Copy Editor Needed - Incest

[mrfluffer]

Greetings,
I have a series dealing with incest and slavery. They are getting good feedback, but I know it could be better. I could be better if I had some guidance.
I am looking for a copy editor to help:

- Guide me to improve my writing skills.

- Smooth out grammatical errors.

- Spice up my writing.

- Suggest plot twists/character development.

- etc.

I always read through my stories several times to get them as sex-filled and mature as possible before submitting them for publishing.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Stories here

 

[julian_200027]

i would love to help you

 

[piperray]

Greetings,
I have a series dealing with incest and slavery. They are getting good feedback, but I know it could be better. I could be better if I had some guidance.
I am looking for a copy editor to help:

- Guide me to improve my writing skills.

- Smooth out grammatical errors.

- Spice up my writing.

- Suggest plot twists/character development.

- etc.

I always read through my stories several times to get them as sex-filled and mature as possible before submitting them for publishing.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Stories here

I would love to help you! Incest is one of my specialties. I’m getting a master’s degree in writing, so I think I could be of some help.

 

[NC_Coastal]

Fluffer, you have a pretty good command of the language and fairly smooth style that doesn't come off as jerky or strained. However, you've bitten off a huge bite here trying to combine incest, age-play and slavery with death and a funeral as the backdrop. If this had played out at a family reunion or a family vacation, looking ahead to a pending death or something like that, it would be less jarring and more plausible.
When writing erotica, plausibllity is the key. You have to believe what you're reading is possible.
Just my opinion.

 

[mrfluffer]

Thank you. I would love your input. Love advice from a real person who lived it. When I have it in better form, I will send you part 4.