Castle training grounds.

[doro2000]

I have an idea for a story!

I really would like to colaborate with someone to get the story told. Lets team up!

the high points.....

Slave trainer - Has a castle like mansion in scotland. 'harvests and trains' unsuspecting persons found in war torn or impoverised areas of the world.

Assistants - 2 - Red haired 1m 1f - these two are cold and calous
cousins that have been with the Trainer for several years. They are the VP's of the mansion so to speak. but they are charged with the day to day functions so the Trainer can focus on the important things.

Slaves - ?? - where we get then - or if we even choses to go there with the story we can work out.


This story must be both erotic and graphic. I want to touch on as many fetishes as possible as well as love and defiance.

Contact me please.........
lets put our heads together!!!!!
R.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

<Chicklet can hear everyone groaning>

I like the idea. I'd like to do it.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Tatewaki]

<Chicklet can hear everyone groaning>

I like the idea. I'd like to do it.

Chicklet, babe ...

As many stories I have on the go, none of them are stalled. Most are completed longhand and are just awaiting final edits and polish. I'm a firm believer in keeping a lot of pots on the boil. But more important than starting many projects is finishing them.

By all means look over every idea out there, write it down, play with it and then file it, but for God's sake don't try to write about every appealing idea that you see. Pick ten, plot ten, then write ten. Don't start any others until your work is completed, or until you abandon a project.

I've completed Rapunzel Act II and III, Silken Desires, E&A 7 and S&A 2 and 3 in the last week and a half, and I have made impressive progress with Give Me Shelter, A Marionette Without Strings, Across The Arena and Comfort Woman. I'm targeting June 30 for all these stories to be completed and posted here on Lit.

My point? Slow down, gain focus and produce. You'll always find that excellent idea that you simply must write up immediately. Stifle that urge. That is just your mind trying to shy away from the labourious task of perfecting your work. Its always more fun to plant than to weed, prune and cultivate. But playing with all those ultracool story ideas won't mean shit if you never manage to finish anything you begin.

Just some advice that I've ignored for a long time myself until an increasingly annoyed fanbase brought me to heel. The crowd is fickle and unforgiving; they're not interested in what I posted here yesterday, just in what I'll post tomorrow. And the day after, and the day after that.

They're hungry. Keep 'em fed and happy.

Cheers!

-T

 

[Chicklet]

<stammering>


But...But...

Okay...

 

[Guest]

(I'm going to keep my comments to myself on that one) Oops...did I just say that aloud?

"I didn't hear a thing," said the first monkey.

 

[damppanties]

By all means look over every idea out there, write it down, play with it and then file it, but for God's sake don't try to write about every appealing idea that you see. -T

Uhuh... you're stifling her creative urge!!

 

[LordArthur]

Well i just want to say
sounds like a great idea, go with it!!!!!!

Let me know when its done and i'l definently read it

 

[Chicklet]

Uhuh... you're stifling her creative urge!!

YES!!!! Somebody thinks I'm creative!!!!

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

EVERYONE thinks you're creative, my love.

awe...

thanks

 

[Guest]

This is a great idea! It reminds me of two role plays I started in the SRP board. In the Castle..., and Gone to Market are the role plays... "Complicated" stories are the best! They show the author really put some thought and love into his/her work!

 

[doro2000]

Still working

I'm trying to work it out.

I've got some really hot and erotic ideas.

Thanks for the encouragement. I agree that the more comlicated stories are a little better due to the increased thought process involved. Still looking forward to warking on this with some people. I've blasted off a couple of details to Chicklet and hoping she can help. But I'm still open.............

I like the feed back so keep it cumming...............

 

[penguindance]

 

[Amfig]

I have an idea for a story!

I really would like to colaborate with someone to get the story told. Lets team up!

the high points.....

Slave trainer - Has a castle like mansion in scotland. 'harvests and trains' unsuspecting persons found in war torn or impoverised areas of the world.

Assistants - 2 - Red haired 1m 1f - these two are cold and calous
cousins that have been with the Trainer for several years. They are the VP's of the mansion so to speak. but they are charged with the day to day functions so the Trainer can focus on the important things.

Slaves - ?? - where we get then - or if we even choses to go there with the story we can work out.


This story must be both erotic and graphic. I want to touch on as many fetishes as possible as well as love and defiance.

Contact me please.........
lets put our heads together!!!!!
R.

Didn't Anne Rice do this in the Sleeping Beauty Trilogy?

 

[Guest]

Didn't Anne Rice do this in the Sleeping Beauty Trilogy?

Ann Rice wrote a trilogy of her own. It does not mean Doro's idea is the same. Similar? Maybe. Same? No. If you really wanted to, you could look at every story here at Lit and find some movie, book, story, or whatever else that inspired it.

 

[Guest]

If you really wanted to, you could look at every story here at Lit and find some movie, book, story, or whatever else that inspired it.

Judging by some of the stories on here, if what you say is true then there must be some real **** out there!

 

[Guest]

There must be some real what out there? Shit?

 

[jon.hayworth]

Amfig and Charming_Brights,

Re repetition in plot lines. It is aknowledged that there are only 36 Dramatic Situations (some reductionists would say only 3), it is inevitable that all have been used on a number of occassions.

It is inevitable that someone else has already used a concept - the art is for the writer to take that concept and stamp it with a mark of their own individuality.

e.g. The Romeo and Juliet story is told and retold in romance stories. The stories Oedipus and Electra are repeated with variations in incest. and so on.

Read the stories and enjoy them for what they are - if not you have at the best 36 stories to read and then you can stop reading saying, "I've read them all."

jon

 

[MsLinnet]

Amfig and Charming_Brights,

Re repetition in plot lines. It is aknowledged that there are only 36 Dramatic Situations (some reductionists would say only 3), it is inevitable that all have been used on a number of occassions.

It is inevitable that someone else has already used a concept - the art is for the writer to take that concept and stamp it with a mark of their own individuality.

e.g. The Romeo and Juliet story is told and retold in romance stories. The stories Oedipus and Electra are repeated with variations in incest. and so on.

Read the stories and enjoy them for what they are - if not you have at the best 36 stories to read and then you can stop reading saying, "I've read them all."

jon

I think you are a romantic at hart

 

[MrFrost]

i kind of like the idea but it seems alittle dull ( sorry ) maybe something big is going on in the world around aswell..

 

[jon.hayworth]

Linnet,

You have sussed me

jon But I am a horny devil too

 

[MsLinnet]

jon.hayworth

I guess I have

 

[Chicklet]

What does "Sussed" mean!