Asian girl submits to white men

[amyiscold]

Yes, this is another thread about an Asian girl submitting to her white boss.

Last year, I’ve written 2 chapters about an Asian intern slowly being seduced and eventually giving into her white boss.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
I enjoyed the process of writing the stories but I’ve been busy with life and haven’t been writing since. But now that I have some time, I don’t really know how I should take the story further, although I do want to continue this story, perhaps write a finale?

Please give me some comments on my writing style or any interesting ideas you have!

 

[Rob_Royale]

I read the first one a while back and it was good. No clue when I'll get to the second, I'm pretty busy myself.

But reread your work and decide where you want it to end. Break up with bf and marry boss or maybe she breaks up with both and finds a new man outside of that triangle as way to start with a clean slate. Remember, no matter how enamored with the boss she is, there are other jobs, other men. Every woman knows this.

 

[Yarglenurp]

Really fun reads, both of them. I like your style, not much to say except to say that you do a good job of keeping things moving without going too fast.

I think the answer has to depend on you… which ending is most arousing for you to write?

Also, maybe ask yourself which audience you want to cater to?

When I was writing an ending for my first series (coincidentally also a WMAF-themed story), I realized that what my audience wanted to read and what I really enjoyed writing were a bit different.

I’m reasonably certain the majority of your audience is going to want her to ultimately break up with her Asian partner and stay with the powerful white male, maybe get pregnant by him as well. If the thought of that happening makes you want to masturbate, then you should go that direction. If not, then choose a different ending.

Whichever one is most emotionally satisfying to you should be the ending you choose.

 

[IARainman]

I can’t help but place myself into your scenes, very inspiring!

 

[IARainman]

So many possible directions to go, but they probably have to be in your fantasy realm for you to write about

 

[SweetOblivion]

Yes, this is another thread about an Asian girl submitting to her white boss.

Last year, I’ve written 2 chapters about an Asian intern slowly being seduced and eventually giving into her white boss.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
I enjoyed the process of writing the stories but I’ve been busy with life and haven’t been writing since. But now that I have some time, I don’t really know how I should take the story further, although I do want to continue this story, perhaps write a finale?

Please give me some comments on my writing style or any interesting ideas you have!

Get some experience of all submission entails and you may find your writing acquires greater depth and understanding of the topic watch out for sleazoids though

It is always interesting to find how cross cultural understanding can overcome the difference in perspective between two cultures in both the detail of experience and the overarching approach of white daddy and yellow to brown surrender sweety

Smiles