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[CyranodeMelbourne]

Already done so, but I am sure that there is a good reason. It's not like I don't have stories to submit, it was an experiment to see how much difference the editing process makes.

 

[SweetWitch]

Already done so, but I am sure that there is a good reason. It's not like I don't have stories to submit, it was an experiment to see how much difference the editing process makes.

It makes a huge difference, if you get the right editor. They are fabulous people.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This is Ego building

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Read your Valentine's Day submission. Extremely clever and very, very
funny. Had a sense from the posts you'd be quite good. And I never paid
attention to style rules while reading, I was completely captivated and
entertained...which is the whole freakin point.

Christ, I wouldn't even attempt to write humor. Well done, Jenny,
looking forward to reading more of your work.

I keeeezzzz you,

JJackson

 

[Shugahhhh]

I keeeezzzz you,

JJackson

And I keeeez you back. That was me, sweetie, and I signed my name...well, this name.

And I still think you're brilliant.

 

[rachlou]

silly average romance nonsense
02/16/08 By: Anonymous
from the rave reviews of a couple named people, I thought it was something extra ordinary; instead, it's just a piece of nail parlor gossipy serial. <p>

I thought the main characters are about to experiment the next phase of genetic engineering, or that they're about to reveal they had detected graviton, or have solved the riddle of neutrinoes, or something like that! But, no!, it's Grace caught speechless being pursued by two younger men, both of whom are just so romantic and kind-hearted, with the more dimwitted Alex washing her feet while the Harley Davidson rider Tom touching her breasts, reaching out from the dark, so Grace is a bit jumpy now and then, lest Alex catches on what's going on! <p>

Geez, how exciting, in terms of plotting and characterization and writing! lol

Dear Anon,

Sorry you found the story so unexciting and predictable. I'l try harder next time.

Love Rach.

 

[jomar]

White Trash Ch. 3
It's about time...
02/09/08 By: Anonymous in us
..that you picked up where you left off with Chapter 2! Now don't keep us waiting another six months for more. This is HOT HOT HOT!

White Trash Ch. 4
Smokin HOT!!!
02/11/08 By: Anonymous in usa
Awesome tale of down-to-earth trailer trash! PUHLEEZE..keep it going!

Thanks, but it's likely to be another long while before I get to it again.

 

[rachlou]

oh yea
03/10/08 By: Anonymous
there is always a way to make a story worse

Nice PC on Angel Ch.03 accompanied by a 25 on the thermometer. Hmm.

Dear Anon,

Which bit of the story did you feel made it 'worse' exactly? You could have been more specific!

Rach

 

[Darkniciad]

A perfect example of the LW category. Both of these came in today ( after the story rose up to the first page of the toplist on the backs of a few new 5s )

Chris not only has a limp dick but a limp mind
03/30/08 By: Anonymous
The slow motherfucker just isn't fast enough or man enough to tell his wife that widdle bitty hims has gotten hims widdle feelings hurt because she is making more money than him...oh boo boo...kiss it and make the hurt go away mommie...Boy what trash...a mammas boy that just can't cut in in life because it doesn't revolve around him...poor poor widdle boy Chris...

One hates it for him...

It hurt to read this,,,
03/30/08 By: Anonymous in USA
The story was well written and the characters well developed, but...

I have neuropathy and as a result ED. Drugs won't help. I do however use several means to see that my wife is not left unsatisfied...

I think that the thing that hurt the most was Jackie's belligerence and unwillingness to listen.

Call me a wimp or whatever you want, I just don't like seeing people hurt... and yes, I KNOW it's just a story...

One hates it for her.

In a way, they're both half right. I wrote both characters as weak, flawed, and equally sharing the blame for the outcome where neither of them really win.

That would be why I called it "It Cuts Both Ways"

Must have been swept up from an even lower score, too. It's not currently displaying in the toplist's most recent update, even though the score/vote count would still place it on page 3 ( where it always falls with 1s every time it hits page 1 *laugh* )

 

[Boxlicker101]

Nice PC on Angel Ch.03 accompanied by a 25 on the thermometer. Hmm.

Dear Anon,

Which bit of the story did you feel made it 'worse' exactly? You could have been more specific!

Rach

I was a bit surprised at seeing this post. I have a story named "Angel Ch 03" and I wondered why you were commenting on PC on my story. Not to worry; they are two different stories.

 

[meg1]

hi all, red gave me this link. it's my first anon feedback on my first posted story:

I HATE stories that end with "To be continued" or in some other way
indicate that this is only the first chapter without informing the readers
of this important fact BEFORE they open the fucking thing. I hate it
so much that, after years of putting up with this shit, I decided that
all such stories get an automatic rating of one (1).

Since it is obvious that you don't give a fuck about the readers nor
your own story, you have no right to be pissed about this. Also, being a
newbie is no excuse.

 

[only_more_so]

Is it a 'stroke story' or is it a story with sex? You can't fill one page with something of a storyline and then let the next one just talk about f*ng. It gives me a headache trying to read you. you want to make it into both? Don't think so.

This was actually one of my first negative comments. Most people who have written to me seem to appreciate that I make real characters who have sex.

 

[SweetWitch]

This was actually one of my first negative comments. Most people who have written to me seem to appreciate that I make real characters who have sex.

I think that guy has hit me before. Don't give him/her another thought.

 

[only_more_so]

I think that guy has hit me before. Don't give him/her another thought.

I'll try not to. It seems like a bunch of my stories took a sudden negative hit. I wonder if I got my first troll. It's kind of exciting, but annoying at the same time. Like becoming a movie star: you know you made it when you get paparrazi stalkers, but you're also like, Crap!

 

[SweetWitch]

I'll try not to. It seems like a bunch of my stories took a sudden negative hit. I wonder if I got my first troll. It's kind of exciting, but annoying at the same time. Like becoming a movie star: you know you made it when you get paparrazi stalkers, but you're also like, Crap!

Yep. Know that feeling--to some extent. Just smile and wave.

 

[SweetWitch]

This message contains feedback for: SweetWitch
About the submission: A Little Human Decency Ch. 03
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I'm a sucker for happy endings - this one sucks. Nice written though

Um... Okay, thanks. By the way, it's not finished yet.

 

[slyc_willie]

I was wondering where my esteemed anonymous troll from Boston had gone . . . .

Comical
06/01/08 By: Anonymous in North Boston
I've read better plots in cheap & hackneyed comic books. An amateur author bitting more than he can chew often chokes, but rarely as bad as this. Slyc is a name you ought to overlook when looking for honest quality fiction. A death wish of an effort from Willie. I expected better.

Looks like "Mr. T" left him/her/it. That's sad. They were such a good couple.

What's really funny about this comment is that the story on which it was left, Last Wish, is being published.

Now I just have to determine if there is anything of real critical value in the comment to warrant leaving it posted.

 

[tickledkitty]

I was wondering where my esteemed anonymous troll from Boston had gone . . . .

Comical
06/01/08 By: Anonymous in North Boston
I've read better plots in cheap & hackneyed comic books. An amateur author bitting more than he can chew often chokes, but rarely as bad as this. Slyc is a name you ought to overlook when looking for honest quality fiction. A death wish of an effort from Willie. I expected better.

Looks like "Mr. T" left him/her/it. That's sad. They were such a good couple.

What's really funny about this comment is that the story on which it was left, Last Wish, is being published.

Now I just have to determine if there is anything of real critical value in the comment to warrant leaving it posted.

Well, there may be something to the "bitting off more than you can chew" thing.

 

[slyc_willie]

Well, there may be something to the "bitting off more than you can chew" thing.

That may be. I've never done any "bitting" before, but I'm willing to try . . . .

 

[evanslily]

good but,
07/17/08 By: Anonymous
i enjoyed the premise of the story but when you got to the sexual scenes your dialogue was very similar to your Tide series. takes away from the quality of the story

Dear Anon

Thank you for your comment. Yes, that's the trouble with dialogue during sex. Very samey. The thing is, my characters are having such a good time, they often forget to come out with original lines.

I must try harder. Maybe they could converse in a foreign language in the next story I write? Or maybe not speak at all, just grunt? Probably more realistic that way

Incidentally, Solstice (upon which story you left your comment) preceded my 'Tide series'...

But thanks anyway. I'll take it under advisement...

 

[michchick98]

But thanks anyway. I'll take it under advisement...

You guys always get such creative and interesting "anon" comments. I only get "I loved it!" type stuff. Which I guess beats the hell out of "you suck" type comments, but still.....

I guess the creative commenters don't like my stories

 

[only_more_so]

I keep getting feedback on my Reluctant Psychic series that says, "I love this series and the way you make me care about the people."

First of all, feedback is wonderful to get, so thanks! It's also nice to hear that you care about the characters. I really want them to seem real. So, hearing that they are real enough that you can care about them means I must be doing something right.

 

[SlickTony]

This was actually one of my first negative comments. Most people who have written to me seem to appreciate that I make real characters who have sex.

That's basically what my first pan said. (about Quid Pro Quo). The guy was annoyed that there were only two "money shots" in the whole story. Well, I have never written stroke pieces; they may start out that way but by the time they get into publication, they have evolved into stories with sexual content.

Another anonymous pointed out that 'Twas the Night Before Christmas" just wouldn't be believable today. Um, that was why it was set right after WWII.

 

[rgraham666]

Just got this in e-mail

Hi Wobbie,

You funny phony mellow fellow. Maybe you write more now, okay?

You is such a sweet little guy. Will you be satisfied that way? You tell, okay?

Wish I knew what to make of it. I'm inclined to think it's come from one of the usual suspects.

 

[rgraham666]

Snerk.

Just got this one in e-mail.

Howde Doudy, Rob-areno,

How is all the shameless self promo going for you these days. Don't you ever get tired of chiming in on everyone else's comments. You are boring, boring, boring...

 

[caprine]

Dear Anonymous In...

USA: Maybe niether Jack nor Gloria were interested in a prosthesis for his penis. Gloria: First Time
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=289803

USA: Yes, exercise in 1946 was not unknown. Just look at the special exercise room that was fitted out on the Titanic and the bicycle craze at the end of the 1800s. Look even at the original Olympics. Humans have always been interested in fitness as individuals or in groups. Amy: Chapt. 01
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=245502

????: Sorry, they did have funeral parlors in the 19th century, especially in the cities. But, it’s still true that in the rural areas, by far and large the majority of wakes and even a lot of the funerals, were held in home of the deceased. But even then, after the waking at home, the funeral was often in the church with burial in the nearby church cemetery. Clara: Summer Rose Conquers All.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=370840

????: Sorry, but my tale of Indian depredations on whites in the old west was placed by my suggestion and the site manager’s decision. It wasn’t a horror story overall. Emma: Passionate Bride part 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=314459

USA: “...A very enjoyable story. It rates much better than a ‘75’. ” My question, then why did you mark it as “75”? DUH! Gloria: First Time. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=289803

????: The site managers have the final determination of the category into which they place a story. I don’t always understand their placement either, but that’s just the way it is. Comment of wrong placement made in several of my stories.

????: Eighteen year old women don’t think of sex like this one did? Where have you been the last fifty years? Judy: The Babysitter http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=255831

????: “Dis sory o parents ‘drools’ how you no dat?” How do you answer Troll? You Don’t. Missy: Valentine Dance.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=239695

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...I feel more alive when I’m writing than I do at any other time—except when I’m making love. Two things when you forget time, when nothing exists except the moment—the moment of writing, the moment of love. That perfect concentration is bliss.”
- May Sarton