Candi begging for critiques

[CandiCame]

I'm gonna stick this here too, because the art thread seems to move kinda slow. Also, you guys are meaner. I've noticed a lot of people there are far too... 'yeah that looks great".

Here's a quick sketch from last night I went crazy with the fucking hair on.

 

[islandman]

Where are his/her eyes focused elsewhere?

 

[lovetoread]

He reminds me of Link.

 

[VaticanAssassin]

I can not draw so it impressive to me. I have never seen a girl with that much hair or that high up however......

 

[butters]

wonky eyes, too much pubic hair (which tends to be curlier than that) and also the way pubic hair grows tends to follow more or less a straight line across the top

guess it depends on how much realism v cartoon you want to go and i'm no expert, just saying what struck me as out of place in it. innit?

for it to work on an erotic level (if that's the point), the eyes should be focused on her groin or closed

 

[CandiCame]

wonky eyes, too much pubic hair (which tends to be curlier than that) and also the way pubic hair grows tends to follow more or less a straight line across the top

guess it depends on how much realism v cartoon you want to go and i'm no expert, just saying what struck me as out of place in it. innit?

for it to work on an erotic level (if that's the point), the eyes should be focused on her groin or closed

That's my g/fs pubic mound and I swear go god her pubes grow in a v like that. Like the top of the inverted V is leading toward the belly button. Maybe because of the preggers?

Yeah, the eyes are fucked up...

 

[CandiCame]

He reminds me of Link.

It's supposed to be me but I went crazy with the hair...

 

[CandiCame]

This is the sister image of that one that I also sketched last night.

Thanks to everybody who's given tips so far!!

 

[Cade Is Here]

 

[CandiCame]

He reminds me of Link.

This is how I draw Link;

Also am I the only Drawn Together fan? I liked that show... But the movie kinda sucks.

 

[butters]

That's my g/fs pubic mound and I swear go god her pubes grow in a v like that. Like the top of the inverted V is leading toward the belly button. Maybe because of the preggers?

Yeah, the eyes are fucked up...

in that case i apologise - not something i've seen before but then that's not saying a great deal

congrats on the li'l spud yer growin'

 

[CandiCame]

in that case i apologise - not something i've seen before but then that's not saying a great deal

congrats on the li'l spud yer growin'

Well, fun fact: I hate pubic hair in general and don't normally draw it, but I thought it looked weird. Too much negative space.

And thanks!

 

[SigmundFraud]

Due to the abundant pubes you get a big fat F

 

[Sean Renaud]

I know I didn't commision this shit. I want Wuya and I want her by the end of the month.

Also if you ever draw Xander again I'll be forced to find you and kill you.

 

[lovetoread]

I'm a big drawn together fan.

I thought I was the only one.

 

[Liar]

I'm gonna stick this here too, because the art thread seems to move kinda slow. Also, you guys are meaner. I've noticed a lot of people there are far too... 'yeah that looks great".

Here's a quick sketch from last night I went crazy with the fucking hair on.

What's up with the little fighter jet near the bottom?

 

[CandiCame]

I know I didn't commision this shit. I want Wuya and I want her by the end of the month.

Also if you ever draw Xander again I'll be forced to find you and kill you.

I don't know who that is. Also I have drawn so much Xandir. I love Xandir. I don't know who I love more, Xandir, Ling Ling, or Toot.

 

[CandiCame]

What's up with the little fighter jet near the bottom?

I am now incredibly ashamed of this pic...

 

[CandiCame]

Due to the abundant pubes you get a big fat F

I need to shave so bad right now like you don't even know. So I'm not gonna say shit to anybody else. I thought about it in the shower before work this morning but I was sitting there trying to decide if I were more vain than lazy for so long that I ran out of time.

 

[Sean Renaud]

If you like breathing you will figure out who Wuya is. And you'll stop drawing Xander. I'll tell Renard where you live.

 

[Liar]

I am now incredibly ashamed of this pic...

Sorry dude, my mind goes places. Can't unsee.

Asking for feedback on the geebee, I'd say your judgment is more shame worthy than your pen skills.

 

[CandiCame]

Sorry dude, my mind goes places. Can't unsee.

Asking for feedback on the geebee, I'd say your judgment is more shame worthy than your pen skills.

I'm a tax pro in the boonies in the off season. Do you know what I do all day? I sit here and I watch BBC documentaries on youtube on my tablet. Sometimes I need a little abuse to get me through the day. I posted in the art thread and nobody there is biting.

Oh, and it was supposed to be her belly button.

 

[CandiCame]

If you like breathing you will figure out who Wuya is. And you'll stop drawing Xander. I'll tell Renard where you live.

You know that this is all stuff I've already drawn, right? As in I have a phtobucket full of Xandir/Link.

I'm not drawing them right now. I'm not sitting at my desk drawing gay elves at work.

God I wish I had that job.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I don't know who told you you could have a mind of your own but they lied to you. Now draw Wuya!

 

[CandiCame]

I don't know who told you you could have a mind of your own but they lied to you. Now draw Wuya!

I CANNOT DRAW YOU PORN I AM AT WORK!! MY BOSS IS AN OLD CHRISTIAN LADY!! SHE WAS HORRIBLY OFFENDED BY MY EARRINGS SHE WOULD DIE!!

That would be cool tho. Like she has a heart attack because I'm drawing porn.

Would I get arrested for that?