Can you help me decide what to write next

[NoCa]

I am reposting this on the subforum as I am not getting much attention on story ideas. I apologise to the moderators upfront if this causes any problem.

Anyway...

I recently finished my first series here on Literotica (How I Became My Son's Girlfriend), and it did pretty well. Plenty of people asked me to keep writing more mum and son stories, and even if I would like to eventually, I think this is really the best I can do.

I was considering exploring other categories I have not yet tackled, and I am undecided between two ideas.

The first: My Valyrie Step-Sister (Interracial, quasi-incest)
Pete (19), nerdy black kid, must welcome home his new step-sister, Barbara (23), who was recently released from jail, where she spent the last two years for armed assault. Their newlywed parents would very much prefer if Barbara went back to studying, but she has other plans. She means to move out as soon as possible and, since she happens to be very hot and very good at weponizing that, she would like to try her luck on Onlyfans. She does relatively well, but her fans would like her to find some male talent. Now, where could she find some?

The second: My Succubus Daughter (Father-Daughter incest story)
Miles (37) is an English teacher who loves women a little bit too much. He is a borderline porn addict and is horribly ashamed of the thoughts that run through his mind with some of his students. He never had a real relationship and would be a virgin were it not for an absurdly torrid adventure he had at the carnival in Rio nineteen years ago. So far, he has been able to find solace in his passion for literature and his work, and is going to therapy to control his compulsion. His world is turned upside down when a young girl shows up at his door, revealing two unbelievable truths. First, the woman he was with during his vacation in Brazil was actually a succubus, to whom he kinda sold his soul. Second, that succubus also happened to be her mother, so that makes her... yeah... ta-dah!

Which of these two sounds more inspired to you? And which one do you believe is more likely to do well?

Many thanks up front.
All the best

 

[StillStunned]

The succubus. When in doubt, always go with demon sex.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Combine them. Miles is Pete's dad. Have the incest and succubus stories happen in parallel.

--Annie

 

[TheLobster]

Another vote for the second one, though also because the first one seems a bit incoherent to me. (Armed assault? And then she just gets out of jail and becomes a relatively upstanding member of the society, dabbling only in the currently most respectable form of sex work rather than other crime? Very spurious).

In the second one, a succubus curse would be a good explanation for his sex addiction, as well as any other character traits you might need to pull out of the hat for the MMC. Succubus daughter presents a double taboo temptation (incest + consorting with a demon, now knowingly), so that's some heavyweight potential for serious teasing. And finally, the presence of the supernatural means you can pull whatever other tricks to expand the story later, like:

• peripheral benefits for the guy from being a succubus' (former?) lover, like the power of effortless seduction
• shenanigans during his therapy; maybe the daughter poses as a "reformed" succubus and starts attending it, too, only to start fucking the participants on the side
• any other magical powers, or even some worldbuilding about the origins of the succubi
• and you can of course bring back the demon mother as well

Also, this thread might be better suited for the Story Ideas forum.

 

[SimonDoom]

I like story idea number 2 quite a lot. It's interesting, unusual, and potentially very kinky.

But nobody can decide this for you. In your shoes, I would ask myself, "What would I like to read more?" Write what you would enjoy reading.

 

[NoCa]

Also, this thread might be better suited for the Story Ideas forum.

I know. I already made a similar post there but nobody has thus far replied.

Edit: and of course somebody just did. Another vote for Miles and Ophelia.