Djmac1031
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Hi, looking for some advice/ feedback from the audio creator crowd.
I wrote a script awhile back for a friend of mine; she'd already recorded a couple of my works and I wrote this piece with her in mind.
Without getting long winded, she's not going to be available to record it any time soon.
With her blessing, I'm considering a couple of options, the main one finding someone else interested in recording it.
The story, in a nutshell, involves a sexy She-Demon who's makes a deal with a guy she meets at a bar where he gets to fuck her but if he cums before she does she wins his soul.
It would need a female narrator of course.
I'm also just considering publishing the script as a story itself and then if someone wants to record it they can.
My original intention was to have my friend record it and publish the audio here THEN publish the script on my profile with a link to her audio.
So I'll publish an excerpt here to give an idea of what its about in more detail. I'm kinda at a point of just offering it to anyone interested in recording it:
***
I'm sorry, what did you say? “Buy you a drink, beautiful?” Really? Is that the best you got?
No, seriously, what did you expect to happen with that pick up line?
Oh, “Just to get to know me better?” You seriously expect me to believe that? Look, sweetie, you're out of your league here. Now just piss off back to your Cro Magnon buddies over at the pool table, m'kay?
You're still here? Persistent bugger, aren't you? I can appreciate that. [Sigh] Okay fine, buy me that drink. Then tell me what you expect in return. Because I know men like you. You always expect SOMETHING in return. So let's cut through all the bullshit and just get right to it, shall we?
Ah. You wanna take me home. And by that you of course mean you wanna fuck me. Oh, stop pretending to be flustered, we both know that's what you want: To get your dick wet.
Do I look that easy, hun? Did you think you could just buy me one drink and I'd part my long, curvy legs for you, hmm? That I’d wrap these plump, red lips around your throbbing cock, suck you off, swallow your load?
Aw, what's the matter, sugar snack? All unnerved because your little game isn't going to plan and I'm calling you out on your bullshit? Look, stop trying to pretend your intentions were somehow chivalrous and just admit it: You're simply trying to get laid.
You spotted this tall, almost Amazonian woman in a slinky red dress, with her tits practically spilling out of it, and you got all hot and bothered; started imagining running your hand up these thighs to find out whether or not I'm wearing panties under this exceptionally short skirt.
So you figured you'd come over here, flash those admittedly beautiful eyes and handsome smile at me, offer me a drink, and I'd just... what? Roll over and spread wide like a bitch in heat?
How adorably naive of you, sweetie. But, tell ya what; I'm off duty tonight, and more than a bit bored. So maybe, just maybe mind you, we can indulge in this little game. But only if you're willing to play by my rules.
Yes, you heard me. MY rules. What are they? Well, it's really quite simple, hun: I'll go home with you, right now, and absolutely fuck your brains out.
But, and this is a pretty big ‘but’ here, you have to make me cum before you do. Not just turn me on, not just get me wet. Make... me... cum. Full fledged, earth-shattering orgasm.
Now now, slow down, champ! So sure of yourself, are you? Before you agree so readily, you need to understand the consequences of losing.
Because if you fail, if you cum before I do... I win your soul.
No. I'm not kidding. Seriously, I'm not. Does it look like I'm joking?
Okay honey, I hate wasting time, so let me spell it out clearly for you. I'll use small words so you can understand.
My name is Cozbi. I'm a Demon from Hell. Yes, THAT Hell. Although it's not all fire and brimstone; parts of it are actually quite lovely... but I digress.
I wrote a script awhile back for a friend of mine; she'd already recorded a couple of my works and I wrote this piece with her in mind.
Without getting long winded, she's not going to be available to record it any time soon.
With her blessing, I'm considering a couple of options, the main one finding someone else interested in recording it.
The story, in a nutshell, involves a sexy She-Demon who's makes a deal with a guy she meets at a bar where he gets to fuck her but if he cums before she does she wins his soul.
It would need a female narrator of course.
I'm also just considering publishing the script as a story itself and then if someone wants to record it they can.
My original intention was to have my friend record it and publish the audio here THEN publish the script on my profile with a link to her audio.
So I'll publish an excerpt here to give an idea of what its about in more detail. I'm kinda at a point of just offering it to anyone interested in recording it:
***
I'm sorry, what did you say? “Buy you a drink, beautiful?” Really? Is that the best you got?
No, seriously, what did you expect to happen with that pick up line?
Oh, “Just to get to know me better?” You seriously expect me to believe that? Look, sweetie, you're out of your league here. Now just piss off back to your Cro Magnon buddies over at the pool table, m'kay?
You're still here? Persistent bugger, aren't you? I can appreciate that. [Sigh] Okay fine, buy me that drink. Then tell me what you expect in return. Because I know men like you. You always expect SOMETHING in return. So let's cut through all the bullshit and just get right to it, shall we?
Ah. You wanna take me home. And by that you of course mean you wanna fuck me. Oh, stop pretending to be flustered, we both know that's what you want: To get your dick wet.
Do I look that easy, hun? Did you think you could just buy me one drink and I'd part my long, curvy legs for you, hmm? That I’d wrap these plump, red lips around your throbbing cock, suck you off, swallow your load?
Aw, what's the matter, sugar snack? All unnerved because your little game isn't going to plan and I'm calling you out on your bullshit? Look, stop trying to pretend your intentions were somehow chivalrous and just admit it: You're simply trying to get laid.
You spotted this tall, almost Amazonian woman in a slinky red dress, with her tits practically spilling out of it, and you got all hot and bothered; started imagining running your hand up these thighs to find out whether or not I'm wearing panties under this exceptionally short skirt.
So you figured you'd come over here, flash those admittedly beautiful eyes and handsome smile at me, offer me a drink, and I'd just... what? Roll over and spread wide like a bitch in heat?
How adorably naive of you, sweetie. But, tell ya what; I'm off duty tonight, and more than a bit bored. So maybe, just maybe mind you, we can indulge in this little game. But only if you're willing to play by my rules.
Yes, you heard me. MY rules. What are they? Well, it's really quite simple, hun: I'll go home with you, right now, and absolutely fuck your brains out.
But, and this is a pretty big ‘but’ here, you have to make me cum before you do. Not just turn me on, not just get me wet. Make... me... cum. Full fledged, earth-shattering orgasm.
Now now, slow down, champ! So sure of yourself, are you? Before you agree so readily, you need to understand the consequences of losing.
Because if you fail, if you cum before I do... I win your soul.
No. I'm not kidding. Seriously, I'm not. Does it look like I'm joking?
Okay honey, I hate wasting time, so let me spell it out clearly for you. I'll use small words so you can understand.
My name is Cozbi. I'm a Demon from Hell. Yes, THAT Hell. Although it's not all fire and brimstone; parts of it are actually quite lovely... but I digress.
