Annonymous

[smy3th]

And I thought I was twisted...

That was funny. One of the better Anon comments.

By the way, what is your answer?

 

[damppanties]

That was funny. One of the better Anon comments.

By the way, what is your answer?

I have no idea. I mean, what do you say to a real live full grown elf?

And um... my elves don't cum.
eta: I am not going to imagine elves' penises and everything that goes with it. That's just... weird.

 

[rgraham666]

I have no idea. I mean, what do you say to a real live full grown elf?

And um... my elves don't cum.
eta: I am not going to imagine elves' penises and everything that goes with it. That's just... weird.

Where do you think Christmas ornaments come from?

 

[damppanties]

Where do you think Christmas ornaments come from?

*mutters*
This is not good... not good...
*wanders away*

 

[rgraham666]

*mutters*
This is not good... not good...
*wanders away*

 

[Boxlicker101]

I have no idea. I mean, what do you say to a real live full grown elf?

And um... my elves don't cum.
eta: I am not going to imagine elves' penises and everything that goes with it. That's just... weird.

I've only written one two part story that involved elves. They did a LOT of cumming. Into Mrs. Claus and into other elves and even all over themselves sometimes.

 

[damppanties]

I've only written one two part story that involved elves. They did a LOT of cumming. Into Mrs. Claus and into other elves and even all over themselves sometimes.

Please, please! The elves are the only innocent thing left about me. Otherwise I'm totally perverted. Don't take that away from me. *sobs*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Anon, translated.

Rape, can we spell rape? This, unequivocably, is rape.
Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? She was unwilling, she said no, she was humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, and it's RAPE! *imagine anon spraying spittle while talking by this point*
It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! It doesn't matter if she responded to him, it is still rape. *anon's eyes bulging out*
Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Divorce her or send her to jail. (??)
Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world. Everyone has fantasies, but you think your fantasies are reality. You're going to HELL. *anon feels he's done his duty and walks off*

*chuckles. . .*


Thanks for the explanation on the story, but...

It was a man who was the non-consent/reluctant character, not a woman. . .That is why the reader said. . .Divorce her and send her to jail, not divorce him and send him to jail.


*chuckles. . .* Hell huh? Yikes.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Please, please! The elves are the only innocent thing left about me. Otherwise I'm totally perverted. Don't take that away from me. *sobs*

Aw, that's okay, DP. It wasn't really a true story. I just made it up.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

From Anon on my NON-consent/Reluctance story. . .His Secret is Out

Rape!
12/15/06 by Anonymous
Rape, can we spell rape? Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world.

From Anon on the same story. . .

GEEZ..........
12/15/06 by Anonymous
to previous poster...what part of non-consent did you not understand? If you get this upset about it DON'T READ IT!


**

Yeah, it's extreme, but so are my blackmail stories. It's not how I would behave, just as I doubt that Red would act like that. However, it's a STORY! Characters aren't always ethical paragons. That's part of the fun in writing fiction, including erotic fiction. I read the story in question and it's no more a bizarre reaction to cheating than my plots involving ministers being blackmailed by the husbands of their lovers, sheriffs sodomizing their cheating wives and 18 year old nephews, and abusive wives being turned into whores by their mercenary husbands. I've done some rather insane things with my characters too.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Me act like that. . .Yep, all the time. . .

I'm so the dominating female, ready to strap her man down and make him suck cock and take a dildo up the ass. . .yeah.... that's me.... evil Red.

 

[damppanties]

Does that mean I get it on with... with... oh my God... *horror*

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Feedback from Anon on the Same story.... His Secret is Out

Gay Without Another Wrinkle Consent or Not red
12/15/06 by Anonymous in USA
Always well written but rong pew red haired one - you know better than this - see the threads.

Now to the story, she is worse than the gay one. His was fantasy without cheating whereas she cheated in the face of his stated non-interest in violation of her sainted position as wife and executioner to their marriage such as it was.

She and you cum off without a fair hair but plenty of male disrespect and a broken marriage for yucks.

Still must be Gay as there was no other action.

***

Thanks, for the well written compliment.

If Lit thought it needed put in Gay, they would have put it there. . .

Again. . . it is just a story and one that several folks hinted at in the Story Idea forum. . .so get over it.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Does that mean I get it on with... with... oh my God... *horror*

YIKES!!

 

[MagicaPractica]

Dear Anonymous - Bah Humbug!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This message contains feedback for: RedHairedandFriendly
About the submission: His Secret is Out
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Don't you have a lesbian femdom board you can write stories on that
suit your "tastes"?



*****
Dear Anon,

Wouldn't this be Lit., too?



~ Red.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Feedback from Anon on the Same story.... His Secret is Out

Gay Without Another Wrinkle Consent or Not red
12/15/06 by Anonymous in USA
Always well written but rong pew red haired one - you know better than this - see the threads.

Now to the story, she is worse than the gay one. His was fantasy without cheating whereas she cheated in the face of his stated non-interest in violation of her sainted position as wife and executioner to their marriage such as it was.
She and you cum off without a fair hair but plenty of male disrespect and a broken marriage for yucks.

Still must be Gay as there was no other action.

***

Thanks, for the well written compliment.

If Lit thought it needed put in Gay, they would have put it there. . .

Again. . . it is just a story and one that several folks hinted at in the Story Idea forum. . .so get over it.

Awww, man. I really do need that translation tool.

And WTF does that 'fair hair' reference mean?

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Awww, man. I really do need that translation tool.

And WTF does that 'fair hair' reference mean?

His was fantasy without cheating whereas she cheated in the face of his stated non-interest in violation of her sainted position as wife and executioner to their marriage such as it was.
She and you cum off without a fair hair but plenty of male disrespect and a broken marriage for yucks.

Hmmm. . .borrowing damppanties outline for translation.

His was a fantasy without cheating. . . * he was only online fucking behind her back - so that isn't cheating - anonymous believes that is just fantasy on the web not in the head.

She cheated in the face of his non-interest in violation of her. . .yada, yada, yada. . . * I believe this is a bit wordy and I may have it wrong, but I gues, he said he didn't want it and she made it happen anyway, therefor she violated her sainthood and is destined for HELL, just like me the author.

Fair hair. . . *I'm not sure here. My hair is red, very red, almost so red it would bring firemen to my door holding their hoses to drown me in . . . ooops I've gotten off subject.

If I've gotten the translation wrong, then I'm sure damppanties can help.

 

[SweetWitch]

wonderful ... but -- no ifs, ands or buts!
12/15/06 By: Anonymous in us
i am the writer who criticized carissa's "impertinence" last night. (i'm a woman, by the way.) i love tonight's exquisitely sensitive new developments with hints of compassion, playfulness, gentleness and affection! two damaged people doing an understandably "cautionary dance" ... sweet witch, you have much insight and rare gifts. this is a wonderfully romantic story, and like everyone else, i'm tantalizingly waiting for more ... the world needs more love, to heal its many wounds. thank you!

Again, thank you for taking the time to comment. Also, thank you for your support. Glad ya still like it, babe.

SW

 

[rachlou]

This message contains feedback for: rachlou
About the submission: Daisy Got Laid Ch. 08
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Get with the world on the use os some terms. For the world it's an ass not arse which is only used in a few spots. Also program not programme or center not centre, and look at the proper spelling of words some that shoud use ize your doing as ise. Some words are unique only to your area and the read gets confused as to the meaning such as what is knackered, no such word in the dictionary to be found.

The meaning of 'knackered' can be found HERE Yes it is a british slang word, but it can still be found listed in many dictionarys. Try buying a more up-to-date one?

Programme or program - either is correct. However, programme is the british version. Same with center and centre. Centre is the british version.

The use of Ass and Arse is a contentious issue. Personally i think ASS is a donkey type animal and I am reluctant to use this in a sexual theme. In my part of the world, ARSE refers to a persons backside/buttocks/bottom.

I did not mispell HYPNOTISE. British spelling uses the ISE rather than IZE. Again this is because I am BRITISH not AMERICAN.

I realise i use a uniquely british turn of phrase. Unfortunately this is becasue i live in England. This is what makes my writing more individual. Get over it. At least have the guts to leave an email address so I can reply to your comments in a more direct way. Fuckwit.

Love rach

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

The meaning of 'knackered' can be found HERE Yes it is a british slang word, but it can still be found listed in many dictionarys. Try buying a more up-to-date one?

Programme or program - either is correct. However, programme is the british version. Same with center and centre. Centre is the british version.

The use of Ass and Arse is a contentious issue. Personally i think ASS is a donkey type animal and I am reluctant to use this in a sexual theme. In my part of the world, ARSE refers to a persons backside/buttocks/bottom.

I did not mispell HYPNOTISE. British spelling uses the ISE rather than IZE. Again this is because I am BRITISH not AMERICAN.

I realise i use a uniquely british turn of phrase. Unfortunately this is becasue i live in England. This is what makes my writing more individual. Get over it. At least have the guts to leave an email address so I can reply to your comments in a more direct way. Fuckwit.

Love rach

Don't sweat it, Rach. Some people don't know where England is, let alone how you speak there. This guy sounds like one of those people, superficial fools who think that they're smart because they found out that you spell things differently from Standard American English. They have no idea that English has developed differently here from in England, from before standardized (or is it standardised in your country) spelling. Different dialects and all. The Founders, for instance, used the spelling "chuse" instead of choose, just an example. This is nothing shocking, just an example of how spelling has changed and become more regimented over time, but in different ways in two different nations.

I love how George Bernard Shaw put it,"Americans and Englishmen are two peoples separated by a common language."

 

[rachlou]

Don't sweat it, Rach. Some people don't know where England is, let alone how you speak there. This guy sounds like one of those people, superficial fools who think that they're smart because they found out that you spell things differently from Standard American English. They have no idea that English has developed differently here from in England, from before standardized (or is it standardised in your country) spelling. Different dialects and all. The Founders, for instance, used the spelling "chuse" instead of choose, just an example. This is nothing shocking, just an example of how spelling has changed and become more regimented over time, but in different ways in two different nations.

I love how George Bernard Shaw put it,"Americans and Englishmen are two peoples separated by a common language."

Thanks Sev

 

[RogueLurker]

The meaning of 'knackered' can be found HERE Yes it is a british slang word, but it can still be found listed in many dictionarys. Try buying a more up-to-date one?

Programme or program - either is correct. However, programme is the british version. Same with center and centre. Centre is the british version.

The use of Ass and Arse is a contentious issue. Personally i think ASS is a donkey type animal and I am reluctant to use this in a sexual theme. In my part of the world, ARSE refers to a persons backside/buttocks/bottom.

I did not mispell HYPNOTISE. British spelling uses the ISE rather than IZE. Again this is because I am BRITISH not AMERICAN.

I realise i use a uniquely british turn of phrase. Unfortunately this is becasue i live in England. This is what makes my writing more individual. Get over it. At least have the guts to leave an email address so I can reply to your comments in a more direct way. Fuckwit.

Love rach

Personally, I've always thought that people in England should learn how to speak and write proper English. Ya bunch of lazy sods.

 

[rachlou]

Personally, I've always thought that people in England should learn how to speak and write proper English. Ya bunch of lazy sods.

yes i have that thought about americans fairly frequently... illiterate bastards

 

[rgraham666]

And that leaves us Canadians stuck in the middle so we're both lazy sods and illiterate bastards.