cheerleader in a lesbian gay bar

[d16]

How about a story idea about a cute sexy college cheerleader who gets lost traveling to an out of town football game.Its early in the morning and shes lost.Stops at a bar where she sees a figure moving around.Cheerleader enters the bar looking for help ,its deserted except for the butch bartender who runs the lesbian hangout.When the young pretty girl realizes where she is and wants to leave ,barkeep blocks the door .Dyke bartender asks for a thank you kiss ,cheerleader gets into her bitchy mood and slaps the woman across the face which eventually causes the two women to go rolling about the barroom floor. At the end of the story the victorious bartender nails the cheerleaders panties to the barroom wall as a trophy.
What do you think?

 

[Preachrman]

How about a story idea about a cute sexy college cheerleader who gets lost traveling to an out of town football game.Its early in the morning and shes lost.Stops at a bar where she sees a figure moving around.Cheerleader enters the bar looking for help ,its deserted except for the butch bartender who runs the lesbian hangout.When the young pretty girl realizes where she is and wants to leave ,barkeep blocks the door .Dyke bartender asks for a thank you kiss ,cheerleader gets into her bitchy mood and slaps the woman across the face which eventually causes the two women to go rolling about the barroom floor. At the end of the story the victorious bartender nails the cheerleaders panties to the barroom wall as a trophy.
What do you think?

Or have the cheerleader be the one that is victorious. Having the bartender being worn out by the younger cheerleader.

have the wall full of panties.

 

[d16]

Interesting thought have the cheerleader be the winner instead of the loser. How would you write the ending?

 

[Preachrman]

Interesting thought have the cheerleader be the winner instead of the loser. How would you write the ending?

You could have something cheesy, like the cheerleader making a comment like "do you think all we do is practice cheers?"

Or the cheerleader commenting that she isn't as sweet as she looks.

or having the bartender surprised that the cheerleader not only satified her but wore her out, and the cheerleader saying "You don't become head cheerleader by having the best cheers" or a reference that to become head cheerleader you have to help out the whole squad.

or something like that.

 

[d16]

What if the bartender knew the sexy cheerleader from high school ?
Story could become quit interesting.

 

[Chicklet]

What if the bartender knew the sexy cheerleader from high school ?
Story could become quit interesting.

Actually I'd like this twist quite a bit.

The cheerleader could have been one of those prissy blondes that ignores everyone below her social status (choke gag) and the bartender a more down to earth girl that maybe was shunned by the cheerleader, or a practical joke was played on her, or something... something to give the story an edge of revenge. I think it would make it more interesting with a twist like that.

 

[d16]

Good idea.....Lets throw in a little bit of payback from their high school days.Being this story is essentially about two girls having sex in a lesbian hangout .Their high school relationship must have been pretty bad for the bartender character for her to want to get even.Obviously Some major embarrassment to the bartender from their high school days is now putting the cheerleader in peril....Any suggestions?
Read some of your work...its great

 

[BedtimeStories77]

What if the bartender knew the sexy cheerleader from high school ?
Story could become quit interesting.

As I've been reading the development of this story idea, I saw the bartender as an older woman. I think the cheerleader should be 18-21 so she's "under age" when it comes to being IN the bar. Sort of adds a small taboo element to it!

 

[d16]

Make their be a difference in their ages......I think I see where your going with this.How about them not be schoolmates but rather student and teacher.Say she was responsible for having a young student teacher fired for making a sexual advance to the cheerleaders.This was all made up as a practical joke on the poor woman,who eventually loses her job at the school.The only evidence was the fact that she was a lesbian and the school board to avoid any potential law suits let her go.
Its now four years later and guess what the bitchy cheerleader winds up alone with her in her bar.......This could be payback time.
How should the story go on from here?

 

[3113]

I understand the appeal of the "bartender's revenge" on the perfect cheerleader...but I think you're missing a bet here. Afterall, if all you want is the bartender's revenge on miss perfect, then miss perfect can be anyone, can't she?

You've gone for a CHEERLEADER and Lesbian bar. If you make use of those two, keep what Cheerleaders do in mind and what a lesbian bar is like, then you've a potentially funny and very erotic situation in this senario. Imagine. A limber, atheletic cheerleader on her way to some cheerleading contest gets stuck and ends up in a lesbian bar. At first, the occupants are hostile to her, THEY were never let on the cheerleading team--they could only drool over such girls like everyone else (and such girls always ended up on the arms football players, never the class lesbian, come to that).

"Anyone can be a cheerleader," says our now nervous cheerleader trying to ease the tension and avoid possible danger. She frantically starts to teach them cheers and poses and tricks. As she does, the Lesbians find that some of the poses are very erotic and lend themselves to some interesting...access and pleasantries. Maybe the cheerleader does have something new to teach them?

Contrariwise, the cheerleader finds as she shows these ladies her best splits and bends and handstands that she's being touched in ways her usual team mates never touched her. Things escalate from there, with the lesbians getting a taste of cheerleading...and the cheerleader a taste of something else.

Is that anything like what you had in mind with the idea? Or are you really after a good revenge tale?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

How about them not be schoolmates but rather student and teacher.

Well, if the older woman is a bartender there doesn't have to be some other "connection" between the two. She doesn't need to be the co-ed's teacher as well.

 

[d16]

See your point but if the story would have a bit of a twist to it I think that all of the past problems the bartender/ex teacher had with the cheerleader would add a lot of spice to the story.....but to your point how would the story proceed once the two girls are now alone in the bar?

Humor....This could be a very funny skit on saturday night live,cheerleader giving cheering lessons to a butch of large lesbian truck drivers.

 

[3113]

See your point but if the story would have a bit of a twist to it I think that all of the past problems the bartender/ex teacher had with the cheerleader would add a lot of spice to the story.....but to your point how would the story proceed once the two girls are now alone in the bar?

If you're asking me this, I'd say that I would say they shouldn't be alone in the bar. But we're back to that very important question: what story do you really want to tell? Is this a story about a cheerleader in a lesbian bar, or is it about a lesbian bartender avenging herself on a stuck-up girl by drugging and molesting her? Because if you have just the two of them, then the story you have to tell is the latter one. The bartender will have to drug her (or hit her over the head with a bottle) in order to have her way with the Cheerleader.

If, however, you add in at least a couple of other lesbians (making it, yes, a lesbian bar--because who cares what kind of bar it is if we're only going to meet the bartender?) then you not only have more characters to play with, but more tension as the cheerleader realizes that they've locked the door and are closing in on her. You also get the chance to put your cheerleader in more positions. Ever seen that famous move where the guys lift the Cheerleader high over head, legs spread in splits? Two or three extra lesbians can put the flexable Cheerleader in all kinds of positions...and have her doing to them while they do to her.

Either way, if you keep the Cheerleader, then I wouldn't have the bartender be a ex-teacher. Cliché as it is for the girl's sports coach to be lesbian, I think it would be better for the bartender to have been the old coach of, say, the girl's basketball team, than a teacher. THIS Cheerleader could then be the one who went to the principal and talked him, perhaps with feminine wiles, into shifting the budget so that the cheerleaders got a ton of money for new uniforms and trips to competitions while the girl's basketball team had to do without. Thus giving our bartender a very good reason to want revenge over and above just teaching the stuck-up girl a lesson.

Humor....This could be a very funny skit on saturday night live,cheerleader giving cheering lessons to a butch of large lesbian truck drivers.

It could be very, very funny. But you will have to do a little research on cheerleading routines

 

[d16]

Great idea about using the ex basketball coach as the bartender character.Think the story would be more erotic if it was a one on one situation.Wouldn't think the bartender would have to knock her out or drug her in any way.If she was the excoach I'm sure she should be able to over power the cheerleader and have her way with her.Still I think the bitchy cheerleader character has to do something really mean and rottin while shes alone in the bar to set off the bartender into attacking her.The question is what did she say or do to drive the other woman nuts?

 

[3113]

Great idea about using the ex basketball coach as the bartender character.Think the story would be more erotic if it was a one on one situation.Wouldn't think the bartender would have to knock her out or drug her in any way.If she was the excoach I'm sure she should be able to over power the cheerleader and have her way with her.

Whether it would be more erotic one-on-one is up to you, as I assume you're writing the story. Do you find it more erotic to have one woman overpowering and doing things to one woman, or a trio of women overpowering and doing things to a woman?

Let me be clear, I'm not trying to argue you out of whatever story you want to tell, I'm just trying to understand which one that is. If you say, "Cheerleader in a lesbian bar" then I expect to see lesbians in the bar--and I expect to see them involved in the situation. There's no "more" or "less" erotic to it. Some folk would find it far more erotic to read (and to write) about three women having their way with a girl. And story wise, you save yourself time. The bartender doesn't have to grab the girl--who is going to be strong, atheletic, flexable and screaming--doesn't have to wrestle her to the ground, doesn't have to, somehow, bind her, doesn't have to remove her clothes or pry open her powerful legs or avoid getting kicked, punched, scratched, etc. Two or more friends can do that and leave the bartender to her revenge. And when the bartender orders "turn her over!" they can do that, too.

But if that's not erotic to you, if it's not exciting or interesting to write, then that's not the story. End of discussion. Nevertheless, if it's going to be one-on-one, you CAN'T be lazy. You can't just say, "The bartender overpowers her." That cheats the reader out of the thrill of hearing HOW the girl is overpowered.

Since it doesn't need to be a lesbian bar (that is, this is no longer about a cheerleader getting trapped at a lesbian bar, but about a lesbian bartender's revenge on a cheerleader--or ex-cheerleader perhaps?), then you might as well make it a regular bar that the cheerleader has started to visit. So does the bartender see her, and plan a revenge, thus has everything ready? How to lure, overpower, capture, bind? or does the bartender threaten with a weapon in order to subdue the cheerleader?

Ask yourself what you really want to see, what would really excite you, and what makes you want to start writing. You obviously find *something* about lebian bartenders and stuck-up cheerleaders erotic and exciting. What is it? Decide, and the story will write itself.

 

[d16]

Gave it some thought and I beleive you are correct.The story would flow better if their were lesbians in the lesbian bar and the revenge element was still there between the two women.Might even be more plausable if this story took place after her collelge years and she was an excheerleader.However still can't resist having character showing up at the bar in her uniform.
Being that you have a much clearer vision of the story than I how about you writing this tale ?....Be much apprecitive and besides you will do a far better job......If you need some suggestions send me a message..or right here is fine.

 

[OlderBiMan]

I saw a movie like that once. But I'm A Cheerleader !

 

[3113]

However still can't resist having character showing up at the bar in her uniform.

How about a cheerleader reunion? High School cheerleaders back in uniform to reunite some, oh, three or four years later? I agree wholeheartedly that it's much better if she's in uniform.

Being that you have a much clearer vision of the story than I how about you writing this tale ?

It's very kind of you to say that. This kind of erotica, however, is not my forté. Under the right circumstances I can find it erotic reading, but kicking my hindbrain into writing it...hindbrain would rather go back to the Literotica index and pick a different section Being unable to write the sex scenes for such a story is, I'm sure you'd agree, a rather serious handicap in this instance. Now if you'd care to make our cheerleader male and the bartender bi....



You've got the making of one hell of story here. It's got everything tension, humor, character interaction and loads of erotic sex. Don't hand it over just yet. Let it cook and bubble a bit longer. You may find yourself writing it afterall.

 

[d16]

Beleive I'm leaving my cheerleader character in good hands ...write the story

 

[silverwhisper]

i thought this thread might benefit from this news story. :>

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[d16]

Thanks...Maybe we should ask the cheerleaders to write this story.They obviously have the experience