Annonymous

[FallingToFly]

wtf
04/13/07 By: Anonymous in USA
that was a waste of time, not a complete waste of time because the idea of hot guys in a band with accents is ok but what the hell was the point to that story?

Well, darling, if you had read the TITLE- it's Ch. 1.

Ch. 2 will be there soon. Sorry you missed the memo.

Edit: Ok, this time Anon had a point. Somewhere between submission and posting, an entire paragraph at the end vanished, lol. But I'll get it fixed.

 

[smy3th]

In reply to my story "A Bitch In Heat Gets Mounted" (wherein a horny housewife, posting pics of herself on the internet, angers her husband, causing him to bend her over the dining room table and spank and fuck her roughly)

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments: I just thought I'd tell you that subtract the posting of the pics online that's exactly what I want.. I'd never post that in public but I wanted you to know that for me at least I would love for my husband to do that to me..

I certainly wish this kind of comment was not made anonymously so I could reply.

I can only suggest that she actually tell her husband about it in some way. Maybe print the story out for him and say it really turns her on.

 

[smy3th]

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments: Thanks for the "spanked by wife 1 & 2. They were great. Any chance you'll do a 3?

Mike

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*

Well, why ask a question and then not leave any way for me to answer it, "Mike"?

I'd love to find time to do a 3, but it seems likely to be a while. But I certainly love getting feedback on a story of a genre that seems not all that popular.

 

[FallingToFly]

I can't give you a five
04/14/07 By: Anonymous in Canada
That'd be like lying, only the sort of lie you tell when you refuse to compare the acts of descriptions on this site. And to mention that if anyone gets confused at all with the common typo of "ign" then they really won't get your wonderful run on sentences... because really, who reads and still gets confused by three letters that don't form new words. Anywhoo, your descriptions are amazing, and you do them in that wonderful way of lucid, half blinding, long comparisons that promise originality. In the future you'll be a good read, and you've already set up a pretty interesting story line. You'd be a ten.. multipled by ten, for sure. But then.. good writers are usually already aware.. I'm excited for the next chapter !

Dear Anon, whoever you are- THANK YOU!!! That is some f the best feedback I have gotten in a very long time- at least it's honest and up front about why the score changed. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

 

[Skip1934a]

"I can't give you a five
04/14/07 By: Anonymous in Canada
That'd be like lying, only the sort of lie you tell when you refuse to compare the acts of descriptions on this site. And to mention that if anyone gets confused at all with the common typo of "ign" then they really won't get your wonderful run on sentences... because really, who reads and still gets confused by three letters that don't form new words. Anywhoo, your descriptions are amazing, and you do them in that wonderful way of lucid, half blinding, long comparisons that promise originality. In the future you'll be a good read, and you've already set up a pretty interesting story line. You'd be a ten.. multipled by ten, for sure. But then.. good writers are usually already aware.. I'm excited for the next chapter !"


"Dear Anon, whoever you are- THANK YOU!!! That is some f the best feedback I have gotten in a very long time- at least it's honest and up front about why the score changed. Thank you, thank you, thank you!"

Uh, anon, there was no confusion involved in my comment about the ign ending, or my appreciation of the writers skill in weaving a marvelous story. It was an inside joke because the author and I had mused over it before in personal conversation.
________

 

[Boxlicker101]

Disgusting.
11/02/06 by Anonymous in USA
degradation express - Boo!

Well, Mr. Anon., if you had looked, you would have seen this warning before the story:

CAUTION: This story is about a man having sex with a woman, including performing oral sex, while she is in her period. If you think this is gross and disgusting and the idea bothers you, you probably shouldn't read it.

 

[SweetWitch]

Too many characters
04/16/07 By: Anonymous in USA
It was interesting; but has become ridiculous to me. Way too many story lines. What started with 2 people can now become a sitcom of unending possibilities. I love to read a good book...in a couple of days. This could take years. Let Dixie die and get it over.

I'm sorry, Sweetpea. Too complicated for you? Don't tell me your favorite bookstore ran out of copies of "The Cat in the Hat" again... It must just suck to be you.

SW

 

[jeninflorida]

what a freak - anonymous

this is what he/she posted (I'm not going to share some of the emails, but the emails have been very nasty this week. the person sending these emails is very unstable)

isn't this nice --->
Anonymous
you whore go to some state prison and satisfy some hundred of the inmates...that s all you can do, a 3 holes body for fuck, pee, shit and vomit into, is that you?? no??? if you dont like it sue me you pathetic bitch

 

[SweetWitch]

this is what he/she posted (I'm not going to share some of the emails, but the emails have been very nasty this week. the person sending these emails is very unstable)

isn't this nice --->
Anonymous
you whore go to some state prison and satisfy some hundred of the inmates...that s all you can do, a 3 holes body for fuck, pee, shit and vomit into, is that you?? no??? if you dont like it sue me you pathetic bitch

I thought they didn't allow infantile adolescents on this site. Yuck.

 

[Nasha]

this is what he/she posted (I'm not going to share some of the emails, but the emails have been very nasty this week. the person sending these emails is very unstable)

isn't this nice --->
Anonymous
you whore go to some state prison and satisfy some hundred of the inmates...that s all you can do, a 3 holes body for fuck, pee, shit and vomit into, is that you?? no??? if you dont like it sue me you pathetic bitch

The Loving Wives category is notoriously a psychotroll magnet, so the rotten cabbages are not really for you.

 

[rachlou]

this is what he/she posted (I'm not going to share some of the emails, but the emails have been very nasty this week. the person sending these emails is very unstable)

isn't this nice --->
Anonymous
you whore go to some state prison and satisfy some hundred of the inmates...that s all you can do, a 3 holes body for fuck, pee, shit and vomit into, is that you?? no??? if you dont like it sue me you pathetic bitch

That sounds suspiciously like the nice guy who messaged me ages ago. I guess he must have gotten parole recently...

 

[S-Des]

That sounds suspiciously like the nice guy who messaged me ages ago. I guess he must have gotten parole recently...

It sounds vaguely like one I got as well. The grammar was messed up the same way (sort of). It wouldn't surprise me if there was a freak who had such a pathetic life that he read many of these stories, then stayed up all night sending out these hateful emails. It's incredibly pathetic if you think about it.

 

[SweetWitch]

That sounds suspiciously like the nice guy who messaged me ages ago. I guess he must have gotten parole recently...

Did it sound anything like this?

Comments:

no filthy animal
just another idiot stupid whore, sick minded and good only for to shit into
Go KILL YOURSELF YOU UGLY OLD CUNT

Got it last September. The comment wasn't sent on any particular story. It was apparently just an editorial on me, as a writer. Sounds like the same person, eh? I have his email address, by the way.

 

[rachlou]

Did it sound anything like this?



Got it last September. The comment wasn't sent on any particular story. It was apparently just an editorial on me, as a writer. Sounds like the same person, eh? I have his email address, by the way.

How spooky! I think that it must have been the same person, or his twin. Certainly the comments are remarkably similar. I never had the email address though - clearly an oversight in their part. I would have enjoyed a correspondence with them...

 

[SweetWitch]

How spooky! I think that it must have been the same person, or his twin. Certainly the comments are remarkably similar. I never had the email address though - clearly an oversight in their part. I would have enjoyed a correspondence with them...

I think a lot of people might have enjoyed such a correspondence. I guess I could "accidentally" post the address here... mwaahaahaahaaaaa

 

[rachlou]

I think a lot of people might have enjoyed such a correspondence. I guess I could "accidentally" post the address here... mwaahaahaahaaaaa

You could also hit a few other forums and post it there... he might need some new friends after all?

 

[rgraham666]

You could also hit a few other forums and post it there... he might need some new friends after all?

What would a person like that do with friends?

 

[only_more_so]

I just finished reading all of your "A Penny for a Buck" stories and found them to be the best I've read from the site. I read all three in succession just to read them. Not only are they hot, but the characters are so much more 'real' than so many typical erotic stories. None of the language is over the top, which always bothers me, and the erotic scenes are actually touching. Cheers on the fantiastic product!

Thanks. I keep meaning to get back to their story, and someday I am sure I will.

 

[smy3th]

this is what he/she posted (I'm not going to share some of the emails, but the emails have been very nasty this week. the person sending these emails is very unstable)

isn't this nice --->
Anonymous
you whore go to some state prison and satisfy some hundred of the inmates...that s all you can do, a 3 holes body for fuck, pee, shit and vomit into, is that you?? no??? if you dont like it sue me you pathetic bitch

A few days ago, I would have ignored this kind of rant. Now it reminds me disturbingly of the stuff the VT shooter sent to NBC. Paranoid invective of that sort is worrisome.

 

[rachlou]

What would a person like that do with friends?

I dread to think...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks. I keep meaning to get back to their story, and someday I am sure I will.

Only. . .You know I love that story.

 

[only_more_so]

Only. . .You know I love that story.

Yeah. It was my first, so it has a special place. Also the closest to my own I-could-actually-see-this-happening fantasy. I have a few ideas for where things are going next, but it just hasn't felt right.

 

[Roxanne Appleby]

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

A statement I wouldn't make lightly: your stories are the best, most
consistently well-written and legitimately arousing sex stories I've ever read
online. If you're not a professional writer of some variety, you've missed your
calling.

Dear Anonymous:

I love you will you marry me?

 

[LesLumens]

On Steward of the Wood:

Dead giveaway
04/20/07 By: Anonymous in New York
Great story. The theme and the context of the earlier part of it really fit with the Earth Day theme. Just wanted to let you know though, that you gave yourself away as someone who understands the Boy Scout program. I'm betting an Eagle yourself, who else would think of an Eagle Project for something like this? (And yeah, I'm one too)

Nope, never made Eagle. I did a couple years as Assistant Scoutmaster after I turned 18, and this project was part of someone else's Eagle run. Close enough, though - you got me

 

[oggbashan]

Someone hadn't looked at my list of stories before writing this:

...would love to read a longer story by you.

on one of my shorter works.

Og