ninalee312
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- Nov 6, 2006
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Hi all - I am looking for someone to help edit one rather longish story (it is a Part 2) of an already posted story called "Out of Town Visit". I guess the easiest thing would be for anyone who is interested to check out the stories I have posted, and to get back to me with any pertinent information about their strengths/weaknesses as an editor. Since most of my writing tends to be quite dry and professional, I am looking for someone who could give a bit of insight into crafting effective/better dialog as well as someone who won't yell at me when I switch narrative perspectives in my stories but rather be able to suggest how I can get around that seemingly horrendous faux pas 
Many thanks in advance,
nina
Many thanks in advance,
nina