Book: Nobleman: The Return

[R. Richard]

I asked for Literotica help for my book Nobleman: The Return and I got it! I did not win the prize, but Nobleman: The Return is now published in Amazon. I thank each of you, who nominated me. You will get an automatic e-mail from Amazon. which you can ignore. A couple of you were actually interested in the book and here's the link:

http://www.amazon.com/Nobleman-Return-R-Richard-ebook/dp/B016H0TBUQ/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=14
44601206&sr=8-1&keywords=nobleman%22+the+return+r.+richard

 

[49greg]

I just finished reading the teaser "look inside" bit. It was well written and an interesting switch from some old sci-fi/fantasy books I've read in the past where someone from our time gets slung into the past.

 

[R. Richard]

I just finished reading the teaser "look inside" bit. It was well written and an interesting switch from some old sci-fi/fantasy books I've read in the past where someone from our time gets slung into the past.

I thank you for 'well written.' I always try to take the path less traveled when I write a book. Readers may like my books or not, but they will find something different form the usual.

 

[someoneyouknow]

There are screams from the crowd and violence is immanent.

Immanent?

 

[lovecraft68]

There are screams from the crowd and violence is immanent.

Immanent?

Don't know for sure, but I bet its really going to happen.

 

[R. Richard]

Immanent wasn't the best choice. The violence was a part of the security response considering the size of the armed adversary.

 

[lovecraft68]

Immanent wasn't the best choice. The violence was a part of the security response considering the size of the armed adversary.

Its not a bad word choice, but you spelled it wrong its

imminent with an I.

You should do a quick edit on it.

 

[someoneyouknow]

From dictionary.com:

immanent

adjective

1. remaining within; indwelling; inherent.

2. Philosophy. (of a mental act) taking place within the mind of the subject and having no effect outside of it. Compare transeunt.

3. Theology. (of the Deity) indwelling the universe, time, etc.


imminent

adjective

1. likely to occur at any moment; impending: Her death is imminent.

2. projecting or leaning forward; overhanging.