Comments That Make Your Day

[Bubo_bubo]

'Felch' sounds like a Dunmer insult. ("You felching n'wah")

 

[BiscuitHammer]

'Felch' sounds like a Dunmer insult. ("You felching n'wah")

Still better than being called a milk-drinker by a Nord, I imagine...

 

[lovecraft68]

I think this is the public comment from the poster who sent me a private feedback saying I'm the "OG" of Mother Son stories.

And my parents thought my obsession with porn was a bad thing.

49WIZARD88about 1 hour ago
The mom/son genre had fallen off in the last couple of years. Only a small handful of good stories in the genre. And this is one of them. Leave it to LoveCraft68 to show these authors how it's done

 

[Lovecraft_Lore]

"Evan considering the amateur status of the author, this pegged the plausibility meter at zero. Apart from the Latin, a middle school student would be embarrassed to write dreck like this."

"HP Lovecraft doesn't deserve the disservice you do them with your pseudonym associated with the horrible "writing" you pawn off on us."

"REAL WASTE OF TIME, DUMBEST SHIT I EVER READ ONE STAR" & "NEGATIVE FIVE STARS FOR BEING A GAY MALE STORY NOT A INCEST STORY AT ALL"

It is the great comments like this that make it all worth while. I'll never be as great as Samuelx, who is in a league of his own His stuff is just over the top. https://www.literotica.com/s/why-black-men-prefer-white-women

 

[shakna]

Still better than being called a milk-drinker by a Nord, I imagine...

Who cares what a bunch of backends to the Empire who can't even handle their own hags think? They wouldn't last one day in Hammerfell. They'd become as magnificent as Mariah.

 

[ElectricBlue]

It is the great comments like this that make it all worth while. I'll never be as great as Samuelx, who is in a league of his own His stuff is just over the top. https://www.literotica.com/s/why-black-men-prefer-white-women

My god, that's dedication to a cause! 3600 + short stories and not a single Red H, from what I could see! That's performance art and chutzpah, right there. Where do you even start?!

 

[lovecraft68]

"Evan considering the amateur status of the author, this pegged the plausibility meter at zero. Apart from the Latin, a middle school student would be embarrassed to write dreck like this."

"HP Lovecraft doesn't deserve the disservice you do them with your pseudonym associated with the horrible "writing" you pawn off on us."

"REAL WASTE OF TIME, DUMBEST SHIT I EVER READ ONE STAR" & "NEGATIVE FIVE STARS FOR BEING A GAY MALE STORY NOT A INCEST STORY AT ALL"

It is the great comments like this that make it all worth while. I'll never be as great as Samuelx, who is in a league of his own His stuff is just over the top. https://www.literotica.com/s/why-black-men-prefer-white-women

When referencing my pen name I have gotten "He was a racist, you must be one too."

Which segues into your example because although I appreciate Mr X for being the ultimate example of writing with zero fucks given as far as score or comments feedback goes, truth is, he is the epitome of a racist and proof its not limited to one race. Having said that, I support free speech, even if its not my speech and I don't have to agree or read it, so more power to him.

 

[Bubo_bubo]

When referencing my pen name I have gotten "He was a racist, you must be one too."

Just for the record. I don't eat mice, rats and rabbits raw after I catch them in my claws.

 

[lovecraft68]

Just for the record. I don't eat mice, rats and rabbits raw after I catch them in my claws.

No? But yet you chose that name....I'm confused.

One person gave me the racist line, and I pointed out their favorite football player, who they proudly wear the jersey of, was arrested for sexual assault, so therefore he must be a rapist.

They haven't brought the topic up again.

 

[BiscuitHammer]

Here I just figured you loved his existential cosmic horror writing with that pen name...

 

[Bubo_bubo]

Here I just figured you loved his existential cosmic horror writing with that pen name...

OTOH Lovecraft is actually pretty good name for someone writing erotic fiction.
"Lovecraft is my name, and Lovecraft is my game." Bow-chicka-wow.

 

[MillieDynamite]

My last four stories have only 11 comments between them. To be fair to me, two were published this week, one was this morning, and all four are less than two weeks old. But the votes aren't what I expected, and the hearts are okay on the first two. I'm not used to having stories not reaching a 4, though. Well, outside of the LWs or cuckolding.

 

[Lovecraft_Lore]

OTOH Lovecraft is actually pretty good name for someone writing erotic fiction.
"Lovecraft is my name, and Lovecraft is my game." Bow-chicka-wow.

Lovecraft is the best name for writing erotic fiction. I was surprised there was not at least one person using it to write Hentai tentacle smut.

When referencing my pen name I have gotten "He was a racist, you must be one too."

Which segues into your example because although I appreciate Mr X for being the ultimate example of writing with zero fucks given as far as score or comments feedback goes, truth is, he is the epitome of a racist and proof its not limited to one race. Having said that, I support free speech, even if its not my speech and I don't have to agree or read it, so more power to him.

It is not like you picked a name like A_Hitler_68 or something.

 

[MillieDynamite]

It is not like you picked a name like A_Hitler_68 or something.

Reminds me of Hill Street Blues, which I binged long-distance with my pops a few months back, and Vic Hitler the narcoleptic comic... He didn't want to change his name because his family had had the name as long as the other guy.

 

[MillieDynamite]

So I guess I received this yesterday when I was in transit or after I last checked the site when I got here. The comment was on my newest story, which posted in the wee hours yesterday morning, From a View to a Thrill, which has 750 words in the text of the body of the story.

I read the story and enjoyed it a great deal. I wanted there to be more of this tale. Totally guessing here, but I think the text is less than a thousand words, so I'm assuming you wrote for some challenge. If it was, you probably should have included that before the story began. For such a brief tale, it was highly stimulating but left me randy and in need. If your goal was to leave me wanting more, job well done. Next time you have one so, very short, please tell us why.

 

[Bubo_bubo]

So I guess I received this yesterday when I was in transit or after I last checked the site when I got here. The comment was on my newest story, which posted in the wee hours yesterday morning, From a View to a Thrill, which has 750 words in the text of the body of the story.

You're a very edgy writer!

 

[MillieDynamite]

You're a very edgy writer!

Yeah, didn't intend to do that to anyone. I had cut out a couple of paragraphs to make the word count exactly 750 words. I actually enjoyed the challenge of writing one that short that told any kind of story. There are a couple of other nice comments on the story.

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment on April Fool - No Longer

No doubt: 5*

 

[shakna]

Enjoyed this one Shakna. Not understanding the hate.
Hope you find the god causing your headaches and kick them in the nether regions.

On "My Sister's a Ghost!", which may also involve a god getting kicked in the nether regions.

 

[TadOverdon]

This message contains feedback for: TadOverdon
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Twenty years of pestilential crap spread by two disturbed human excuses.
Nonetheless something positive to be mentioned. You’re totally talent free and that’s good. Nothing against infantilism and wanna make believe, try to bottle the quintessence of your scribbling and sell as sleeping pills…

Pretty sure I had a better day today than Anonymous.

There's a good chance I'm having a better life.

It's surprising that, as much as Anonymous writes in the way of criticism, they haven't acquired any particular writing skill or originality of expression.

I liked their early stuff for The Pearl better.

 

[BiscuitHammer]

Pretty sure I had a better day today than Anonymous.

There's a good chance I'm having a better life.

It's surprising that, as much as Anonymous writes in the way of criticism, they haven't acquired any particular writing skill or originality of expression.

I liked their early stuff for The Pearl better.

I've had a few like that. Might be the same person, based on tone and writing style. The self-hatred they're clearly left boiling in manifests as the need to anonymously hurt.

Not all anonymous commenters are cowards, but all cowards comment anonymously.

Just be glad that you touched something deep inside them that they recoiled from because they came up short in the exposure. Good stories do that to corrupted souls.

 

[Emotional]

I sent my new story getting published tomorrow to my mentor and here is what he sent back.

Carry on like this and you will become a renowned writer. I have difficulty in believing the difference between your first story and this one. It is astonishing! The narrative flows beautifully. Perfect? No. Good? No. Its brilliant! I love the story line.

 

[shakna]

Pretty sure I had a better day today than Anonymous.

There's a good chance I'm having a better life.

It's surprising that, as much as Anonymous writes in the way of criticism, they haven't acquired any particular writing skill or originality of expression.

I liked their early stuff for The Pearl better.

It's always kinda sad to see, when someone's own self-revulsion at what they just enjoyed makes them speak out in this way. Your anon's really burning, because they just can't accept that they liked the little fantasy you handed to them. Ain't like fantasy is reality.

 

[amenarimix]

Story: https://literotica.com/s/sissy-prince-pt-03

Comment: please Chapter 4 this is another cliffhanger that needs to be picked up!

 

[amenarimix]

Story: https://literotica.com/s/honeymoon-cuckold-pt-01

Comment:
My wife and I enjoyed this story tremendously – good job! It was so hot that Luna gave her husband’s little dick the pet name of “Little Friend”. My wife named my penis ‘3 x 2’ which means three inches long and as thick as two pencils strapped together. Needless to say, I have never been able to make her cum with that dicklet. However, I am a great pussy eater!

Having the strong, athletic, black man serve them drinks in bed on their honeymoon was splendid. You wrote, “I couldn't help but notice the enormous black cock that swung between his legs. It went halfway down his thigh and was as thick as my wrist. He then stood on the right side of me and I was at eye level with his big black cock. It was truly enormous.”

OMG! That was hot for the hubby to see that at eye level - just a few inches from his face. Both my wife and I unconsciously licked our lips and swallowed as we read that. Yummy, yummy. My wife has trained me to suck the big black cocks that she fucks. It is her way of showing me who is the real man!

Then you wrote, “He leaned in close, and the smell of his balls kept dominating my mind. I inhaled it more unconsciously. It was very musky and heavy.”

Again, OMG, that was sexy. All of my wife’s lovers have been black. I remember her first lover came over once, right after he had been playing basketball, and he was very sweaty My wife and I were naked and sitting on a low sofa. He stripped and stood right in front of us. His musky smell was intoxicating, and I got an erection.

When she saw my erection, she gently pushed me off the couch so, that I was in a kneeling position. Then, she pushed my face right into his crotch and had me breathe deeply for several minutes. My penis started quivering with desire.

Then, she quickly painted my lips with bright, red lipstick and dusted my cheeks with some bright pink rouge powder. Then, she knelt beside me and began training me to suck real cock and lick huge balls. I started begging him to cum for me, and he did – he shot a heavy load of cum all over my face.

Then, he spent the rest of the night making my wife cum on his thick, 10-inch, long cock. She was ovulating and very fertile. So, he knocked her up with our first child. The next day my wife placed my hand on her tummy and said, “I can feel it. I can feel that his sperm has mated with my egg. There is a shift inside me, and I’m sure he made me pregnant.”

Again, we loved your story and look forward to additional chapters!


My thoughts: The story was published in Loving Wives, and this is my first story in that category. After lots of hate comments, I got that story in my comment section. I think it's even hotter than my story. LoL.