Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[Aurora Black]

You both are welcome. It's fun being back. Aurora snuck up on me and asked me to take her spot because, Lucky and talented girl, of the publishing. Good luck Rora...

Thank you for taking the pressure off.

 

[Guest]

Thank you for taking the pressure off.

Anything I can do, you know I'm willing to help. Just remember us little people when you're doing book signings and being limoed everywhere...sigh, such a rough life, sipping champagne and eating cavier on toast points.

 

[Aurora Black]

Anything I can do, you know I'm willing to help. Just remember us little people when you're doing book signings and being limoed everywhere...sigh, such a rough life, sipping champagne and eating cavier on toast points.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I will try and do reviews this evening - No promises though. Right now I just got up with a migraine. This afternoon I have to be at the In-laws. - - so this evening I'll try to do the reviews. My apologies for anyone waiting on me to get my ass in gear.

 

[Guest]

Sir Hugs...you just got sent a huge hug and a kiss for that wonderful review. I think that's about the nicest thing that's been said about my writing. Thank you so much. It was nice to see when I got online this afternoon with all the crap I've been having getting my computer to work. My darling kid sister messed with the wires and now I can't get my computer to connect. It's down right annoying.

Thanks again,

 

[amasterfound]

I need someone to take over my part tomorrow in the reviews. I will be out of town most of the day. Thanks!

 

[sirhugs]

Sir Hugs...you just got sent a huge hug and a kiss for that wonderful review. I think that's about the nicest thing that's been said about my writing. Thank you so much. It was nice to see when I got online this afternoon with all the crap I've been having getting my computer to work. My darling kid sister messed with the wires and now I can't get my computer to connect. It's down right annoying.

Thanks again,

you are most welcome. Just calling them as I saw them. Thopugh I did not sample all the many stories, I sampled most, and found none held my attention like yours. Even though I was in amood fpor smut and enjoyed a few of those sort, they did not compell me to read more. Yours did.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I need someone to take over my part tomorrow in the reviews. I will be out of town most of the day. Thanks!

I will try and do some for you, since I missed yesterday. No promises on how many, because I have a lot on my plate as these last few days finish up for me. We are celebrating my daughter's birthday early since I won't be here for it on the day of her birthday. But off and on today as much as I can I'll read a bit of porn.

 

[Guest]

I will try and do some for you, since I missed yesterday. No promises on how many, because I have a lot on my plate as these last few days finish up for me. We are celebrating my daughter's birthday early since I won't be here for it on the day of her birthday. But off and on today as much as I can I'll read a bit of porn.

Glad you're feeling better even if you are running today, Red. btw, since I'm having problems with my computer, I submitted ch 11 of Laresa after doing some major editing on it.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Glad you're feeling better even if you are running today, Red.

Thanks. I am running and getting anxious and just want this week over. I hope you are having a good weekend.

 

[Guest]

Thanks. I am running and getting anxious and just want this week over. I hope you are having a good weekend.

long and lousy...lol.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

long and lousy...lol.

Oh that isn't good. Well toss me a PM and maybe some ranting will make it better.

 

[Guest]

Oh that isn't good. Well toss me a PM and maybe some ranting will make it better.

Actually, I'm off to my mom's. I bought her a new printer yesterday for her computer and I have to go install it. Climbing under desks isn't really what I want to do for a Sunday, but... At least this way I can reclaim a little of my wonderful daughter status.

I'll pm you later, have fun with your daughter and her party and don't stress over this last week too much, you'll be wonderful.

btw, did you see the thing about Laresa?

 

[sirhugs]

Actually, I'm off to my mom's. I bought her a new printer yesterday for her computer and I have to go install it. Climbing under desks isn't really what I want to do for a Sunday, but... At least this way I can reclaim a little of my wonderful daughter status.

I'll pm you later, have fun with your daughter and her party and don't stress over this last week too much, you'll be wonderful.

btw, did you see the thing about Laresa?

just think what fantasies you just spawned by sharing the idea of you under a desk

 

[Darkniciad]

Actually, I'm off to my mom's. I bought her a new printer yesterday for her computer and I have to go install it. Climbing under desks isn't really what I want to do for a Sunday, but... At least this way I can reclaim a little of my wonderful daughter status.

I'll pm you later, have fun with your daughter and her party and don't stress over this last week too much, you'll be wonderful.

btw, did you see the thing about Laresa?

Feel free to blow off steam in my direction too. I sent you the new draft of the next LST3K to look over too, so maybe that can give you a giggle.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Actually, I'm off to my mom's. I bought her a new printer yesterday for her computer and I have to go install it. Climbing under desks isn't really what I want to do for a Sunday, but... At least this way I can reclaim a little of my wonderful daughter status.

I'll pm you later, have fun with your daughter and her party and don't stress over this last week too much, you'll be wonderful.

btw, did you see the thing about Laresa?

I understand about crawling under desks! I had to leave and fix up the house and make lunch for the family coming over for my daughter's cake.

I haven't heard anything about Laresa?????

 

[LadyCibelle]

Thanks Red and SirHugs for doing reviews today. It's my turn to have a migraine today so I wouldn't do any good.

thanks again and again to both of you.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks Red and SirHugs for doing reviews today. It's my turn to have a migraine today so I wouldn't do any good.

thanks again and again to both of you.

I'm sorry you aren't feeling good. No worries. I'll do some off and on. Been a busy morning for me. You just get better and relax.

 

[Darkniciad]

I understand about crawling under desks! I had to leave and fix up the house and make lunch for the family coming over for my daughter's cake.

I haven't heard anything about Laresa?????

She just mentioned that she submitted chapter 11 in the first post, so you can put her down as having hers in the queue in the Laresa thread.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

She just mentioned that she submitted chapter 11 in the first post, so you can put her down as having hers in the queue in the Laresa thread.

Yeppers. Got that now. Thanks.

 

[amasterfound]

Thanks all. We had a good time today got back late this afternoon and I took it easy as I had a slight headache when I got back.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks all. We had a good time today got back late this afternoon and I took it easy as I had a slight headache when I got back.

Hope the headache is gone. Welcome back.

 

[deathlynx]

Gifting Night
deathlynx

As my blast from the past story...it's not that far in the past but it's one of the halloween contest entries that I really enjoyed. Deathlynx takes the vampire legend one further with his own ideas and really makes it an enjoyable romp, while still leaving you wanting more. I was in love from the beginning and waiting to see with baited breath if she would find what she wanted. It's a hot read, intensely sexual with dark and serious overtones that I found creepy and chilling, especially at the very end when you're left to wonder what finally happens. I loved this story and gave it a five before. I wish I could give it another one. Wonderful entry into the contest.

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!
I was really surprised by this story on so many levels...I went into this piece expecting a simple stroke piece with a slight twist..I hoped to write a story that would get enough votes to qualify (whether they were good votes or not ) and realized that group sex and nonhuman stories got me the most reads and votes...Well, the "slight twist" ended up changing the theme of the story as I wrote it...

Aslo I was incredibly surprised by the response to the piece...So many people have asked what happens next that I've felt obliged to write more chapters...I have two more fully written and should finish the fourth tonight...Also I already have plans for at least two more chapters after those...Apparently there is a novel in this just waiting to come out...I hope everyone likes it!

 

[Guest]

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!
I was really surprised by this story on so many levels...I went into this piece expecting a simple stroke piece with a slight twist..I hoped to write a story that would get enough votes to qualify (whether they were good votes or not ) and realized that group sex and nonhuman stories got me the most reads and votes...Well, the "slight twist" ended up changing the theme of the story as I wrote it...

Aslo I was incredibly surprised by the response to the piece...So many people have asked what happens next that I've felt obliged to write more chapters...I have two more fully written and should finish the fourth tonight...Also I already have plans for at least two more chapters after those...Apparently there is a novel in this just waiting to come out...I hope everyone likes it!

when do we get to read it? huh? huh???

 

[deathlynx]

when do we get to read it? huh? huh???

Should be soon...I'm going to be keeping an open discussion in my invisible little thread here...