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[SweetWitch]

still enjoying your story
12/19/06 By: Anonymous in usa
I'm amazed with how totally your story has captured my imagination, you could turn this into quite a novel.
Thanks John

Thanks, John. You're a whole lot nicer than that other guy--the one with the personality disfunction.

SW

 

[Boxlicker101]

This was the feedback on "David Drops the Soap", a gay male story:

Hot... but the intro needs 2 be longer...
10/13/06 By: Anonymous in Australia
That was a hot story. it did it for me.. but u went into it way 2 quickly. u should have made his introduction to the man in the shower longer. For goodness sake. the man was hard b4 he even arrived there. there should have bin more foreplay. but it was still good all the same.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story but no intro was needed. The man in the shower was wanking when David entered the locker room, and David just offered him a better option.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

This was the feedback on "David Drops the Soap", a gay male story:

Hot... but the intro needs 2 be longer...
10/13/06 By: Anonymous in Australia
That was a hot story. it did it for me.. but u went into it way 2 quickly. u should have made his introduction to the man in the shower longer. For goodness sake. the man was hard b4 he even arrived there. there should have bin more foreplay. but it was still good all the same.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story but no intro was needed. The man in the shower was wanking when David entered the locker room, and David just offered him a better option.

Did I mention how hot Angelica's Ass was? Very hot. It made me think of a Latina that I once knew who actually was named Angelica and also had a nice ass. A rather large ass, but that was no turn-off to me.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Did I mention how hot Angelica's Ass was? Very hot. It made me think of a Latina that I once knew who actually was named Angelica and also had a nice ass. A rather large ass, but that was no turn-off to me.

Thank you, Max. I thought it was quite hot also. However, there were five very negative PC, probably accompanied by one-bombs, from readers who objected to one aspect of it.

 

[SweetWitch]

On Shelter from the Storm, Chpt 13

tears
12/21/06 By: Anonymous in Florida
damn girl, im in tears.One word to sum up your story...breathtaking

Thank you, Doll.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thank you, Max. I thought it was quite hot also. However, there were five very negative PC, probably accompanied by one-bombs, from readers who objected to one aspect of it.

What ASSpect was that?

 

[Boxlicker101]

What ASSpect was that?

The licking asspect

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

The licking asspect

Yeah, some people unfortunately don't understand the appeal of anilingus. Then again, that's more succulent female ass for me.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Yeah, some people unfortunately don't understand the appeal of anilingus. Then again, that's more succulent female ass for me.

For you and for me. Of course, all I do now is write about it.

 

[Skip1934a]

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

excellent "winging!"

Please continue

******

Anybody who can interpret this for me? It was an email comment, I guess about Chapter 9 or 10 of We Meet Again.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This email made me smile and chuckle. . .

I hope you don't mind a message, I just wanted to mention that I
greatly enjoy your writing. I guess actually it would be more accurate to
say that your writing is a big hit here, because it's not specific to me.
I'm a 25 y/o man and just as I'd heard like a million times, my 21 y/o
bro complains that he hates reading. Without really thinking I said it
depends what kind of reading, gotta find a topic of interest. In that
discussion I realized he'd been completely unaware of the erotic
literature genre, thinking instead of just gushy romances. So after agreeing
to give him an idea what I was talking about we pretty much randomly
stumbled upon Hot and Ready. As you can probably imagine it got a bit
awkward with both enjoying the story, so had to send him outta the room
until I finished and then let him return and finish, lol. Hadn't
expected anything like that, probably should've thought it through, lol.
Anyways, I didn't intend to elaborate, just wanted to compliment the great
writing and convey how much enjoyment it brought.

 

[Skip1934a]

This email made me smile and chuckle. . .

I hope you don't mind a message, I just wanted to mention that I
greatly enjoy your writing. I guess actually it would be more accurate to
say that your writing is a big hit here, because it's not specific to me.
I'm a 25 y/o man and just as I'd heard like a million times, my 21 y/o
bro complains that he hates reading. Without really thinking I said it
depends what kind of reading, gotta find a topic of interest. In that
discussion I realized he'd been completely unaware of the erotic
literature genre, thinking instead of just gushy romances. So after agreeing
to give him an idea what I was talking about we pretty much randomly
stumbled upon Hot and Ready. As you can probably imagine it got a bit
awkward with both enjoying the story, so had to send him outta the room
until I finished and then let him return and finish, lol. Hadn't
expected anything like that, probably should've thought it through, lol.
Anyways, I didn't intend to elaborate, just wanted to compliment the great
writing and convey how much enjoyment it brought.

I can see why. These are the kind of responses that make writing a pleasure.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I can see why. These are the kind of responses that make writing a pleasure.

Yes, they do.

 

[FallingToFly]

Yes, they do.

I can't think of anyone more deserving than our Red for great feedback.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I can't think of anyone more deserving than our Red for great feedback.

Thank you. That is a nice thing to say.

 

[SweetWitch]

This message contains feedback for: SweetWitch
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:
SweetWitch,

Love your stories--especially enjoying Shelter from the Storm. I really like your descriptions and the dialogs. I have a very vivid picture of the cabin and it's setting in my mind as I read.

Thanks for the great read!

A fan in St. Louis

I am an old (67 years old) management professor at
Troy University. My background includes ground
combat in Viet Nam, an incredibly demanding 30
years in industry, and 12 years as a management
teacher. As I sat here and read this story
(frequently with tears in my eyes), I thought
that I must thank you.

Thank you

Ben

My day is complete. Thank you.

 

[rachlou]

interesting,
12/27/06 By: Anonymous
the first women look for in a man is what kind of car he is driving or where he is living or how big his wallet is.

men, on the other hand, they simply look at a woman, NOTHING ELSE, and say to himself, "Hmmm, this woman looks physically beautiful. I think I like her for what she is."

and women say men are SUPERFICIAL? that always give me such a big laugh1 lol

now, don't even start me on Rach and Paul and Many and Jake.

the only reason Rach said NO to Paul was that he went back to his wife and stayed incommunicado two weeks too long!

my gosh, Paul, what kind of an insensitive man are you? you could have called me two weeks ago, hell, one week ago, because old Jake seeps too deep into my mine --- I was a heartbroken victim in need of help and healing! --- you could have had me, even when you had a wife, fucked both me and her,,,, but, Paul, you are about a week too late now!

Paul has been tending to my needs the last a couple months and espeically the last few weeks. I'm sorry, but you didn't call before now, Paul; and now you call ONLY because you are alone and don't want to be, and are willing to settle, in your mind, for a second best, ME, when your wife has finally kicked you out.

I'm sorry, I need to go back to Jake and hope he forgives me.

I mean, really! this is how women think and talk? talking about being superficial and double crossing. Rach is no better than Paul; the only difference is, she's NOT married!

with this "torn" heart/allegiance of Rach, sometime after she and Jake are a couple, she's gonna do the same thing to him:

"Oh, Jake, you gotta let me see Paul one more time. He and I never really settle our mixed feelings for one another. If you love me, you let me see him... No, actually, I've been seeing him. He says he still loves me to death! I am so TORN, Jake. I love you both. I want you both. Please, say I can have you both!" lol

1. The comment in the story about the BMW was meant to be tongue in cheek - glad you caught that.
2. Yes we women are superficial/back stabbing/gold digging bitches - what took you so long??
3. Why shouldn't I err... sorry- Rach - have two men on the go? The more, the merrier!
4. Naturally she would move on to someone richer/handsomer/better shag, should they come along later in the relationship (see point 2)

Thanks for the in depth critique of my story. I can now sleep at night knowing you understood every facet to my story of a modern romance!

Love Rach xx

 

[damppanties]

*shakes head*

He must have a seriously disturbing and unfulfilled life.

 

[SweetWitch]

You get 'em, Rach. At least you're getting a comment to explain the votes.

I've gotten 6 one-bombs in the last hour and a half. That brings the total 1's to 7. The rest of the 80 votes I've gotten so far are two 4's, with the remainder being 5's. I wonder who I pissed off.

SW

 

[rachlou]

You get 'em, Rach. At least you're getting a comment to explain the votes.

I've gotten 6 one-bombs in the last hour and a half. That brings the total 1's to 7. The rest of the 80 votes I've gotten so far are two 4's, with the remainder being 5's. I wonder who I pissed off.

SW

Glad its not just me! I had a straight run of four 1-bombs plus several others dispersed amongst the 5's and 4's. Currently my second lowest voted story! and it aint that fucking bad!

 

[SweetWitch]

Glad its not just me! I had a straight run of four 1-bombs plus several others dispersed amongst the 5's and 4's. Currently my second lowest voted story! and it aint that fucking bad!

The other 16 chapters have significantly higher scores. I would have to say that whoever is dispensing the ones today must have had a bad Christmas. Maybe too much coal in the stocking? I don't know how one chapter out of 17 can be considered so bad. Judging by the public comments and the huge influx of email I've gotten, the majority of the readers are enjoying the story. I'm thinking it's one or two trolls at work. These people need something better to do with their time. Got my eighth bomb now.

 

[rachlou]

The other 16 chapters have significantly higher scores. I would have to say that whoever is dispensing the ones today must have had a bad Christmas. Maybe too much coal in the stocking? I don't know how one chapter out of 17 can be considered so bad. Judging by the public comments and the huge influx of email I've gotten, the majority of the readers are enjoying the story. I'm thinking it's one or two trolls at work. These people need something better to do with their time. Got my eighth bomb now.

Yup - sounds like the same person - i have had at least 6 1-bombs tonight. Maybe the troll came home to find his other half being fucked by Santa... And has been in a bad mood ever since? Oh well, the votes will be swept off sometime soon.

 

[tanyachrs]

I suppose some people get grumpy at Christmas. All my stuff seems to be tanking lately too. I don't normally watch the voting that close but my latest is thisclose to getting its little H and while I'm looking to see if it has made it, I'm watching another very popular (in my head) story slide towards not having one again.

 

[Foxee Browne]

Wow, I must have did something right, 2 nice comments fron Anon @ once! Damn I got lucky LOL.

12/24/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Great to hear a person's first time told so well, and from a female point of view at that. Nice to see that your guy knew a little something of what he was doing (kind of makes you wonder where he learned it from, eh?). You've quite a gift for storytelling, a fine job overall.

and

12/25/06 By: Anonymous in North Carolina U.S.A.
I loved your description of how you lost your virginity. It was a very erotic and meaningfull event in your life when you were overflowing in curiosity and passion. Your writing style is super and I know you have many more experiences you can share with us. I will look for your writings in the future.

Thanks Anon! It's nice to see all of you Anon's are not nasty!

GC

 

[SweetWitch]

Yup - sounds like the same person - i have had at least 6 1-bombs tonight. Maybe the troll came home to find his other half being fucked by Santa... And has been in a bad mood ever since? Oh well, the votes will be swept off sometime soon.

Probably not for mine, they won't. The only votes I seem to lose in the sweeps are usually 5's. The Lords of the Troll Sweeps seem to like my 1's, it seems. But that's ok. A famous author out there likes my work. and so does my mom...tee hee.

I'm thinking whoever the troll is probably found Santa AND a few elves in his bed. Well, I hope his wife enjoyed herself. At least someone ought to get something out of it.