College girl to be.. Updated

[niceguy2002tim]

Hello,
I have again updated my story, adding 2 new threads. I posted here about a week and a half ago letting readers know I have started the story in a new direction from the start. For those who are unfamilar with my story here is a quick discription / rundown.

The story, A College Girl to be... follows the story of Sarah Banks, a highschool girl on her last few days before graduating and moving on to college. You determine the path she takes.

The name you enter on the start needs to be a man's name, otherwise it won't make sense. The story centers around a main theme and a main love/sex interest of Sarah's... a male subsitute teacher (who's name you enter at the start).

The story includes pathes that lead to lesbain experiences as well as 3sums involving 2 men and Sarah, as well as Sarah a man and another woman. The sex involved includes pretty much everything I can think of, from titty fucking, dick sucking, anal sex, vaginal sex, cum shots, fingerbanging and much more.

The story is curently 59 pages which lead 9 pages in depth. The story still needs more contributions, which I beg for! C'MON! HELP ME! Tomorrow night I plan to pay all those back for their thread which they have sent in the past to me.

I promise to honer my pervious statement, I will add a thread to your story if you add one to mine.

Thanks,
Tim. (niceguy2002tim)

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Oct. 16th update

Hey All,
I just wanted to let everybody know the story has been updated again. I want to thank Daciasdesire for her contribution. She has added a new, exciting thread to the secret agent path of my story, A College Girl to be... .

I would also like to announce that tonight I added 3 new threads of my own making the story 11 threads deep! I am so proud!

Thanks!

- Tim (niceguy2002tim)

I'd love any contributions!

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Oct. 18. 2002

Hello,
2 new threads have been added to a College Girl to be... and I just want to thank the contributors. First thread was added by Thisnameismine, it is his first to the story and that makes him my 12th writer, 13 all together including me.

Secondly I'd like to thank Daciasdesire for her contribution. She has added a couple to this story and she is really doing well with the secret agent part of the story. It's getting exciting, she is building up the anticipation and her school girl discription is better than mine! Thanks again.

-Tim(niceguy2002tim)

Any contributions would be great, I will write for your story in exchange!
A College Grl to be...

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Oct. 19. 2002

Hello,
the story has been updated again! I am pleased that my old story is getting new attention. Tonight I'd like to thank Goldfinger for his thread, it was another strong and well wrote thread for the story A College Girl to be... . In his thread the 2 main characters get involved in some rough sex in front of a video camera. It's interesting stuff.

CLICK HERE if you want to read his thread!

Thanks,
Tim(niceguy2002tim)

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Nov. 6. 2002

Hello,
I ma back to Chyoo now after a couple weeks offline and finally my story has been updated. Daciasdesire has added another great thread to my story A College Girl to be.... It continues on the secret agent path of the story and things are heating up. Sarah has made contact with her target!

CLICK HERE to find out what happens!

-Tim(niceguy2002tim)

 

[jakelyon]

Nice Story

I just read all the threads that have been posted for "A College Girl to be". Nice story. I will definatly work on some ideas for it. The secret agent story line is real interesting.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Nov.10.2002

NOVEMBER 10, 2002.

Hello!
3 new threads have been added to my story A College girl to be... . 2 of the threads are from new contributors and they're great, I hope you all enjoy.

1) ADDED BY: ME (niceguy2002tim)

This thread takes off from where the teacher is taking Sarah Bank's xxx pictures in the supply run at the school. He wants to take more but Sarah says, "I don't want you to take anymore."

CLICK HERE to find out what Mr. {FIRST_NAME}'s response is!

2) ADDED BY: juliegirl19

Her thread takes off just after my thread above. I am not going to tell you what happens before because it would spoil it. Read my above thread before you read this one.

CLICK HERE to read this thread.

3) ADDED BY: rusty69

Rusty69's thread begins following the thread where Sarah and her teacher are getting hot and heavy in the elevator. Somebody is about to interupt them.

CLICK HERE to find out who!

Thanks for the new threads! I look forward to adding more. As always I will do my best to help your story out as much as you help mine out.

-Tim(niceguy2002tim)

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Nov. 14. 2002

Hello,
the story has been updated again. This time by another new author, switch76. Switch76's thread picks up with Sarah and her teacher in the school basement. The two have went down there to be in secret, but while they are in the middle of things, they are caught with their pants down.

CLICK HERE to find out WHO catches Sarah and her teacher in the act.

Thanks for the thread Switch76.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

Story: A College girl to be...

 

[niceguy2002tim]

3 NEW threads!

Nov. 23. 2002

Hello,
well I am pleased to annouce the story A College girl to be... has 3 new threads, and one is from a new contributor. The story continues to grow and it keeps getting better!

Thread # 1
The first thread is from my ever so faithful, Daciasdesire She has wrote so many threads I've lost track. And here is another great one.

Sarah Banks, the secret agent girl has just escapped the mob mansion with some very important information in hand. She gets about 100 meters away and there is a black car. Sarah isn't sure who is inside and slowly approaches. The window opens reveling... CLICK HERE to find out who is in the car.

Thread # 2
The second thread comes from a great writer, rusty69.

His thread takes off where the 4 girls are playing their game. The school girls have a game where they score points if they can seduce their teachers into something sexual. Sarah Banks and her friend Claire are tied for first place, with the winner to recieve eight-hundred dollars. The girl with the most points by the end of the day wins. Claire offers Sarah a partnership to win and share the money. Will Sarah accept?CLICK HERE to find out.

Thread # 3
The third thread comes from the creative mind of Kendahl6969. It is the first contribution from this writer.

It picks up with the school girl Sarah Banks indulging in phone sex with her teacher. During their sesion Sarah uses a dildo to please herself while her teacher listens. CLICK HERE to learn what Sarah can do with a dildo.

Thanks to everybody, as always I will work hard to add a thread to your stories in return.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
My Story: A College girl to be...

 

[rusty69]

Niceguy-

Thanks for the kind words about my writing. I was happy to add to your story. And thanks for your contribution to mine.

I had asked you a while back about approving the second thread you submitted to my story when you caught that mistake. Could you read the below posts and answer the question I wrote below?

Thanks, bud.

PS - What's your secret as far as getting all those people to post to your story? You have a million contributors! My story needs more. I feel like I'm writing too much!

Rusty69



Hey,
I think only the original contributor may alter their threads. But after altering they have to be aproved again. Which is good. If you miss an error, usually the person who wrote it will pick up on it. The chyoo'ers as I call them are pretty sharp.

Thanks,
Tim (niceguy2002tim)
My Story: A College girl to be...



Niceguy -

So all I have to do is aprove the second one you submitted and it will replace the first one?

I ask because I know that I have seen some stories that have the same exact thread appear twice. And I assume that approving the thread twice is how that happened.

Am I wrong?

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Well...

Rusty,
I have contributed to over 20 stories, that is my secret. When you write for people, they are happy to return the favour. It's the chyoo way.

As for aproving the thread for a second time. I have never in my experience saw a story that had the same thread option twice. I would imagine the only way to do that is if the option line was altered in some way. Propbably even a capital letter would change it. If you aprove it again it should be fine. Let me know.

-Tim
My Story: A college girl to be...