Author seeking Editor...

[starlightqueen]

Hi
This is my first story (and the first in a series of 22 shorts revolving around the same six characters). The characters live in the two apartments of a big house as they attend a fictional Canadian University. Each short is titled after a tarot card, and the themes in the short are based on the nature of that card.

In this short, the sex is a pretty basic hetro twosome drinking some wine, eating some McDonalds, getting acquainted, and seeking some gratification.

I'm pretty confident in my ability with spelling and grammar (but if you want to check for those things too, it would be reassuring ). What I really want is an honest opinion on ease of reading/understanding, can bodies bend that way?, "wasn't she on top a second ago?" consistency issues, and if it is hot enough/could it be hotter.

Any takers? Need more info? Let me know!

 

[SweetErika]

I have some room. As ridiculous as it sounds, I can't find the link to my VE profile, but the text is below. PM me if you think we might be a good match, and I'll send you my email address.

I'm an avid reader, married, bi, polyamorous, adventurous, very sexual and have a fair amount of experience and knowledge on a variety of subjects including groups, toys, loving wives, anal, oral, BDSM, and nonconsent.

I have a sharp eye for spelling, grammar, structure, and would be happy to help you with overall editing, specific areas, reader impressions, research, useful resources, etc. My editing style would likely be described as constructive and thorough. Before contacting me, please ensure you: (a) really want, and are willing to accept help/feedback; AND (b) have already edited the piece as much as possible yourself. I'll accept any format, but would prefer and will edit in Word/.doc.

Thanks for your consideration, and I look forward to working with you!

 

[trick_or_treat]

If it doesn't work out with SweetErika I would be happy to give it a try. I have only edited a couple things on here, but have been reading stuff (and editing in my head!) on the site for about a year.

The thing that drives me nuts the most is things like his left hand being on her breast and her thigh at the same time, so I would be happy to edit for that kind of thing. (I tried to get my husband to lie on the floor so I could check if something would work in another story last night!)

I will also edit for grammar/spelling/etc.

email me if you'd like me to read it over.