BlackNudeMan
Literotica Guru
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Thanks man. Feel free to add to the madness!
I will at some point. Cheers man!
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Thanks man. Feel free to add to the madness!
the stage is yours!!
I've not written as much poetry as I use to - but when I do I find it therapeutic. I view it as a way to release the emotions that I often try to disengage myself from, the emotions that I bury beneath smiles, and laughter...so this is a poem I wrote for the 1st guy I ever knew I loved, and we're still friends...but it's not the same. I'm having to edit it b/c it had his name at the end...
I said “I love you”
I meant it from the start
You said “I love you too”
Were you fucking with my heart?
Something went wrong
How I wish I could see
You said “I love you”
Was it only to deceive?
The tears have yet to stop
My heart is torn in two
Was I foolish
Giving my trust to you?
You held my heart in your hands
For more than a mere day
I still don’t understand
How you could cast me away
A bullet would’ve been easier
I’m wishing I had died
I thought you loved me
Perhaps you lied
I never saw it coming
I wish it wouldn’t end
I’m being honest when I say
I’ll always be your friend
So When I say I forgive you
My heart is breaking again
It hurts like hell and I know
I’ll always love you .....
I couldn't have said it better. Thanks man. Honored to have you...even if you are a Sooner. Blech!!
I've not written as much poetry as I use to - but when I do I find it therapeutic. I view it as a way to release the emotions that I often try to disengage myself from, the emotions that I bury beneath smiles, and laughter...so this is a poem I wrote for the 1st guy I ever knew I loved, and we're still friends...but it's not the same. I'm having to edit it b/c it had his name at the end...
I said “I love you”
I meant it from the start
You said “I love you too”
Were you fucking with my heart?
Something went wrong
How I wish I could see
You said “I love you”
Was it only to deceive?
The tears have yet to stop
My heart is torn in two
Was I foolish
Giving my trust to you?
You held my heart in your hands
For more than a mere day
I still don’t understand
How you could cast me away
A bullet would’ve been easier
I’m wishing I had died
I thought you loved me
Perhaps you lied
I never saw it coming
I wish it wouldn’t end
I’m being honest when I say
I’ll always be your friend
So When I say I forgive you
My heart is breaking again
It hurts like hell and I know
I’ll always love you .....
Just when I was getting over your damn Tigers costing me 50 in Vegas!
Wow. I think we can all relate to this one. Powerful.
Wow! I felt your words in this one. Thank you for sharing. Wow!
Wow SD - sometimes you read something that resonates so strongly within yourself.... *hugs you tight* This pain is all too familiar.
Wow. I think we can all relate to this one. Powerful.
Here I stand
A man with desire in his eyes
wondering how long its gonna take to realize
that you
are the one that I can't ignore
every time I throw my hands up
I come back for more
so now what
are we gonna act like this aint real
are we really gonna act like we cant feel
that we have chapters we've yet to write
correct some wrongs and set things right
yeah I know its not easy
not supposed to be
principal's not convenient girl,
can't you see
that i'm putting me out there for you to know
that I'm down for it all, let's give it a go
Slick lines, bro. Tell me when "she" says "GO"
I'm a transplant, so I'm no Tiger Fan.
I'm almost afraid to ask...
SensualDreamer's poem would make one helluva song......just sayin'! I think it's wonderful.
Evening BMF, whaddup guys? I thought I'd come by and chill for a bit.![]()
Evening, BB. Whatcha drinking?
*Saunters up in heels*May I have a strawberry margarita, please!![]()
May I have a strawberry margarita, please!![]()
*Saunters up in heels*
Frozen or on the rocks, my sweet?
I'll bring you out some buttery nipples if you'll give the pole a go tonight!![]()
(btw every time I see BMF, I wanna say BIG MEECH! LARRY HOOVER!)
On the rocks please, with sugared rim, my usual!
Uh...is the buttery nipples to smear on the pole?I hope not!
(I may give the pole a going when I've had a couple of drinks in me, I get a bit shy at first)
*tells bartender to keep em coming*
*motions to mixologist* hook her up.