Varian P
writing again
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I've got a little story at the first draft stage, and have come a-beggin' for a beta reader.
Okay, I lied. It's not little. It's 18,250 words long. It will belong in the incest category (and there is lots and lots of sex), but is, I think, atypical in that the story is a bit heavy and allegorical.
I'm not so worried at this stage about the finer details--grammar, punctuation, etc., but rather hoping to get input on the structure and balance of the story, and gauge how various themes I'm trying to get across are coming through.
If you need a beta reader too and would be interested in swapping, shoot me a PM.
-Varian
Okay, I lied. It's not little. It's 18,250 words long. It will belong in the incest category (and there is lots and lots of sex), but is, I think, atypical in that the story is a bit heavy and allegorical.
I'm not so worried at this stage about the finer details--grammar, punctuation, etc., but rather hoping to get input on the structure and balance of the story, and gauge how various themes I'm trying to get across are coming through.
If you need a beta reader too and would be interested in swapping, shoot me a PM.
-Varian
