MarkoAaron
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Bigfoot Short Story (2 pages)
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silversword
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Non-human is not really my thing but I quite liked it.
Suffers a little bit at the start from a she did this, and then that, and then that. There is far more information in the opening paragraphs than I need to get into the story, some of it could be spread out.
Also would benefit from a good proof read, there are a number of words that are spelt correctly but in the wrong tense etc.
Suffers a little bit at the start from a she did this, and then that, and then that. There is far more information in the opening paragraphs than I need to get into the story, some of it could be spread out.
Also would benefit from a good proof read, there are a number of words that are spelt correctly but in the wrong tense etc.
MarkoAaron
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I use an online editor. Copy and paste a few paragraphs to weed out any misspelled words or mistakes such as "decicdie", misplaced characters and such. Finding an editor was a slow process, so I just edit my own the best I can.
I always point out that I'm an amateur and warn people that my work isn't the highest grade, but most of the time, my stories get favorable ratings and comments. A C grade beats an F, is how I look at it lol
