Blurting it out....Playground style

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Ever see a pissed off writer?!?! :mad:

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re: Poolside Fun

"This is a continuation of "Moving Day" where I first introduced Anne and her Uncle Brett."

And how are readers supposed to know this rather important fact BEFORE THEY OPEN THE FUCKING STORY?

Not telling people this, such as in the summary, is nothing more than a "fuck you" to the reader. ALL such stories get an automatic rating of 1.
 
Nothing better than kicking back with a bowl of jambalaya and a corona with some corn bread to sop up the hot sauce! :D
 
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