Courtney & Jeremy

Added some threads today, and I'm experimenting with having a Second Person perspective of 'You' trying to get the two teens together! Tell me what you think?
 
Added some threads today, and I'm experimenting with having a Second Person perspective of 'You' trying to get the two teens together! Tell me what you think?

Link for the lazy:

Follow YOU trying to get Courtney and Jeremy together. Use {FIRST_NAME} and {LAST_NAME} for the main character, second person present tense.

-Z.
 
Another Thread!

My current plan is to keep going for now and describe the rest of the day, that being the Seminar and the Party, then the basic course of events are set for the rest of you to write for ( I mean I know people are reading...just no ones posting...you meanies! :D)
 
More threads that are going to be conforming with the Pleasure Yacht, basically how Courtney and Bridgett decide to share Jeremy.
 
Another pair of threads in that Trio line that will lead into A Pleasure Yacht.
 
A lot more threads added since I last posted in here :D Check and add! That's an order!...please?:eek:
 
New Writer in gunde! Woohoo! And a very excellent addition I might add...hell I did just add :D

This is it: He likes
 
Thanks for the good feedback. I'm trying to have Courtney fluctuate between being confident and assertive and being self-conscious and insecure.

So whizzper, can I expect you to add to it, or should I start writing the follow-up straight away? Keep in mind though that it's 3 AM over here, so it probably won't be up for oh twelve hours or so.
 
If you have a specific way he pleases her it's great. He has had cunnilingus lessons from Sharon.

I'd add right now, but I'm about to go to sleep. So I'll either add to your addition tomorrow, or add straight away to this one after I get home from work tomorrow.

And I definitely like the going back and for with insecure and confident. It definitely conveys her being strong, except when she's confused because of her proximity to Jeremy.

One thing to note, he is like two to three times her size. Large all around.
 
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