Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[rachlou]

Dangerous Liaison by rachlou
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=272424

Category: Loving Wives

Review:

Not bad as cheating wife stories go. Yeah, I generally don't read them, but now and then the description intrigues me or I know and like the author. When you read it long enough, you can get past the infidelity and enjoy writing a short, but sexy smut piece. I give it a 5, because they aren't enough notable mistakes or problems to override the sensuality of this beach fuck. It is very well done. I don't know why this author has supposedly done poorly in the past, but she has at least one new fan: me.

SEVERUSMAX,

Thanks for giving my story a mention on here, plus a good rating! Been kinda controversial this one!! lol

Rach

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Good morning. . there are only 5 stories out right now. . .So I'm going to wait for the full list later today.

Selena.... got a question for ya. Since you started this thread do you think we could get the title changed to perhaps... Comments/Suggestions for the New Story Review Thread (or something like this) ? You'd have to PM our lovely Lit Goddess, but I think it would be a good thing.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Good morning. . there are only 5 stories out right now. . .So I'm going to wait for the full list later today.

Selena.... got a question for ya. Since you started this thread do you think we could get the title changed to perhaps... Comments/Suggestions for the New Story Review Thread (or something like this) ? You'd have to PM our lovely Lit Goddess, but I think it would be a good thing.

Will do!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Will do!

Awww... thanks. That was easy... let's try...

Selena, since you are such a great lady do you think you could loan me a cool mil. there are a few things I'd like to fix up on my lovely home. . .like buy one and not rent.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Awww... thanks. That was easy... let's try...

Selena, since you are such a great lady do you think you could loan me a cool mil. there are a few things I'd like to fix up on my lovely home. . .like buy one and not rent.

If I had a million, Red, I would share it with you!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

If I had a million, Red, I would share it with you!

Wow... The new title looks great. Thanks Selena and our Lit Goddess *bows*

Okay... if I get a mil. I'll give you some. (I won $10.00 in the Lottery yesterday)

 

[Aurora Black]

Love the new title.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

SEVERUSMAX,

Thanks for giving my story a mention on here, plus a good rating! Been kinda controversial this one!! lol

Rach

Yeah, that's the usual LW crowd. Of course, I seldom write in that genre, for a variety of reasons. Somehow, the husband is supposedly a wimp, even when he doesn't know about being cuckolded. Go figure. Even swinging is treated that way. There are some people who don't like "slut" wives under ANY circumstances. Welcome to Lit. Chin up, kid. You wrote a sexy story and it was just fiction. Don't let the trolls get you down. You have potential.

 

[Guest]

Wow, that was a surprise to see on the hangout, the new title is fantastic.

 

[Aurora Black]

Hopefully it will be less confusing as well.

 

[duddle146]

Thanks so much.

Hi Red,

Thanks so much for reviewing my story, "An Interview with Mr. Troll." I loved your comments. All you Writers that have taken it upon yourselves to review other writers work are greatly appreciated.

 

[Black Tulip]

Wow, that was a surprise to see on the hangout, the new title is fantastic.

I agree.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Hi Red,

Thanks so much for reviewing my story, "An Interview with Mr. Troll." I loved your comments. All you Writers that have taken it upon yourselves to review other writers work are greatly appreciated.

You're welcome. It was a fun read. And thanks, it is a fun job for me.

 

[Guest]

Thanks LadyC

Wow, high praise indeed from the queen of editors. Thanks so much for the review LadyC. It made my day. And considering I just got back from fighting the crowds at the supermarket and spending almost $200 on groceries, I needed my day made.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Wow, high praise indeed from the queen of editors. Thanks so much for the review LadyC. It made my day. And considering I just got back from fighting the crowds at the supermarket and spending almost $200 on groceries, I needed my day made.

Pleasure has been all mine, Dannie. You know me enough to know I wouldn't have said a thing if it hadn't been as good as what I've come to expect from you.

 

[nhplayguy]

Thank you Lady C

Your review was, I think, too kind, but thank you very much - I really appreciate it.

BTW, I'm not sure that this is where I need to post this, but it's the only place I could find.

Again, thank you kindly.

nhplayguy

 

[Aurora Black]

Thanks so much for the review LadyC. It made my day.

I reviewed you as well, but I guess you didn't see it.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Your review was, I think, too kind, but thank you very much - I really appreciate it.

BTW, I'm not sure that this is where I need to post this, but it's the only place I could find.

Again, thank you kindly.

nhplayguy

Yup, Guy,

You're at the right place

You are more than welcome as I only review what I find to be really good and your story was particularly good!

LC

 

[LadyCibelle]

Blast from the past

Author: My co-conspirator LadyCibelle
Title:How To Piss Off An Editor
Catagory:How to
Rating:5
link:http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=173643

reveiw:

This is a wonderful how to and should be a required read for anyone that is thinking about sending a story to an editor.

Thanks a whole lot, AMF

This How-to is the first thing I ever wrote, save for poetry, a few years back and it quickly became my trademark. People contacting me to edit talked about it for months after it had been posted.

In fact, I think, my bitchy reputation stems from that how-to.

 

[rachlou]

Daisy Got Laid
Rachlou

This is a short, one page story and read quickly and well. I love it when I can read something entertaining, with hot sex and good dialogue and not have it take all day to get through, unless I really want it to. This story had all of that. Daisy is a self confident woman who takes what she wants. And with a hot deliveryman too. I enjoyed this one. A five from me.

Thanks Danielle
Rach

 

[rgraham666]

Thanks for the review, Falling.

I'm glad you liked it.

The mime will be appearing in a future story, no worries.

 

[FallingToFly]

Thanks for the review, Falling.

I'm glad you liked it.

The mime will be appearing in a future story, no worries.

*very evil grin*

Hooray for strong, silent types!

*hugs*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks for the review FtF I appreciate the look see and the kind words.

 

[FallingToFly]

Thanks for the review FtF I appreciate the look see and the kind words.

Very Welcome, dear.

 

[SweetWitch]

I'm blushing....

Severusmax,

You must be a kind master, indeed. Thank you for your kind review of The Long Road. I must admit to agonizing over what category to shove it into but, with my editor being out of the country, I just had to wing it.

Thanks for the vote of confidence and happy reading!

SW