Better "Mature" stories

[Olive Hizklosoff]

I’ve got a few good ideas for stories and I’ve written a few good stories but here’s my problem. Each of the genres on Literotica have a following, People like to read about what interests them. Me, I’m a multi-genre person: I like Anal, Erotic Couplings, Fetish, Gay Male, Group Sex, Incest, Lesbians, Loving Wives, Interracial, and Mature. I can’t tell you on any particular day which one I’ll choose, but suffice it to say, there’s something in each category that I find titillating. But I have a problem with one of those categories being deficient.

Because I am 70 years old and my very horny wife is an incredibly young 68, I find the Mature genre to be severely lacking. It’s usually about a 20 year old that’s mowing the lawn of a divorced 50 year old woman. He’s buff and she’s horny. Or an older man who is lucky enough to have a roll in the hay with a 20 year old.

My wife and I, just married 48 years, made our bones on blowjobs in the car behind her elementary school. We were educated by the great porn films of the late 60’s and early 70’s: Deepthroat, The Devil In Miss Jones, Behind The Green Door, The Opening Of Misty Beethoven, and many other classics. You haven’t seen porn if you haven’t watched “Never A Tender Moment” with Marilyn Chambers.

We are not old. The toy bag in the closet is testimony to that. Anal toys for her, anal toys for me. A tub of coconut oil to make every work smoothly. A little Jameson’s, some champagne, and maybe some Cialis to stir the pot! My wife, shaved since 1973, has the most beautiful labia and a clitoris that begs to be sucked. I found her G-spot years ago and she couldn’t be happier.

Back to my lament. More stories about mature people, real mature people. After all, 70 IS the new 40!

 

[MyRubiLips]

Back to my lament. More stories about mature people, real mature people. After all, 70 IS the new 40!

Do you have an actual story idea?

 

[Olive Hizklosoff]

Story Ideas

I've stated my case. I've written stories that have been highly ranked. I'm suggesting that those who like to write stories with a mature theme could write stories that are more appealing to mature people.

 

[Olive Hizklosoff]

Mature Styories

Oh gee, MyRubyLips, I can't find any story that you've written. Why comment when you have no basis?

 

[MyRubiLips]

Oh gee, MyRubyLips, I can't find any story that you've written. Why comment when you have no basis?

I am the mod to Story Ideas. You posted in Story Ideas. You never posted a story idea. I shall move your thread to an appropriate board on Lit.



Thank you for your concern.

 

[RejectReality]

Age difference stories are what "sell" in the category, so that's what's going to dominate.

The only way to change that is to write good stories of the type you're requesting to draw attention to them.

 

[lovecraft68]

The problem is porn/erotica has its tropes and treasured premises people cannot get enough of and it shapes what people expect

Just as the word taboo has become all but synonymous with incest in erotica, 'mature' has become cougar/cub milf or young girls looking for a daddy not their daddy....

 

[LadyVer]

I feel your pain. I was talking to a Lit writer a while back about how I wished there were more stories about mature couples that didn't make the couple look like they either had one foot in the grave or that they were perverts. His response was that he didn't want to read stories that reminded him of real life. The thing is, most fiction--especially erotica--is not based on what the author has experienced in real life. It's based on fantasy. It's not like an author has to include every wrinkle, disease, and age-related physical failing in a mature couple story. If writers did that for every story they wrote for any age group, readers would look elsewhere.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I’ve got a few good ideas for stories and I’ve written a few good stories but here’s my problem. Each of the genres on Literotica have a following, People like to read about what interests them. Me, I’m a multi-genre person: I like Anal, Erotic Couplings, Fetish, Gay Male, Group Sex, Incest, Lesbians, Loving Wives, Interracial, and Mature. I can’t tell you on any particular day which one I’ll choose, but suffice it to say, there’s something in each category that I find titillating. But I have a problem with one of those categories being deficient.

Because I am 70 years old and my very horny wife is an incredibly young 68, I find the Mature genre to be severely lacking. It’s usually about a 20 year old that’s mowing the lawn of a divorced 50 year old woman. He’s buff and she’s horny. Or an older man who is lucky enough to have a roll in the hay with a 20 year old.

My wife and I, just married 48 years, made our bones on blowjobs in the car behind her elementary school. We were educated by the great porn films of the late 60’s and early 70’s: Deepthroat, The Devil In Miss Jones, Behind The Green Door, The Opening Of Misty Beethoven, and many other classics. You haven’t seen porn if you haven’t watched “Never A Tender Moment” with Marilyn Chambers.

We are not old. The toy bag in the closet is testimony to that. Anal toys for her, anal toys for me. A tub of coconut oil to make every work smoothly. A little Jameson’s, some champagne, and maybe some Cialis to stir the pot! My wife, shaved since 1973, has the most beautiful labia and a clitoris that begs to be sucked. I found her G-spot years ago and she couldn’t be happier.

Back to my lament. More stories about mature people, real mature people. After all, 70 IS the new 40!

Get a grip. Seventy isn't the new anything. Youre on your last roundup and cattle drive to Wichita.

 

[oggbashan]

I've stated my case. I've written stories that have been highly ranked. I'm suggesting that those who like to write stories with a mature theme could write stories that are more appealing to mature people.

You might like some of mine:

https://www.literotica.com/s/hedgehog-feud

https://www.literotica.com/s/dinner-with-friends-1

https://www.literotica.com/s/golf-widower

 

[jehoram]

I've written one story for the "Mature" category called "The Long Frost." I don't think that makes me an expert, but it's gotten fair reviews.

For me, it isn't just that the characters in the story are fifty-plus. It's that they bring into their sex lives some of the perspective of growing older, surveying a lifetime of loving and learning. For them, sex is especially precious because they know that it may not last forever, and that there's always the chance that its importance (or even its possibility) may fade sooner than they'd like it to. If the story can convey these things, it belongs in the "Mature" category. Otherwise, it's just older people screwing.

 

[lovecraft68]

It dawns on me that when you look at mature the definition-here- is "may December lust and love affairs which may be part of the reason most things there are age gap rather than things between two older people.

 

[49greg]

The second story I ever posted, "Internet: First Date" - https://www.literotica.com/s/internet-first-date - is a story about a couple of 40 somethings. Not advanced age, and twenty odd years younger than I am, but certainly not spring chickens.

Another story of mine has a mid thirties couple. Again not old, but at least old enough to be real people.

Although I've got to admit that I've got other stories in the works with young man older woman themes, as this seems to be the most popular. And I do have several young man and older mom and older women stories posted.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

I've written stories about couples getting on in years, but put them in Erotic Couplings just because of the description on the Mature category. They have since been taken down.

 

[MyRubiLips]

When the tag for the Mature category states:

May / December lust & love affairs.

It's hard to see why people post age-gap stories there instead of two seventy-year-olds.

 

[TxRad]

When the tag for the Mature category states:

It's hard to see why people post age-gap stories there instead of two seventy-year-olds.

When you go to post a story, the list doesn't have that tag. It just says mature. I made that mistake with a couple of stories that if i had known the may/dec thing, I would have placed them in Romance.

 

[MyRubiLips]

When you go to post a story, the list doesn't have that tag. It just says mature. I made that mistake with a couple of stories that if i had known the may/dec thing, I would have placed them in Romance.

Ah, yes. Not checking on a category before you submit a story to it could cause that complication.

 

[sr71plt]

Ah, yes. Not checking on a category before you submit a story to it could cause that complication.

As will, as a mod, not checking the forum explanation before dumping an irrelevant thread in it.

 

[sr71plt]

I have sunset-to-sunset stories here, but they are in the GM category.

 

[Swilly]

I've written two that might interest you. The first is posted here on lit, that has a bit of a twist.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-night-of-their-lives

The other is a story called Endless Summer, and it is part of the anthology I have linked to in my signature.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

When the tag for the Mature category states:

It's hard to see why people post age-gap stories there instead of two seventy-year-olds.

No one wants to read about geezer sex.

 

[lovecraft68]

No one wants to read about geezer sex.

I suppose some might, but that' the minority.

Check out incest...all the mom's look like cougar porn stars and all the dad's have the muscles of twenty year old kids.

There are no tits sagging down to their naval, no love handles, saddle bags, wrinkles, grey hair, no beer guts, balding, ed issues....

Only the pretty people sell on Lit.....or in society in general

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I suppose some might, but that' the minority.

Check out incest...all the mom's look like cougar porn stars and all the dad's have the muscles of twenty year old kids.

There are no tits sagging down to their naval, no love handles, saddle bags, wrinkles, grey hair, no beer guts, balding, ed issues....

Only the pretty people sell on Lit.....or in society in general

In reality all the geezers have bellies and tits that hang to their knees.

 

[MyRubiLips]

As will, as a mod, not checking the forum explanation before dumping an irrelevant thread in it.

If you don't like "non story idea FULL stories" being placed in Story Feedback, take it up with Laurel. I do as she says. In fact, she's told me she doesn't want them deleted like Bard has done.

 

[TxRad]

In reality all the geezers have bellies and tits that hang to their knees.

Speak for yourself. Oh, wait, you were.