Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

In essence, the matter is quite straightforward. You wouldn't take the trouble to share if it didn't resonate with you on some level.

It's not me writing about burying a knife in my wife or hating all women. I've written bitches, but my stories also include a lot of great women.

The correct title is "sociopaths," not "psychopath," but it appears that you may not be aware of the distinction. "Sociopaths" is the brainchild of a group of five writers who came together in a private thread on this forum. However, it seems that you are unable to appreciate the power of creative writing even when it hits you in the face.

Sorry, with you Incels, it's hard to keep all your psychological "paths" straight. And who says I didn't appreciate your stories? I thought Incel was well written despite the blatant ripoffs of devices from my Fido story. But then you say you don't read me. Your desperate and sad emotional upbringing came through clearly. Even your user name "willtolive" shows your desire to overcome your childhood. Writing can be cathartic. Hopefully, it'll draw you away from your hatred of women and allow you to discover the joy of being able to relate to a wonderful woman.

Last warning: This thread was started because I was sick and tired of people posting negative comments from their Loving Wives stories. They were generating a thread a week where everybody commiserated with them. It's intended to be a positive thread, not the place for you to work your angst out.

There is a thread moderator that locks threads when they start to head in the wrong direction. This thread is headed for a 1000 posts, and there are going to be a lot of people that use or read it pissed at you if you get it locked.

 

[gordo12]

Back to our regularly scheduled programming!

Nice comment on Cheatify The Bastard: I posted before that a reader had hit the % sign rather than 5*. He came back today and confirmed that, adding a nice comment.

It is a great Story, Great Writing. LOL, what a Super Burn on the wife's lover! LOL really got torn up by his wife too! LOL yes, I must have been in a hurry last time. 5 stars for a Great Story! What an imagination. So Funny! Thanks

 

[gordo12]

If you were to make the effort to investigate, you would discover that incels are predominantly younger individuals, with a considerable number being in their teenage years or early twenties.
In contrast, the majority of readers in LW are middle-aged or retired. Referring to them as incels is not only insulting but also reflects poorly on the speaker.

While it is true that some readers in LW may not exhibit exemplary behavior, even the least intelligent among them is more intellectually sound than the majority of self-centered narcissists on this platform.

Ripoffs?! A nice but futile attempt. I have no interest in reading your content. I only steal from the dead (Jack London in Incel's case).

It is contradictory to speak of positivity when your words convey the opposite. If you genuinely desire a positive discussion, refrain from provoking others and avoid seeking the last word.

In keeping with the thread's theme, I present my positive contribution towards the coveted goal of one thousand posts.

So you've been here a month and already know everything about LW with two stories. My 5 years, 14 stories and close to 1300 comments in LW bows to your superior knowledge.

You also left out two comments on Incel

Do I detect a note of anger there?

(NOT all females are horrible bitches.)

If you want a positive discussion, avoid that nasty first word. You started it!

 

[NoTalentHack]

From “You Could Have Stayed”:

Chuckles McSunshine strikes again. Damn you, this is not the kind of three tissue experience I come to this site for! 5

 

[shakna]

Well... Um... Instead of the depressing above, I got something simple and nice today:

An excellent story with a nice buildup. Thank you!

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Recently got about my third email ever from a reader:
"OMFG! I have just read the evening at the pub story. You have been recommended by another Lit author, [redacted] and wow! I read it before work and I've had to go and lose my knickers as they were so wet! [more detail of enthusiasm] I loved it.
Thank you so much"

Someone actually recommended one of my stories to someone else!!!

 

[MrPixel]

I've mentioned that writing in Group Sex is not conducive to commenting. However, my 750-word entries in Mature are generating a few. These two from a 750 story that went live yesterday make my heart sing:

Quality story. A bit too much of wishful thinking, but - hey - a believable seduction is not something that happens in 750 words. The story successfully avoids many cliches. The story environment and characters feel alive. Good work.

Beautifully done. Especially in only 750 words!

Wow. Thank you. Thank you, very much.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments this morning, both on Wheelchair Girl:

I hope you write more Romances.

Great story 5+ stars

 

[MelissaBaby]

The entirety on an anonymous comment on My Fall and Rise, Chapter 13

Trailer park trash

Now, I've lived in some real shitholes in my time, but I have never lived in a trailer park.

 

[Voboy]

The entirety on an anonymous comment on My Fall and Rise, Chapter 13



Now, I've lived in some real shitholes in my time, but I have never lived in a trailer park.

One of my uncles lived in a trailer park for many years. It was a great place to visit. I remember all his neighbors were very warm; it was a real community.

 

[NoTalentHack]

One I missed from “Shouldering the Burden” when I posted it:

Oh, NoTalentHack, you've done something truly special here. The very definition of Love As a verb. Bless you for this.

 

[NoTalentHack]

From “You Could Have Stayed”:

Fantastic. Innovate plot device, adult discussions, and a hopeful outcome. A unicorn of a LW story.

 

[SyleusSnow]

This was left as a story comment last week. Brightened up my day for sure:

You are a great story teller. Thank you for the time and effort you take in writing meaningful stories.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

This comment on my latest story, Forever Valentine, put a smile on my face.

"Slow burn", twisting and turning the plot all the way up to a boil! I enjoyed the exploration of each of the characters, and, as always, the evolution of the affair of the heart, its foibles, failings, and its blossoming. So enjoy everything you share with us! 5*

 

[gordo12]

From “You Could Have Stayed”:

a cool RAAC story, my favourite kind. And you hardly got flamed over it. In LW, that's an accomplishment in its own right!

 

[Djmac1031]

Nice waking up to find I've got a new Jenna fan.

All their comments have been very nice. I hope they enjoy the rest of the series.

 

[Djmac1031]

The Jenna love fest continues.

I know long running series tend to lose readers over time, so it's especially nice when you pick up a new reader who's obviously invested in the story. Makes it worthwhile to keep going.

 

[onehitwanda]

A new one on Autumn.

Please, all LW British authors, come together, and in a group, resolve to never again write about mouth curls, lip curls, and the like. It make my brain curdle to read those descriptions. A mouth can have a smile. It doesn't need to "curl" into a smile, or, God forbid, a sneer or other mouth action. After you've all come to that agreement, swear on your King's crown, that you will somehow drop the term, "gusset" from your vocabularies. What a mood killer that word is.

To which my response, once I'm done laughing, is kind of along the lines of:

https://media.tenor.com/2uIL48WK_u4AAAAC/nathan-fillion-oh.gif

I love being lectured on the vernacular by someone who misuses commas in the manner above.

 

[ElectricBlue]

A happy reader:

What is actually very brave is the way you leave the reader both in the middle and on the edge of some completely magnificent sex. My experience as a lover of edging was exquisite - and I found I woke up in the middle of the night and consummated the story with myself in a totally mindblowing all-over-the-body way.

Job done!

 

[Djmac1031]

Got this comment awhile ago via email feedback. It's awesome to think I helped inspire a couple to maybe explore a few kinks together. Also, rediscovering this message, I think it may have subliminally inspired another story I published recently, Mya Watches.

So I suppose we were both mutually inspired.

"This feedback was sent by: (redacted for privacy)

Comments:

I typically wake up early and spend some alone time reading or writing (I have read most of your stories). One such morning, my wife walked in on me. She later said she was sorry that she interrupted me. I told he that I would prefer not to be secretive, telling her that I would rather have her watch me. She actually encouraged me so I stripped down and sat next to her with a towel on the couch. By the time I finished, I was standing in front of her as she brought herself to orgasm under the towel as I blasted all over it. That being said, she doesn't typically like talking about sex or reading stories. However last night, we were having a few beers and I had my computer out for another reason. I told her that I would like to read her a story. She was less than amused but finally conceded. I read Jenna 01 to her. As she listened she broke out in laughter several times. She said that it was a cute story and very well written, I agree. Thanks for planting the idea of expanding our comfort zone. She suggested that I let you know how much we enjoyed that story. Best wishes to you. Super_Six."

 

[NoTalentHack]

I got this one on "You Could Have Stayed," and I loved it, but it also kind of broke my heart a little:

Who is ever ready for marriage and then who is ever ready for divorce? Feelings, love, hate, anger questions no one can answer, no one to ask. You're 80 years old and still trying to figure out where did you go wrong 40 years ago. At first you blame the other person and say I did no wrong and then you say to your self maybe I was to selfish or what did I do to fail in that relationship. No, it's all the ex's fault, she's the one that cheated, she's the one that destroyed the family so she could go out and find someone else. She's the one that destroyed your relationship with the kids. Yeah that makes sense but sure doesn't solve anything. This was not a good story and I can't say I loved but it got 5 stars because it's true to life except for the reconciliation, except in my case.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

It's always nice when I reader contradicts another reader's negative comment with a nice one.

This was a comment on my latest, "Got To Get Home" for the 750 word project:

Really anon. boring? nothing romantic? a) he's eager to get home to her b) she has taken time to get herself ready for him c) they are having a baby they have wanted for so long. Romance isn't all about chocolates and flowers, it's the need to be together, to share, to celebrate being home and creating a new life. All that in a mere 740 words is pretty damn remarkable 5 stars

 

[shakna]

Great story and as much as I’m wanting a continuation I’m willing to wait till you’re all good. Take care and when all is well keep ‘em coming because you’re a great writer

Little bit of light, in everything that's happening.

 

[gaytimestop]

“this story made me cum”

I do love the wordier comments but really, what more could I hope to hear?

 

[Rustyoznail]

I've had nine comments on one of my 750 word stories. All up, they're nearly more words than the story!

The shortest, but which summarises them all...