Another FEEDBACK thread

[mtnman2003]

Ok, so I am a feedback, votes, ratings whore! I know it! I write for it!

But then along comes a feedback that tickles me. Makes me want to write again!
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This message contains feedback for: mtnman2003
About the submission: Family
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Glorious!

There wasn't a single believable moment, nor a credible line of
dialogue, and yet it was the most cunt-wetting story I have ever read!

The images you created had my pussy throbbing and my hands seeking my
nipples as my eyes hungrily devoured the screen.

Wonderful and thanks for such an intense orgasm!
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I wish they would give email addresses, send me photos..... sigh

So, you have one or two to share?

Mtn

 

[cloudy]

I got this via PM a few days ago...it made my week:

i just wanted to express that your stories make me believe in miracles...
seriously, I really enjoy reading your lit...it's easy to lose myself in, which is sometimes difficult with erotic prose.
anywho, thank you!!!

 

[oggbashan]

I liked this one.

About the submission: White Scut
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

That was freaking nasty-and it makes me hope you are not a
social worker or a police officer.

Og

 

[TxRad]

About the submission: White Scut
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

That was freaking nasty-and it makes me hope you are not a
social worker or a police officer.

Og

Should we tell them that you are on the local council......

 

[oggbashan]

Should we tell them that you are on the local council......

No. White Scut might get me a larger majority.

Any porn videos wouldn't. I should have made the videos when I was young...

Og

 

[TxRad]

No. White Scut might get me a larger majority.

Any porn videos wouldn't. I should have made the videos when I was young...

Og

You and me both....

 

[TheeGoatPig]

Just got this today (which is odd, the story is over a year old):

About the submission: Working Out
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Why do you have to ruin a good story by being a fucking pig and having your protagonist express a desire to fuck his wife's daughter?

 

[oggbashan]

Just got this today (which is odd, the story is over a year old):

About the submission: Working Out
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I get occasional PCs and feedback on my older stories.

Feedback is easy to see because it comes as a new email. PCs? With 148 submissions I'm not aware when a new PC is posted. It might take months for me to notice it.

The anonymous feedback on White Scut? That story was posted April 2003.

Og

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I get -

Your rite Jackson. You rite tripe.

At least he could have used spell check

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I just got the following and I'm quite pleased:

wow!...I'm speechless!
12/10/06 by sack in USA
The best story I have read in a lon-n-n-n-g-g-g-g- time!

 

[sack]

and I'm still recovering from it.....

Totally unfair that your story didn't get an "E".


Sack

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Totally unfair that your story didn't get an "E".


Sack

Thanks, Sack. Appreciated.

Then, on the other side of the coin:

Not enough
12/10/06 By: Anonymous
He should have sold her on the open market into a life of being used with no pay in a bordello somewhere out of the way. She would have done well until either drugs, diseases, or abuse killed her. Who knows she might have lasted two or three years.

 

[TheeGoatPig]

About the submission: Over the Sink Ch. 01

Comments:

pretty good story. my sis is the one who told me about it. really close to our real start.

I'm not sure how to feel about this. The story begins with a brother practically raping his sister (she digs it in the story, but that's fiction)...