Damaged Goods

[ScrappyPaperDoodler]

This may be a me thing, but I quite like the idea of characters going at it so hard that something breaks. The most obvious example relates to clothes, which are often "torn", "ripped" and "tossed aside" in the heat of the moment. In my stories, this can extend to jewellery, and I’m pretty sure the damage to bracelets and necklaces in my stories ads up to a six-figure sum. I’ve also snapped the spikes off high heels, ruined expensive silk sheets, poured luxury perfume over naked bodies, destroyed phones and broken tables (though I don’t believe I’ve made a bed collapse under the sheer weight of passion).

Am I the only one who thinks there’s something hot about this, and what’s the biggest/most expensive thing that broke or was destroyed during a sex scene in one of your stories?

 

[onehitwanda]

Technically a marriage...

 

[Kumquatqueen]

It's a standing joke among my friends. Kumquat 6, beds nil...
I swear two of them were broken before I got on them!

The Cast Iron Bed Company deserved to go bust, though. Apparently their Lifetime Guarantee didn't cover more than two people on a bed. Bastards.

Oh. My stories. A doorframe and adjacent wall is the only one I can think of (at the beginning of Wheelchair Bound?).
And lots of broken silence. Multiple characters muse on sound insulation and are brought to a point of not caring.

 

[Zenith77]

It's a standing joke among my friends. Kumquat 6, beds nil...
I swear two of them were broken before I got on them!

In a previous house that we rented the bedroom had a wooden floor and the bed had a stick support in the centre of its frame. When we moved house fortunately they didn't comment on the large number of grooves in the wood, caused by the bed being moved during certain... activities. It was quite surreal to look up only to discover the bed was now 3-4 feet from the wall, for some reason.

Oh. My stories.

Yeah... not really done this. Good idea though.

 

[gunhilltrain]

This may be a me thing, but I quite like the idea of characters going at it so hard that something breaks. The most obvious example relates to clothes, which are often "torn", "ripped" and "tossed aside" in the heat of the moment. In my stories, this can extend to jewellery, and I’m pretty sure the damage to bracelets and necklaces in my stories ads up to a six-figure sum. I’ve also snapped the spikes off high heels, ruined expensive silk sheets, poured luxury perfume over naked bodies, destroyed phones and broken tables (though I don’t believe I’ve made a bed collapse under the sheer weight of passion).

Am I the only one who thinks there’s something hot about this, and what’s the biggest/most expensive thing that broke or was destroyed during a sex scene in one of your stories?

Another new thing I've learned on Lit. Clothes I can imagine, say being ripped or even cut off. I think I've got one of those situations in a story. The other items you mentioned are all new to me. A six-figure sum! I don't know who you are hanging out with, but I doubt I've ever met a person who owned such expensive items.

 

[ScrappyPaperDoodler]

Another new thing I've learned on Lit. Clothes I can imagine, say being ripped or even cut off. I think I've got one of those situations in a story. The other items you mentioned are all new to me. A six-figure sum! I don't know who you are hanging out with, but I doubt I've ever met a person who owned such expensive items.

I think most who own them never wear them and certainly wouldn’t be too pleased if they somehow ended up in a thousand pieces because of some rough hanky panky. Yet, in the realm of fantasy, I think there’s something erotic to it (but that may just be me).

Now that I’ve said all that, I’m genuinely beginning to think I want to write an erotic story about an insurance assessor.

 

[Bramblethorn]

I think most who own them never wear them and certainly wouldn’t be too pleased if they somehow ended up in a thousand pieces because of some rough hanky panky. Yet, in the realm of fantasy, I think there’s something erotic to it (but that may just be me).

Now that I’ve said all that, I’m genuinely beginning to think I want to write an erotic story about an insurance assessor.

"We do not accept that the damage could have been done simply by vigorous sex, as indicated in your claim. One of our assessors will be visiting you to investigate further."

*dishevelled insurance assessor returns to office*

"In the light of new evidence, we have elected to honor your claim."

 

[gunhilltrain]

I think most who own them never wear them and certainly wouldn’t be too pleased if they somehow ended up in a thousand pieces because of some rough hanky panky. Yet, in the realm of fantasy, I think there’s something erotic to it (but that may just be me).

Now that I’ve said all that, I’m genuinely beginning to think I want to write an erotic story about an insurance assessor.

Probably most of us thought that our kinks were relatively rare, until we came to Lit and found up that they weren't!

 

[pink_silk_glove]

It's a standing joke among my friends. Kumquat 6, beds nil...
I swear two of them were broken before I got on them!

Time to buy a futon.

 

[alohadave]

Another new thing I've learned on Lit. Clothes I can imagine, say being ripped or even cut off. I think I've got one of those situations in a story. The other items you mentioned are all new to me. A six-figure sum! I don't know who you are hanging out with, but I doubt I've ever met a person who owned such expensive items.

I have panties being cut off in one I'm working on at the moment.

One thing that pulls me out of a story is ripping panties. Not like pulling it between your hands and breaking at a seam. No, pulling it away from the skin and tearing it, like a yanking motion. That is guaranteed to dig in and deeply bruise skin. When fabric bunches up, it's like trying to break a rope, and the thing holding that material is soft skin.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Time to buy a futon.

I invested in the cast iron bed after the futon frame died! Had a divan bed for years, now. Not so many attachment points, but sturdy...

 

[nice90sguy]

I call it "American 80's Movie Sex" -- Nothing sexy to me about smashing and tearing stuff -- it's just clumsy.

 

[AlinaX]

Those scenes where someone roughly clears a surface to make space for sex... always leave me feeling anxious.
Also, while buttons popping may be erotic, some of those clothes are gorgeous and really expensive. Maybe just take them off?

 

[RetroFan]

One of my amusing ones in my 'Trailer Trash Teen Hates Rules' story series was hardly a rare or expensive item - it was a condom - but it led to no end of trouble.

The problems began when the trashy trailer park girl Breanna was having a threesome with her cousin's loser metal-head friends, and they were doing double penetration. The dimmer of the two guys gets so overly excited at screwing Breanna up her ass that the condom splits as he reaches climax, and he ejaculates everywhere in Breanna's rectum. As Breanna is as quick to anger as a paper wasp, she isn't very happy about the situation to put it mildly ...

 

[gunhilltrain]

Those scenes where someone roughly clears a surface to make space for sex... always leave me feeling anxious.
Also, while buttons popping may be erotic, some of those clothes are gorgeous and really expensive. Maybe just take them off?

You might be referring to Jessica Lange clearing the kitchen table by sweeping the bread and flour off of it - the remake of The Postman Always Rings Twice. You would think she would say, "Excuse me, Frank, give me a moment to put my baking stuff away." A true gentleman would give her the sixty seconds or so that she needs for that.

P.S.: Hard to believe that Lange is now 74-years-old.

 

[gunhilltrain]

One of my amusing ones in my 'Trailer Trash Teen Hates Rules' story series was hardly a rare or expensive item - it was a condom - but it led to no end of trouble.

The problems began when the trashy trailer park girl Breanna was having a threesome with her cousin's loser metal-head friends, and they were doing double penetration. The dimmer of the two guys gets so overly excited at screwing Breanna up her ass that the condom splits as he reaches climax, and he ejaculates everywhere in Breanna's rectum. As Breanna is as quick to anger as a paper wasp, she isn't very happy about the situation to put it mildly ...

I wondered once what Breanna would be like at the age of forty or so. It's not a pretty picture in all senses of that phrase.

 

[yowser]

The only damage was to an innocence or two.

 

[djrip]

I have panties being cut off in one I'm working on at the moment.

One thing that pulls me out of a story is ripping panties. Not like pulling it between your hands and breaking at a seam. No, pulling it away from the skin and tearing it, like a yanking motion. That is guaranteed to dig in and deeply bruise skin. When fabric bunches up, it's like trying to break a rope, and the thing holding that material is soft skin.

I had a guy bite the seam of her yoga pants and tear out the crotch in one story. That counts right?

 

[PapaRomantic]

Busted hymen?

 

[gunhilltrain]

I had a guy bite the seam of her yoga pants and tear out the crotch in one story. That counts right?

I've read a short story - written by a woman - here the heroine cuts a hole in her tights so that her boyfriend can have sex with her through it. I believe it's somewhere in here.

https://www.amazon.com/Best-America...prefix=all+american+noir,stripbooks,97&sr=1-2

I guess I was impressed because it's set in Long Island City, Queens, in the 1980's. That's also where I also located one of my female characters during the previous decade.

 

[djrip]

I've read a short story - written by a woman - here the heroine cuts a hole in her tights so that her boyfriend can have sex with her through it. I believe it's somewhere in here.

https://www.amazon.com/Best-American-Noir-Century-®/dp/0547577443/ref=sr_1_2?crid=2JZHRMBVIN3U2&keywords=All+American+Noir&qid=1682700858&s=books&sprefix=all+american+noir,stripbooks,97&sr=1-2

I guess I was impressed because it's set in Long Island City, Queens, in the 1980's. That's also where I also located one of my female characters during the previous decade.

They did that kind of thing back in the 80's?!

 

[gunhilltrain]

They did that kind of thing back in the 80's?!

Do you mean ripping their tights or living in Long Island City? Anaïs Nin had something similar set in the 1940's, in which two sisters would cut slits in their panties so that their boyfriends could lick them through the hole. It was in a car, so I guess they didn't want to take them off - too cold maybe? I liked that it so much that I stole it for a couple of my stories. It's in the story "Two Sisters" (big surprise) in Little Birds. Personally, I have never encountered it.

As for Long Island City, there was still affordable housing in the city up until the early 1980's.