climactic implication

[yui]

oh you're so sweet!
thank you!

No problem at all.

I live to serve.

 

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[yui]

Hey there,

You need to copy all the brackets and the "url" and the http:, et al.

 

[yui]

Here is the link-
"URL=http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=456609&page=submissions]Stories that make you go, hmmnmm[/URL"

Just replace the quotation marks with brackets ( [ and ] ).

 

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[cantdog]

You seem concerned, as you should be, with the orgasm. Its description is a perennial technical problem, and the solutions to it in the stories here are as varied as snowflakes.

Here are two nested links to two old threads on the AH, about orgasms, male and female:

2 come threads

The link ought to be posted in writers' resources. Of course, then very few would ever read it!

cantdog

 

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[elsol]

I don't particularly get flowery with orgasms... even if it's a romantic story.

I figure it this way, at most an orgasm last 1.5 seconds, I should be able to describe it in the amount of words a reader can read in 1.5 seconds.

Maybe 3 seconds if it is a REALLY good orgasm.

Sincerely,
ElSol