Bob Peale
angeli ribelli
- Joined
- Sep 4, 1999
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Congratulations on a wonderful series!
Crossing The Line, Ch. 1
and
Crossing The Line, Ch. 2
I think you did a great job of showing the main character's indecision and final capitulation. F/F sex can be very formulaic, but I like how you handled the whole thing. Will we be seeing more of Ally?
Crossing The Line, Ch. 1
and
Crossing The Line, Ch. 2
I think you did a great job of showing the main character's indecision and final capitulation. F/F sex can be very formulaic, but I like how you handled the whole thing. Will we be seeing more of Ally?
