for somethin` Melissa, inside that sweet lil ole cunt fof yours baby."

I slippe dtwo fingers in, bending them, and searching the front wall of her pussy. She was red hot, and as wet as I had ever known a woman. She was so fucking ready for my big cock.
Finding the right place, spongy texture, and so fucking sensitive. I circled it, with my fingertips, and then rubbed, hard.

"Now tell me Melissa, do you want Jack here, every week, giving you what you need, just like this? You need to ask me darlin`, to tell me to cime fuck you, whenever I want to baby."

After sucking my fingers, I slapped my rigid cock on her pussy lips, her soaking fucking wet lips, and listened to the noise.

 

[1FreakyGirl]

He was paying attention to me and my needs! That turned me on so fucking much! And when he hit my G-Spot, I almost passed out! I could feel my pussy pratically leaking juices down my legs!

"Yes Jack!" I cried out in both desperation and need! "I am here for you to fuck me any time you fucking well please!!"

I could feel his cock against my pussy and I tried to push down so my pussy could swallow his cock. I knew I wasn't thinking rationally but yet, if I was, then none of this would be happening!

"Please Jack! I need you!"

 

[Cosmic Knight]

"Yes Jack! I am here for you to fuck me any time you fucking well please!!"

I rubbed the head of my cock on Melissa`s clit, and then again pressed it between her wet grasping lips.

"Please Jack! I need you!"

I pushed my cock home, feeling how it stretched her tight wet cunt, filling her almost completely.

"God Melissa, that feels so fucking good, don`t it?"

I was so fucking horny now, as I started to ride her. Pushing in deep, and twisting her nipple with one hand. I could feel her cunt muscle, gripping, almost sucking on my dick. It just made it hotter, and better, it felt so fucking hot
Her lips were grasping me also it seemed, tight around my shaft, as I watched it firing in and out of that sweet pussy.

"I want you to cum Melissa, cum around Jacks cock, flood that sweet hole of yours baby, and then Jack will flood it too, come on baby, let it go, you know you want to."

 

[1FreakyGirl]

Cum for him? I could only manage a nod in between my crying out from being fucked, "Yes Jack, I will cum for you." I told him as my pussy began to clutch around his cock, the feeling of pleasure rising from deep within my body!

With one move, I wrapped her legs around Jack's waist, bringing him closer toward me so his cock sink deeper into me!

"Oh my God Jack, I'm cumming!!" I screamed long and hard!!!

 

[1FreakyGirl]

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