are you into rough buttfucking?

[Glysereen]

if you are, then i'm hoping you'll like my story...... check it out:

http://english.literotica.com/stori...y.php?id=204247

please, please -- no grammar pointers. if i missed a comma, or whatever, that's how it is..... i wrote it fast, and i don't feel like going over it with a fine tooth comb.

did it make you hot? did you cum? did you think about it the next day? that's what i'd like to know....
thanks,
glysereen

 

[daiseelady]

if you are, then i'm hoping you'll like my story...... check it out:

http://english.literotica.com/stori...y.php?id=204247

please, please -- no grammar pointers. if i missed a comma, or whatever, that's how it is..... i wrote it fast, and i don't feel like going over it with a fine tooth comb.

did it make you hot? did you cum? did you think about it the next day? that's what i'd like to know....
thanks,
glysereen

The link didn't work for me.

 

[Glysereen]

awe man.....

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204247

if that doesn't work, it's called "searing encouter" in the new stories section dated 6/17/05.

peace,
glysereen

 

[Goldeniangel]

damn good... very hot... thoroughly enjoyed even though not all of it was completely to my taste, the rest of it was so hot that it didn't even matter =)
wonderful!

 

[Lustin Kink]

Although nonconsensual sex isn't really my thing, I can say it was a hot story for me up until you started mentioning blood. As I said, not my thing. Your imagery was superb. The mental image I had of you "tending to yourself" afterwards was repulsive. Take that as a testament to how effective the quality of your descriptions were. I am not by any means saying I hated your story because of its content. I don't doubt that there are readers out there that will find your story extremely exciting and arousing. I recommend that they read it.

When writing a story, try to stay with a single tense. Some of your story is past tense and some is present tense. It makes the flow of the story a little rough. Your are a good writer and I'm sure you have plenty of great stories waiting to be brought to the Lit readers. Keep writing!

~Lustin Kink