Annonymous

[caprine]

To my readers...

Despite the above comments, I do encourage any feedback. The positive kind of critique/feedback is more useful to an author, but, hey, send me your comments. Thanks to one and all who read my stories and especially to those who take the time to make a comment on whatever.

 

[caprine]

Thank You...

This thread is dedicated to giving replies to Anonymous whom asks you a question without realising there is no way to give them an answer.


Anonymous of USA
Re: JOY

There will be no part two. The story is finished though I may re-edit as a longer version at a future date. Thanks for your interest, comments and vote.


Thank you.

EDIT: Apologies for spelling mistake in thread title.

neonlyte for giving authors this chance to blow off steam and provide answers to those profligate anonymous comments, both the bad comments AND the good ones.

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...I feel more alive when I’m writing than I do at any other time—except when I’m making love. Two things when you forget time, when nothing exists except the moment—the moment of writing, the moment of love. That perfect concentration is bliss.”
- May Sarton

 

[Boxlicker101]

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101
About the submission: Good Times on Gilligan's Island
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
as good as the story was, why couldn't ginger get the same as mrs. howell?

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was really a fun one to write. I had to have three couples and, since Mr. Howell is so preoccupied with money, I thought he should be the one left out. I also wanted to feature three different kinds of sex and, The Skipper being a sailor and all, this seemed to be the most logical way to distribute them.

By the way, doesn't your keyboard have a shift key?

 

[Boxlicker101]

This message contains feedback for:
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Shut the fuck up, You fat fuck what do you know about politics anyway. I bet you take it up the whazoo, most Rethugs do.

Gee, Any Mouse, thaks loads for the intelligent comments and the useful info. I will certainly try to learn something more abut politics, in case I ever want to put something up the whazoo, whatever that is, or be a Rethug, whatever they are.

 

[SweetWitch]

On A Little Human Decency:

Romantically Correct
08/25/08 By: Anonymous in Nigeria, Africa
Love this story! from start to finish, it intrigued me, real life like and so sweet, loving.. no sex scenes but yet it did not take away the beauty of the story..suspense, fears, love , all added up to make a marvelous rages to riches story!

Great! Thanks.

Were there rages in the story? I don't remember that.

 

[starrkers]

Thank you, Anonymous in USA. You can rest assured I won't let him run me off, but I thank you for the support. And I agree with your assessment wholeheartedly.

 

[sr71plt]

Hmmm. Some of this anonymous feedback doesn't seem to relate to the stories at all.

 

[starrkers]

Hmmm. Some of this anonymous feedback doesn't seem to relate to the stories at all.

You sound surprised, sr. Why would that be? We are talking to Anonymous here

 

[sr71plt]

You sound surprised, sr. Why would that be? We are talking to Anonymous here

ahhhh. I must have forgotten to include the "not surprised" smiley.

 

[starrkers]

ahhhh. I must have forgotten to include the "not surprised" smiley.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y286/starrcats/smilies/bigassgrin.gif

 

[only_more_so]

Two anonymous comments on my most recent chapter.

great
09/14/08 By: Anonymous
I enjoyed this chapter very much. No other story on this page has entangled me like this one. It never gets boring, its intelligent and so on... keep writing, and take all the time u want if u keep this quality up

wow
09/12/08 By: Anonymous
great chapter as always just wish you would post them faster

The time between chapters has always been a weak point with me. Sometimes I just get to a point where I need things to simmer in my mind before I can write it down. There are also times when I just can't write for some time (like when I changed jobs last year).

Anyway, I really appreciate all the great comments, they do encourage me to write and give me confidence to go ahead, even when I'm worried the latest chapter isn't up to snuff.

 

[AchtungNight]

This message contains feedback for: AchtungNight
About the submission: Busy on the Creek
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I'm jealous, and very wet too. Image me and Katie with the other two lovely girls licking eachothers. the only difference is i'm into girls only. Ilike to have my rear and butt hole licked and do the same with one or more lovers at the same time.Please give us some of this.
THANK YOU.
>>>>>>>>>

Reply: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I like bi-girls better than girls-only girls myself, being a guy, and anal rimming kinda grosses me out a little, but I will consider putting these things in future stories. Feedback appreciated.

- AN

 

[starrkers]

In PCs today, with a thermometer of 0 on Forever Autumn

remember where you are
10/23/08 By: Anonymous in usa
please dont forget what site you on, and what the vast majority of people who visit here are looking for... This is not readers digest, and thats good.. you are not ready even for that......

Dear Anonymous in usa
please don't forget to read what category you are in. There is a reason this was posted in the NON-Erotic section. But thank you for reading.

 

[only_more_so]

I just got an incredibly flattering, but anonymous, response to one of my stories (Reluctant Psychic). I wish he/she had left an address so I could thank them. Heck, I think the message was better written than my story!

When I opened the first chapter of this amazing story, my eyes were opened to the inherent eloquence of your writing. When I finished the last chapter, it was as awaking from a dream. This was less a story than an emotional ride, I was less amused by the paths of the characters than I became them. Their emotions were mine, their surroundings, tangible - Every thought shared in perfect unison. I must say your skill far surpasses anything I have seen recently, and rivals even the best literary works I have been priviledged to stumble across. As I return to my own reality, at the end of this brilliant journey, I say - well done.

 

[WRJames]

I got this one in the mail:

This message contains feedback for: WRJames
About the submission: The Descent Ch. 04
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

You ashamed of admitting you are writing GAY? Man on man is GAY. Your anal fixatation and man on man is GAY.

Don't be ashamed, come out of the closet, admit what you are wrtiing.

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*

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Well, actually I've been putting all the chapters under Novels and Novellas -- partly because they jump around in content. I think the description for the chapter makes in clear that it involves sex between two males.

I've always wondered why "mainstream" erotica will show girl on girl routinely but very rarely guy on guy. My novels have always had characters had both. But as to whether these characters are actually gay -- I'm not so sure.

Actually, there is a section in the beginning of Chapter 5 of the Descent that talks about this -- Tom is about to be raped by two ugly guys --
[QUOTE}
My God, he thought to himself, what am I doing here? He had loved playing the woman for Karina – beautiful Karina, even more enticing with that big purple cock jutting out of her. And Brian, smooth, thin, almost delicate, with those lovely little breasts. Women, he liked women, and if the woman happened to have a dick, all the better. But an actual male – fat, hairy, ugly, smelly – how could anyone want that? [/QUOTE]

Of course, as some of you may have guessed, the novel is about his transformation into a lady-boy. So we'll have to see if his attitude changes later on.

 

[jeninflorida]

from my last story

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

A wimp and his whore, I know where this story should go, shove it your filthy cunt.



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why do these men read Loving Wife stories? At least I got a reaction from this guy, made him upset

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Red Velvet Suite

car porn?
10/27/08 By: Anonymous
What exactly was the point of pointing out over and over exactly what kind of car it was?

Well, hell. It seemed like a good idea at the time...

 

[rgraham666]

Just got this.

This message contains feedback for:
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Happy Birthday, Ugly...Were you always this ugly or did you have to work at it?

Argh! A touch! I do confess it. I fear I breath my last! http://bestsmileys.com/lol/1.gif

 

[evanslily]

This message contains feedback for:
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I can't stand authors like you. Don't start on something else when you still have an unfinished story. And finish the damn story already ive only been waiting for about a MONTH. It's a waste of talent if you write part of a great story but you mever finish it.

What? But - but - but...

I haven't started on anything else, I promise!

(and Chapter 10 of Back to the Farm will be up tomorrow, okay?)

Sorry about the wait. Some people can churn out 10,000 words in a couple of days, but I can't. Wish I could...

 

[AchtungNight]

Anonymous: Thanks for your comments on 'Passion of Erika Christensen Ch.1.' Glad you liked it. The first chapter's the weakest, though. The next four (yes, I'm writing two more, burnout's over, they will be released soon God willing) are much hotter.

Ch.1- 'Opening Moves'. Erika loses her virginity (as you know from your reading).

Ch.2- 'Riding the Bull'. Erika falls victim to the Don Juan fantasy with Benicio del Toro. Her first swinging experiences.

Ch.3- 'Inauguration'. Erika's first experiences with other women. Guest stars: Geena Davis, Katherine Heigl, Busy Phillips and Alicia Witt.

Ch.4- 'Sailing with the Hudsons.' Kate & Sarah Hudson, Erika, three guys; swimming pool orgy, surprises and Swimfan. Coming in mid-November, maybe early December depending on editing speed.

Ch.5- ??? All I'm saying for now about this one is that it will be the series conclusion. Erika faces a challenge she never expected. Out early next year.

'The Rendezvous', 'Rekindled', 'Inside Out' and 'Closer Than Six Degrees' also feature Erika in various situations and plot developments related to the 'Passion' series. Ditto for 'Busy on the Creek' although Erika's not in that one. I appreciate feedback on them all.

 

[sr71plt]

Dear Anonymous:

I do appreciate that you have picked out one (just one) mistake in each of my six Christmas stories to send me a correction e-mail on (especially as that will help me improve the stories for the published version). And I don't even mind all that much that you accompanied it with a slam vote--because you've become somewhat of a lucky charm for me. All of those stories are pleasantly hot in rating.

I do sort of wish you'd point out other mistakes, though, as I'm sure there are more mistakes than just the one in each of those stories--there always are more mistakes to be found, no matter how much massaging a story is given.

And I'm a little concerned that you point out these mistakes in such a gleeful, gloating manner. You seem under the impression that I might think I don't make mistakes and that I agonize over the stories I post here to get everything just perfect. I don't. Although I did have the opportunity to have my backup reader look over the last story, each of the six was conceived, written, submitted, and posted by Lit. within a 10-hour max period (which was part of the holiday fun in writing them)--so it's hardly about perfect copy. What concerns me is that you'd think I'm somehow mortified to have mistakes in my copy. I wouldn't want that to fester any more self-righteous rot inside you and it obviously is now doing.

Oh, and Merry Christmas.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Oh, and Merry Christmas.

*snerk*

You forgot to wish them a Happy New Year!

 

[sr71plt]

*snerk*

You forgot to wish them a Happy New Year!

Oh, with luck they'll choke on their pettyness and bile before then.

 

[Safe_Bet]

Oh, with luck they'll choke on their pettyness and bile before then.

*Snerk*

Hey, SR? You mispelled "pettiness"...

*Runs and ducks*

 

[sr71plt]

*Snerk*

Hey, SR? You mispelled "pettiness"...

*Runs and ducks*

I'd like to say that was on purpose--but it wasn't. I did look at it twice and wonder (I'm a terrible speller)--but then I thought, "What the hell." Chances are I eventually would have looked it up while I was in the dictionary on another spelling (I'm, in fact, editing on the Islamist movement in the Netherlands at the moment--but there hasn't been anything in that sending me to the dictionary in well over an hour) and come back and corrected it. I wouldn't be surprised if more than half my postings have that second-chance "edited on" notation at the bottom of the box.

(In today's story, I did the unpardonable--spelling Santa Claus as Santa Clause--which zipped right through my backup reader too. I have a feeling there's no need for me to open the fireplace flue tomorrow night.)