Cult of sexuality

[nushu2]

I've had this idea in my head for over a year now, but have not figured out a respectful way to write it.

Almost every religious cult I have heard about has rumours of sexual misconduct by the leaders. Waco, Moonies, etc. I heard about this one cult where sex between members and families was encouraged and expected.

Problem is that I consider those misled people as victims and have not been able to depict that in any other way. I keep thinking that it would be disrespectful to write an erotic story based on events of which there are living victims and relatives.

Maybe, one of you can figure out a way and use this idea for yourself.

 

[BlackSnake]

Who should fiction respect?

Fictional Cult of Sexuality. Good enough

The body is the temple to be worship and glorified.

Something like a nudist camp with an on going orgy.

 

[snooper]

Sounds historical to me, perhaps Roman. You know, temple prostitutes, worship of the penis (Pompeii) and so forth.

 

[BlackSnake]

Sounds historical to me, perhaps Roman. You know, temple prostitutes, worship of the penis (Pompeii) and so forth.

LOL!!!

What's that movie "Caligula" (sp)

 

[MsLinnet]

I've had this idea in my head for over a year now, but have not figured out a respectful way to write it.

Almost every religious cult I have heard about has rumours of sexual misconduct by the leaders. Waco, Moonies, etc. I heard about this one cult where sex between members and families was encouraged and expected.

Problem is that I consider those misled people as victims and have not been able to depict that in any other way. I keep thinking that it would be disrespectful to write an erotic story based on events of which there are living victims and relatives.

Maybe, one of you can figure out a way and use this idea for yourself.

How about this to stir the pot? A father and daughter are driving through the mid west on a road trip, they are trying to get away from the memories of the loss of his wife and her mother. They hear about a town that has left the modern multimedia world behind once they enter the town thy find themselves in a town that has forsaken the modern way of life for a simpler life style and are made to feel very welcome.

He is offered a job at the local garage that is more like a blacksmiths than a modern garage and soon they are settled into life in the town. The daughter who has just turned 18 makes friends with other girls all of which are in there 18th year.

As the summer solstice approaches the garage owner starts to make some strange looking stands that the farther doesn’t at first realise what they are for they are like stocks but are made so that the occupier if that’s what they where would be bent in half, later he adds straps to the base that where attached to a bar that would keep whatever was placed into them two feet apart on the day of the solstice all the 18 year olds were dressed in white summer dresses by the older women of the village and given there first alcoholic drink witch is laced to make them a bit more amenable, then taken to the barn and each placed in front of one of the stocks, each one is gently gagged has a hood placed over there heads and placed into the stocks with there legs firmly held apart by the straps.

There white dressed are pulled up uncovering there naked charms before the women allow the men of the village come and take there pleasures starting with the elders of the village then working down through the ages of man.

With stifled screams the girls are deflowered by any man that likes what they see not knowing if it is there daughter or a stranger.
Only after all the men have taken there pleasures are the girls unmasked hopefully to sire a new generation for the village.

The father is appalled at first by the sight but as he sees all the other men take there turn he forgets that one of these girls is his daughter and takes his pleasure.


hope this stirs some ones juices

Love Linnet

 

[GratefulFred]

How's this...

...have people blindfolded while having sex and though there's a suspicion, try not answering it fully. The payoff could be that the daughter is pregnant which ends in a miscarriage adding further fuel to the fire. If you can leave the reader with the ability to deduce what happened, and have the characters not sure, then you'll extract that emotional payoff we are all looking for.

Furthermore, go rent one of the best movies "Lone Star" for a bit of inspiration on how to put a creative spin on things.

I did a tale called "The Ultimate Blowjob" within my "Unwashed Shorts" collection, that also dealt with the subject of someone being blindfolded.

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=156407

Good fuck and may the G force be with you.

 

[MsLinnet]

do you mean making the sex in the barn the end of the story ?

 

[GratefulFred]

sex in the barn...

...or sex in the city...doesn't matter so long as theirs sex.

 

[MsLinnet]

how do you think things should go

 

[snooper]

Well, I've written one, so in a month or so (when it's posted) I'll let you know where.

 

[MsLinnet]

Well, I've written one, so in a month or so (when it's posted) I'll let you know where.

hi there Snooper I can not wait to read it

love always

 

[snooper]

hi there Snooper I can not wait to read it

love always

So read Village Life which, incidentally, went up in two days from submission!

 

[MsLinnet]

So read Village Life which, incidentally, went up in two days from submission!

Read and I loved it. What you have done with the idea is well worth a read, as was reading it i was thinking how it would be if I was one of the girls.

Love Linnet

 

[zephrbabe]

I also read the story; and I really liked it as well. I'm not usually one for the Taboo section, but this story managed to be interesting, and not too vulgar.

My only complaint is that there is so little sensation: the story is very dry, and could stand a revamp to make it more erotic.

-Kathryn

 

[nushu2]

Thanks snooper and MsLinnet

Its great to see this forum working.

 

[snooper]

... but this story managed to be interesting, and not too vulgar.

My only complaint is that there is so little sensation: the story is very dry, and could stand a revamp to make it more erotic.

"Interesting and not too vulgar" is what I was aiming for. I don't write stroke stories about sixteen inch throbbing pricks entering the deep swampy cavern already full of slimy white baby-making goo.

What I haven't mastered, and probably never will, is to combine this with not seeming "very dry". Please feel free to write the same story more erotically, perhaps from the POV of one of the women?