Brand New Story

[Thongluver69]

Everyone. I've released my long awaited story " 1 Great Night". It was originally slated for August release, but my computer crashed, so, I hope you enjoy.

P.S. If you have any feedback on my story, feel free to email me at Thongluver69@literotica.org

 

[R Nitelight]

Thongluver69

And you are?

 

[Puddles The Wonder Poodle]

eh?

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[KillerMuffin]

Words of advice.

#1, try the feedback board. You're going to get heckled here.
#2, post a link. We're lazy, we aren't going to look.
#3, if you've not noticed already, the new scripts are equipped to send you feedback if so inclined.
#4, egos are very ugly things when they are so large. You aren't coming across very nicely. Impressions of you may make people not read or not like your story on its own merit.
#5, released? We generally refer to it as posted.

 

[jcgirl]

Words of advice.

#2, post a link. We're lazy, we aren't going to look.

exactly

 

[Angel]

#5, released? We generally refer to it as posted.

I tend to think of releasing as something one does with a bodily function

 

[Whispersecret]

Thongluver69, was this your first submission here? If so, your pompous manner might be forgiven. See, it seems a tad bit presumptuous to assume that we've all been "long awaiting" your story. And I have to agree that talking about a slated release time makes you sound like a Hollywood bigwig.

Also, you should usually spell out all numbers in your writing, i.e. "One Great Night."

Other than that, welcome to the board. It's a fun place, really.

 

[Puddles The Wonder Poodle]

once an editor, always an editor

Other than that, welcome to the board. It's a fun place, really.

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