Cinderella (HotCider & lonelycollegegirl)
Cinderella
Once upon a time, there lived a young girl left in the care of her wicked step-mother. Her mother had died of sickness in a brothel and her dying wish had been to spare her daughter the life of a whore. The step-mother, Olga, regretfully took the disgrace in for to her envy, the girl grew into a lovely young woman—more beautiful than her two daughters: the tall and lanky Frieda and the plump and smelly, Brunhilde. With hair of spun gold and eyes of the clearest skies, the young, step-daughter would have been an enticing prize if Olga didn’t mistreat her.
The young daughter was a servant in Olga’s mansion. They hired no other maids to assist her in the rigorous chores, and even so, to their disgust, the flaxen-haired beauty dubbed Cinderella completed every single one. She was malnourished and filthy—denied a proper meal and a bath.
In the approaching winter, Olga for the first time sent Cinderella into town to fetch lamp oil. Upon returning, she is attacked by a pauper and near raped until she is saved by a mysterious, inebriated gentleman. Having a keen eye for beauty, he saw through her filth and invited her to his private suite at the Inn. There, she was able to bathe with the finest oils and soaps and for once eat a filling meal. Feeling that she may have overstayed her welcome or owed the man a favor, Cinderella sought to sneak away, having no gold to offer in thank you. Her savior stopped her and pleaded for her to stay the night with him. What was meant to be a mere generous offer became a fiery and erotic night, Cinderella would never forget.
Cinderella awoke the next morning to find the man nowhere to be found. What felt like a dream soon dramatically became a nightmare for she had forgotten all about her wicked step-mother. She returned to the mansion no longer the virgin she had been before and was punished. Never would she be allowed to step foot outside again.
Months dragged on and the love-sick Cinderella couldn’t stop thinking about that night with the gentleman. Did it really happen? Was it all a dream? Her frustrated passions said otherwise. That night, her step-mother and sisters returned from a night on the town in clamorous excitement. They had in their hands invitations to the prince’s birthday ball. Cinderella happened to steal a peek at one of the scrolls and recognized the man sketched on the invitation to be the same man who had saved her that night. Of course, the man hadn’t been as polished as the prince, but she couldn’t mistake his face for another nor the mark he had left on her salacity. Devastated, Cinderella wept and prayed for a chance to see her savior again. Her prayers were then answered by a not-so fairy godmother.
Suspicious and impish, the creature gave to her a potion that would not only restore her to full health but enhance her beauty. A drop was all she would need for the potion was potent, and it would expire at midnight. On the night of the ball after her step family left, Cinderella took the potion and was transformed into an enchanting lady. She applied the drops to some mice and a pumpkin she found in the garden and they morphed into beautiful horses leading an extravagant carriage.
Cinderella arrived at the ball and the potion’s potency became known. Lords, counts, and officers were drawn to her like horny bulls, and in due time the prince took notice of her. Their reunion was a happy and angry one for Cinderella. The prince hadn’t recognized her at first until she explained how they had met. After a dance, the prince invited her to his chambers with every intention to lay with her again. Still not convinced that her beauty was good enough for the prince, Cinderella downed the rest of the imp’s potion and her final transformation was more than the prince could bear. They had indulged in each other for hours on end until midnight rang on frightening bells. In her hurry, Cinderella gathered her clothes—all but one heel—and fled the castle. She returned to her home in rags, the magic having long, worn off and again disheartened. She would never see him again.
The next day, the prince was sexually starving and determined to find the girl whose name he never learned. Having only her shoe, he sought out every woman in the kingdom, searching desperately for the woman that could fit the magic and stubborn shoe. When it came time that the prince would visit Olga’s mansion, her step-mother locked poor Cinderella deep in the cellar. Unable to hear her cries and screams, the prince near left until he discovered a strand of blonde hair on Brunhilde’s gown. No one in the household had such hair from what he could see, and so enraged he demanded the wicked step family to show him the girl they were hiding. Reluctantly, they obeyed him and freed Cinderella. Reunited with his lover, he stole her away to his castle, where they lived happily ever after.
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All right; so I’ve always been big on taking a fairy tale and making it dark and dirty. This being one I wanted to try out since I’ve done a few others in my past. I look forward to reenacting the story line written above with a talented, literate, and gifted writer. I hope that the writer will be able to offer some character personality and a bit of her own imagination to make the story more worth it. The character needs to have a life of her own please; don’t make her an empty shell.
If you’ve read my sexual profile down there in my signature, you’ll notice that I’m more about 60% quality and story line and 40% quality and sex. I really dislike when a story line is completely abandoned for raw sex. I enjoy getting 100% fulfillment in my games. But any who…
This is meant to be a 1 on 1. Some aspects that can be expected in this game are:
xFairy Tale
xNaughty
xComedy
xAdult
xRomance
As I said, this is meant to be a fun game and not so serious. If you’re interested, PM me a sample of your writing. If you’re involved in other games on this site, you can just link me to a game where you feel shows best how you write. If I give you the okay, then the profile-making can happen. I’m not going to tell you to go ahead and make a profile because if I don’t think we’re compatible, I wouldn’t want you to waste your time.
To give a specific time theme: We’re going 1700s. This won’t be medieval.
The Beginning
The game will begin with Cinderella being sent to fetch kerosene from the town. It’s cold, she’s not exactly dressed for the weather, and yeah, it sucks. Just before she could purchase the oil, a pauper tries to steal the coppers she has on her, but soon forsakes the coppers for her chastity.
(Final Note: Remember, if you're interested in this game, do not post in this thread. This thread is going to be where the game will start. Thank you.)
Cinderella
Once upon a time, there lived a young girl left in the care of her wicked step-mother. Her mother had died of sickness in a brothel and her dying wish had been to spare her daughter the life of a whore. The step-mother, Olga, regretfully took the disgrace in for to her envy, the girl grew into a lovely young woman—more beautiful than her two daughters: the tall and lanky Frieda and the plump and smelly, Brunhilde. With hair of spun gold and eyes of the clearest skies, the young, step-daughter would have been an enticing prize if Olga didn’t mistreat her.
The young daughter was a servant in Olga’s mansion. They hired no other maids to assist her in the rigorous chores, and even so, to their disgust, the flaxen-haired beauty dubbed Cinderella completed every single one. She was malnourished and filthy—denied a proper meal and a bath.
In the approaching winter, Olga for the first time sent Cinderella into town to fetch lamp oil. Upon returning, she is attacked by a pauper and near raped until she is saved by a mysterious, inebriated gentleman. Having a keen eye for beauty, he saw through her filth and invited her to his private suite at the Inn. There, she was able to bathe with the finest oils and soaps and for once eat a filling meal. Feeling that she may have overstayed her welcome or owed the man a favor, Cinderella sought to sneak away, having no gold to offer in thank you. Her savior stopped her and pleaded for her to stay the night with him. What was meant to be a mere generous offer became a fiery and erotic night, Cinderella would never forget.
Cinderella awoke the next morning to find the man nowhere to be found. What felt like a dream soon dramatically became a nightmare for she had forgotten all about her wicked step-mother. She returned to the mansion no longer the virgin she had been before and was punished. Never would she be allowed to step foot outside again.
Months dragged on and the love-sick Cinderella couldn’t stop thinking about that night with the gentleman. Did it really happen? Was it all a dream? Her frustrated passions said otherwise. That night, her step-mother and sisters returned from a night on the town in clamorous excitement. They had in their hands invitations to the prince’s birthday ball. Cinderella happened to steal a peek at one of the scrolls and recognized the man sketched on the invitation to be the same man who had saved her that night. Of course, the man hadn’t been as polished as the prince, but she couldn’t mistake his face for another nor the mark he had left on her salacity. Devastated, Cinderella wept and prayed for a chance to see her savior again. Her prayers were then answered by a not-so fairy godmother.
Suspicious and impish, the creature gave to her a potion that would not only restore her to full health but enhance her beauty. A drop was all she would need for the potion was potent, and it would expire at midnight. On the night of the ball after her step family left, Cinderella took the potion and was transformed into an enchanting lady. She applied the drops to some mice and a pumpkin she found in the garden and they morphed into beautiful horses leading an extravagant carriage.
Cinderella arrived at the ball and the potion’s potency became known. Lords, counts, and officers were drawn to her like horny bulls, and in due time the prince took notice of her. Their reunion was a happy and angry one for Cinderella. The prince hadn’t recognized her at first until she explained how they had met. After a dance, the prince invited her to his chambers with every intention to lay with her again. Still not convinced that her beauty was good enough for the prince, Cinderella downed the rest of the imp’s potion and her final transformation was more than the prince could bear. They had indulged in each other for hours on end until midnight rang on frightening bells. In her hurry, Cinderella gathered her clothes—all but one heel—and fled the castle. She returned to her home in rags, the magic having long, worn off and again disheartened. She would never see him again.
The next day, the prince was sexually starving and determined to find the girl whose name he never learned. Having only her shoe, he sought out every woman in the kingdom, searching desperately for the woman that could fit the magic and stubborn shoe. When it came time that the prince would visit Olga’s mansion, her step-mother locked poor Cinderella deep in the cellar. Unable to hear her cries and screams, the prince near left until he discovered a strand of blonde hair on Brunhilde’s gown. No one in the household had such hair from what he could see, and so enraged he demanded the wicked step family to show him the girl they were hiding. Reluctantly, they obeyed him and freed Cinderella. Reunited with his lover, he stole her away to his castle, where they lived happily ever after.
____________________________________________________________
All right; so I’ve always been big on taking a fairy tale and making it dark and dirty. This being one I wanted to try out since I’ve done a few others in my past. I look forward to reenacting the story line written above with a talented, literate, and gifted writer. I hope that the writer will be able to offer some character personality and a bit of her own imagination to make the story more worth it. The character needs to have a life of her own please; don’t make her an empty shell.
If you’ve read my sexual profile down there in my signature, you’ll notice that I’m more about 60% quality and story line and 40% quality and sex. I really dislike when a story line is completely abandoned for raw sex. I enjoy getting 100% fulfillment in my games. But any who…
This is meant to be a 1 on 1. Some aspects that can be expected in this game are:
xFairy Tale
xNaughty
xComedy
xAdult
xRomance
As I said, this is meant to be a fun game and not so serious. If you’re interested, PM me a sample of your writing. If you’re involved in other games on this site, you can just link me to a game where you feel shows best how you write. If I give you the okay, then the profile-making can happen. I’m not going to tell you to go ahead and make a profile because if I don’t think we’re compatible, I wouldn’t want you to waste your time.
To give a specific time theme: We’re going 1700s. This won’t be medieval.
The Beginning
The game will begin with Cinderella being sent to fetch kerosene from the town. It’s cold, she’s not exactly dressed for the weather, and yeah, it sucks. Just before she could purchase the oil, a pauper tries to steal the coppers she has on her, but soon forsakes the coppers for her chastity.
(Final Note: Remember, if you're interested in this game, do not post in this thread. This thread is going to be where the game will start. Thank you.)
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