Breaking Taylor comment & update

[turner28]

Ok I have had a few emails asking me about a sequel.

Yes I am writing it now. However, I would like some suggestions for something I would like to do. So please post them here if you dare


In Breaking Taylor I briefly mention a character named RICO. I need to bring him back around in part two. I have an idea, a good one but I am not really pleased with it because it is very limited. I wish I could tell you how Training Taylor is going but it would give away too much at this point.

Rico is a bad guy. I need some twisted ideas of how to bring him back into the picture.

I can tell you that one of the main characters is going to be killed off. Taylor will suffer terribly just moments before this happens. I would also like to do something with Phillip too but his story is just not blooming yet.

Anyone who posts a suggestion that I use will receive proper credit for it.

I am also looking for ideas for a new series. I prefer to write seriels because I tend to be longwinded when telling a story.

GUIDELINES:

1. No beastiality
2. No aliens, space etc.
3. Must be believable and could really happen


Beyond those I am open to suggestions.

I wish to thank you in advance for anything you post here.

E.T.

 

[driphoney]

You might want to post this type of thing over on the Story Feedback thread.

 

[turner28]

I just received an email of feedback that I feel the need to comment on.

The comment suggested that I break the story into chapters. There are 32 chapters in this book. I do not know why they are not on the story here but the story is broken into chapters. I apologize that this somehow got remeoved in the submission. If you would like a copy of the story as I submitted it please contact me.

E.T.

 

[turner28]

I am new to the forum. I have been a fan of Literotica for as long as it has existed. My husband joined when the site launched many years ago. I wonder if somewhere in the site he still has his account? I thank you for the post. Since I have put it here, if a moderator feels it would get a better response there I hope they will move it to the appropriate forum. I am not the type who likes to do multiple topics on the same issue.

Thank you.

E.T.

 

[driphoney]

I am new to the forum. I have been a fan of Literotica for as long as it has existed. My husband joined when the site launched many years ago. I wonder if somewhere in the site he still has his account? I thank you for the post. Since I have put it here, if a moderator feels it would get a better response there I hope they will move it to the appropriate forum. I am not the type who likes to do multiple topics on the same issue.

Thank you.

E.T.

There is no moderator for the Authors' Hangout, so it won't be moved. Too much multiposting of the same thread can be annoying, and I think it's even banned on this site, but the occasional shifting (by the poster) of a request from forum to forum to get feedback is common and not frowned upon. You're allowed to post anything you like here in the AH; it's wide-open. I was just trying to direct you to a lesser-used forum, but one that is specifically designed for the help you were requesting.

And welcome to Lit and the AH.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Yawn. No one here cares about yout your dum story. We already know its like every other lame story on LIT, which is 99% of them.

 

[turner28]

You have gall. A true critic READS the story before commenting on it.

You know something, I shouldn't have even acknowledged your post. Hoever, because I believe in this story I would not be true to it if I didn't. Let me tell you a little something about myself.

First, I am a college grad - Phi Theta Kappa top 5% in my graduating class. I made the Dean's List EVERY semester, had scholarships etc. My work for my writing classes has been published in numerous college publications and this was over 10 years ago.

I wrote my first novel in 1989. I never published it. I began focusing on poetry because back then I was shy. My poems are INTERNATIONALLY published. Someday Soon won the Editor's Choice Award, is published in a vollention called Endless Mysteries and was the first of MANY poems to win me POET OF THE YEAR nominations.

My non fiction works won many college awards. So when you speak of critiquing an author's work look at the type of author you are dealing with.

I put little of this on my profile because I want my work to stand for itself, not because I am that damn good. I have written fetish for over 15 years under numerous identies. Only now have I chosen to beginw riting under my real name. Only now have I chosen to publish commercially. I do not write because I want recoginition. If that was the case I certainly would not have chosen this site. I write because I ENJOY it and because the members here have been good to me over the years. I write because readers want to read. I write for THEIR enjoyment. I love hearing from them, the good, the bad, everything.

Members like YOU, who comment such as you did, without reading the story are nothing but trollers PERiOD. Everyone knows who you are and why you are here. I pity that you have such an empty existence and pray that someone will come into your life that can fill the mpty void in your life.

Let me tell you another thing about my skills. IF I was a dime store author then WHY do I have an agent and a publisher? WHY would a certain WELL KNOWN author being reviewing my work as you read this? WHY would this story being going VIRAL if the work was not solid? WHY would a well known adult film produced be contacting ME to make me an offer for producing a movie from this book? My work stands on its own. I do not need to make a stink about it. I have no blurb ANYWHERE about this book. The book and the quality speak for itself.

I am sorry that you have no appreciation of this fine art. Yes I agree some stories I have seen could be considered SMUT. Like you I am not impressed by them, but I do not write SMUT. So, take this into consideration the next time you wish to comment on something you have not read. You lack of expeience and insight disables you. It hinders you from truly experiencing the finer things in life. I will keep you in my prayers that God will touch your life and open your eyes.

To those reading this post do not take it that I do not wish comments. I WELCOME comments from everyone. Comments from those who have actually read the material are what an author truly seeks, for how can one make a comment on the quality if they have not yet read it?

I love my readers, for you I do this.

E.T.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I stayed at a Holiday Inn once, so I'm qualified to do virtually anything.

Phi Theta Kappa; isnt that the community college honor society where the faculty nominates all the brownnosers for certificates printed with ballpoint pens?

 

[TxRad]

JBJ is the AH's pet troll. Not because we want him but there is no way of getting rid of him. He's been tossed from several other forums by the moderator but we don't have one. Just ignore him and act like he's not there. That is the best way to handle his bullshit. He has no stories posted to Lit so he dumps on everyone who has.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

TEX has one of those ballpoint pen citations for TALKING OUT HIS ASS WITH A MOUTH FULL OF WEENER.

 

[turner28]

Yes it is. I have over 130 credit hours. I attended the Univrsity of Kentucky after earning my Associates. The ONLY thing between me and my Bacholer's is foreign language. I just cannot seem to get a grasp on it until recently. I now have a friend assisting me and will be completing this requirement within the next year.

The community college I attended is a part of the University of Kentucky and my degree has the UoK stamp on it.

If you have nothing better to do than go around attempting to berate someone then I suggest you find someone ELSE because there is nothing you can say or do that I am ashamed of. You do not scare me, in fact you intrigue me.

You seem like a sub who needs some disciplne. I can arrange that. Just because my used name is lowercase do not mistake that for submissiveness. The use rname is purposely so because that is my ID nearly everywhere online. It makes my readers able to find me easier.

Now, if you have nothing else I have work to do. A literotica author is waiting on me to finish some editing. Unlike you, the author deserves my attention. When you have somethinga little more fruitful to say then say it. Until then I feel that a good disciplne session with a harsh master is what you need.

I can recommend a few if you like.

E.T.

 

[TxRad]

TEX has one of those ballpoint pen citations for TALKING OUT HIS ASS WITH A MOUTH FULL OF WEENER.

See what I mean. He's an idiot without a clue.

 

[turner28]

JBJ is the AH's pet troll. Not because we want him but there is no way of getting rid of him. He's been tossed from several other forums by the moderator but we don't have one. Just ignore him and act like he's not there. That is the best way to handle his bullshit. He has no stories posted to Lit so he dumps on everyone who has.

Thank you lol. I gave him a little advic ein my last post. Maybe he will take it.

 

[turner28]

See what I mean. He's an idiot without a clue.

Leaave it to me. I have a way with people like this.



I invite him to chat me on Yahoo.

You see I have dealt with empty personalities such as his and found them to make wonderful subs. All he needs is a firm hand and some disciplne. Why is he even around if he does not read? This is the forum for AUTHORS and READERS.

Obviously he is able to read or he wouldn't be able to post here. Hmmmm.


Got to get back to my editing now.

E.T.