daughter Dreamer Joined Oct 22, 2001 Posts 1,561 Oct 24, 2001 #1 Hope-- Like your poem. Nice cadence. Some sensual images and descriptions. Refrains are cool, though I think I par just a bit. Too many wanes the effectiveness of the device. Thanks for the read. Peace, daughter
Hope-- Like your poem. Nice cadence. Some sensual images and descriptions. Refrains are cool, though I think I par just a bit. Too many wanes the effectiveness of the device. Thanks for the read. Peace, daughter
