Congrats Paul C!!!

KatPurrs

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Your poem "Pushada" is currently #1 and another of your poems, "Scenes From A Nursing Home Part 1" is #3. Good for you! (The latter was just #2 a minute ago.)

They're "jolly good"!!!!

Kat~
 
I'll second that.

"Pushada" is, frankly, not my cup of tea. But "Scenes from a Nursing Home, 1" is really beautiful. Congrats.
 
Risia...I know......

"Pushada" is more a "guy thing" for sure, whereas "Scenes From A Nursing Home Part 1" is sooooo sensitive, and poignant. It really touched me.

Stand by......more parts are ready to be, or perhaps already are, posted in the series. I was very flattered when Paul C invited me to collaborate with him on one of them.

And Risia, because I'm post-menopausal and have back-to-back "senior moments" these days and may have neglected to say this...thanks so much for giving me all the wonderful feedback on my story-to-be-someday. I am so appreciative of the time it must have taken you to do that for me! You were justifiably brutal... just like I asked you to be. And LOL about the illogical part about the cum on the knee thing!! You're the best!:)
 
KatPurrs

I hope I wasn't too brutal I was sincerely trying to be constructive. I hope the story turns out great for you. I'm not out to discourage anyone who's honestly working, you know?

And by the way, you're welcome. ;)
 
Not to worry Risia......

All points were well taken. Truly! I never considered it anything but "constructive". And, let's face it, my opening sentence ranked right up there with, "It was a dark and stormy night..." :eek: Why,if they ever have another contest for the world's worst opening line of a story, that one has a good crack at winning first place! My 15 minutes of fame, at last! LOL

Right now, I've decided to just stick with poetry. I had no idea where the story was going anyway. Having no plan can't be a good idea.:confused:

I'll get back to it some day. And when I do, I'll have your suggestions which I printed out in my hot little hand for reference. Thanks again!



Kat~:)
 
Katpurrs & Risiaskye

Damn....I love it when the two of you get going together...sure conjurs up some interesting thoughts........:)


Hmmmm

Roses are red........(hang on)
Violets are blue........(almost there now)
I wish that I were...........(getting closer)
Inside both of you.........(ok...so it wasn't that good)

But damn.....what an interesting threesome.





I remain...........
 
Sandman

Yeeee Doggie! Is it HOT in here or is it just me and my hot flashes again?

Sandman, I loved your poem ;)

And you have no fucking idea.....does he Risia...work with me here, girlfriend.....
:p :p :p

And btw, what happened to that beautiful shot of you, naked, with the blue sky and full moon in the background....speaking of hot.

Kat~
 
??????

Ok...you just sent me into the twilight zone here kiddo........isn't that the picture next to my name here?

Or am I the only one seeing this?

lol........:)
 
Re: Sandman

KatPurrs said:

And you have no fucking idea.....does he Risia..


She's right, sandman. You have no idea.

BTW, "Dreams for the Sandman" is in rewrites and should go up in a week or so. ~Shhh, it's a secret~
 
Where's the Picture????

I don't get it. I don't see a picture. hmmmmm
It must be on my end if everyone else is seeing it. I wonder if I accidentally shut something off or some such thing. Any ideas out there? I did notice that my HTML option says "off". Would that do it and how do I change it? Any ideas?

Is everyone seeing his picture? :confused:
I feel so deprived!


KatPurrs
 
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