Blurting it out....Playground style

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My story being rejected cause of some fucking dumb ass excuse that doesn't even apply to my story.

If I'm telling a story and there is only ONE character, where in the fuck do you see quotation marks? And how in the hell do you want me to fix something that isn't even there?

Fuckin dumbshits

:rolleyes:
 
*shaking my pink tambourine*

when the end has come and buildings falling down fast
when we’ve spoilt the land and dried up all the sea
when everyone has lost their heads around us
you will find him, you’ll find him next to me

next to me – wooh hooo
next to me – wooh hooo
next to me – wooh hooo
 
Writers do not know how to critique their own words as they are written to affect others, not themselves. Only readers can offer response.

Ohhh they were read -- and I know the response they received :)

I have never written erotica for public consumption.... doing so for a general readership would be very different, and I don't know that it would suit me.
 
Hiya sweetheart! Life is goooood, kids are fantastic, just bought my dream Jeep Wrangler, the man is treating me well and vice versa.

I hope you are doing well, I think about you often. :rose: :kiss:

aww.. I just saw this. So happy for you! It is nice when "life is goooood". Keep up the good work! ;)
 
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