Annonymous

[TxRad]

Thank you all. This is like having a bunch of big brothers (and a Sweetwitch too!) ready to beat up any creep who is mean to me. Too bad you all weren't around when Dougy MacFarlane was always trying to lift up my skirt in the fourth grade! You could have punched him right in the nose for me : )

Be careful what ya wish for, most of these pervs would have been helping old Dougy.....

 

[rgraham666]

Be careful what ya wish for, most of these pervs would have been helping old Dougy.....

(Looks innocent)

 

[smy3th]

Thank you all. This is like having a bunch of big brothers (and a Sweetwitch too!) ready to beat up any creep who is mean to me. Too bad you all weren't around when Dougy MacFarlane was always trying to lift up my skirt in the fourth grade! You could have punched him right in the nose for me : )

I think I was Dougy MacFarlane. If you are trying to avoid perverts, you are definitely in the wrong place. In fact, I'd still like to lift up your skirt. Wanna go play on the jungle gym?

 

[Boxlicker101]

To get back on topic, here is a brilliant observation I just received on a new story that just posted:

Pleezzee!
11/17/06 By: Anonymous
silly storeys maybe little good you try.

I certainly appreciate articulate, well-though critiques like this.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Be careful what ya wish for, most of these pervs would have been helping old Dougy.....

I'm not Dougy, and I don't think I went to school with you but, if I had, I would have been trying just as hard as he was, and been sneakier about it.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I'm not Dougy, and I don't think I went to school with you but, if I had, I would have been trying just as hard as he was, and been sneakier about it.

You know about the boys hideout under the grand stands, Box?

 

[Boxlicker101]

You know about the boys hideout under the grand stands, Box?

Of course. Valuable information like that is passed on for generations of boys. Things like the peep hole in the air ducts that serve the girls' bathroom, the missing corners of bricks in the girls' locker room walls, the pipe in the shower room that can be pushed to one side for a clear view, the paint that has been scraped off the locker room window, the hideout under the part of the bleachers where the cheer leaders sit, all that kind of stuff. There is a rivalry among boys, but they can also cooperate for the common good.

I haven't been in school for many years and some of these things may have been spotted and corrected by teacher-spoilsports. Even so, more have been devised. Perverts can be really determined. Just ask Dougy MacFarlane.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

To get back on topic, here is a brilliant observation I just received on a new story that just posted:

Pleezzee!
11/17/06 By: Anonymous
silly storeys maybe little good you try.

I certainly appreciate articulate, well-though critiques like this.

Boxy, haven't you read the new guidelines on how Anons can save server space by using as few words as possible.

'Pleezzee! Revenge Hotty better than good try - touchdown.'

 

[Boxlicker101]

Boxy, haven't you read the new guidelines on how Anons can save server space by using as few words as possible.

'Pleezzee! Revenge Hotty better than good try - touchdown.'

In this case, Anon didn't like the story, and hit me with a one-bomb.

He sounds kind of like Yoda might sound if he was drunk.

 

[ungenderless]

In this case, Anon didn't like the story, and hit me with a one-bomb.

He sounds kind of like Yoda might sound if he was drunk.

Ow! Mental image! Yoda, alcohol and porn...there's a fanfic just waiting to happen!

 

[SweetWitch]

Be careful what ya wish for, most of these pervs would have been helping old Dougy.....

I think I was Dougy MacFarlane. If you are trying to avoid perverts, you are definitely in the wrong place. In fact, I'd still like to lift up your skirt. Wanna go play on the jungle gym?

I'm not Dougy, and I don't think I went to school with you but, if I had, I would have been trying just as hard as he was, and been sneakier about it.

Now, boys, tsk tsk

Thank you all. This is like having a bunch of big brothers (and a Sweetwitch too!) ready to beat up any creep who is mean to me. Too bad you all weren't around when Dougy MacFarlane was always trying to lift up my skirt in the fourth grade! You could have punched him right in the nose for me : )

Do you have little Dougy's address? My Irish side is in a fighting mood tonight...

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Yoda says...."A drunken troll he is."

 

[FallingToFly]

(This is not directed at anyone in particular, it's just me ranting.)

You son of a bitch. 4 votes.

Three fives, which the story damn well earned in my mind, and then, a one. I bet I know why, although you didn't leave a PC. It's Non-Erotic, because the main character didn't skull-fuck the bastard in the tub before he blew his brain out. It's got a meaning behind it, and emotion, and you couldn't jerk one out over it.

Well, fuck you. You want to get hot and heavy? GO FIND A CHEAP WHORE, YOU PATHETIC LOSER. Maybe she'll give you the pox and it'll rot off, you pathetic twerp. You do this everytime one of my stories comes out,a nd I'm getting tired of it. I don't know what I ever did to you, but goddamn it, if you don't have enough nerve to tell me about it, you don't deserve to live.

I am so sick of this shit... I post here because, back when I kept my head down and only said what was acceptable to the whole around the forums (or stayed out of the forums period) I actually got a lot of good feedback, a lot of thoughtful and intelligent commentary and really helpful thoughts on my work.

I don't get that anymore, and I'm about ready to just say fuck it, take my stuff down, and transfer to another site. I love Lit, and I love the way Laurel and Manu run it... but fuck this shit. My work is a hell of a lot better than this... and I think maybe it's time to start taking it down. The site won't miss it, and you know what? The readers who actually are worth the trouble of writing for all have my email address. The rest of you can go get stuffed.

 

[scriptordelecto]

Well said FTF!

 

[FallingToFly]

Well said FTF!

Hey there Script... how's it going?

 

[scriptordelecto]

Hey there Script... how's it going?

Would be fab if I didn't have to go to fucking work and deal with the damn public! Hmm PMS?

Actually doing OK.

 

[FallingToFly]

Would be fab if I didn't have to go to fucking work and deal with the damn public! Hmm PMS?

Actually doing OK.

No, I think that's just a normal sensation, there...

Good to hear you're doing well. I feel better after ranting... now I just want a smoke.

 

[FallingToFly]

Just FYI- shit like this doesn't make me bitch less:

This message contains feedback for: FallingToFly
This feedback was sent by: (removed for the sake of courtesy, somethign this lady doesn't have)

Comments:

Boo Hoo! Oh stop bitching and start writing. You big whiny crybaby. You're such
a needy wuss. You whine all the time.

Opal

And fuck you very much.

Seriously- shit like this is why I go through and clear my list every six months. You want to bitch about me not writing- give me one good reason I should write for you?

ETA: Holy shit... 33 accepted submissions since March, and that's AFTER I removed 20-something chapters of Falling form my list. And you want to bitch about my output. Oh, FUCK OFF!

 

[SweetWitch]

Just FYI- shit like this doesn't make me bitch less:



And fuck you very much.

Seriously- shit like this is why I go through and clear my list every six months. You want to bitch about me not writing- give me one good reason I should write for you?

ETA: Holy shit... 33 accepted submissions since March, and that's AFTER I removed 20-something chapters of Falling form my list. And you want to bitch about my output. Oh, FUCK OFF!

You poor thing, FTF. You are really having a bad day. Just breathe through it. You know we love your work.

 

[rgraham666]

Anonymous is usually very, very good to me.

For Librarian.

OMG
11/18/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Reading this story made me want to be seduced by you. Very sexy, awesome buildup of tension and HOT climax (so to speak...)

 

[smy3th]

About the submission: Spanked by Wife & Her Friends Ch. 02
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Wimp, faggy ass husband, self centered, self serving bitch for a wife. I say
kill 'em all, let God sort 'em out. Drop the hammer.

Um, if the title wasn't obvious enough that it was a femdom story, I said so in the intro also, just for idiots like you to read so you wouldn't waste your time reading the story. Unfortunately, nothing is idiot proof if the idiot is sufficiently determined to be brainless.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

This message contains feedback for: SelenaKittyn
About the submission: Bluebeard's Wife Ch. 09
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

My husband and I read the whole series, one evening for each chapter.
It help my husband of 58 years realized that we can be a little varied,
slutty, and yes even sloppy if we get pleasure. He was raised a god
fearing christian and did not vary much in his love making but now we
are trying all kinds of stuff. Even went to a sex shop for some toys. Thank
you thank you thank you

Awwwwwwwww!!!! Yay you and yay him and yay for your sex life!

This so thrills me...

 

[damppanties]

Awwwwwwwww!!!! Yay you and yay him and yay for your sex life!

This so thrills me...

That's a really awesome comment.

 

[smy3th]

Awwwwwwwww!!!! Yay you and yay him and yay for your sex life!

This so thrills me...

That kind of comment goes beyond just complimenting your writing to saying that it actually affected someone's life for the better, which is truly wonderful.

 

[scottmcc]

12/02/06 By: Anonymous in NY
Very nicely done. I especially like the "I'm Sorry" part; so true, isn't it?

Looking forward to another submission,
Quiet_NY_Tech

Yes it is true and thank you for the votes.