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[SweetWitch]

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Normally I like your stories, but since the first chapter ends having introduced three male jerks and no sympathetic male characters, the strength of the female lead is fine and good but not enough to induce me to read the next chapter. - Emma

Have a llittle faith, dear Emma. 'Tis only the first chapter. Wait until you meet the hero--dark, brooding, deeply injured and just a hint of boyishness that wins the day. Give a writer a chance, will ya?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Lmao

This I got this little jewel this AM on Unemployment Blues LMAO

It's easy to see that you have been there
12/06/06 By: Anonymous
And had to deal with creatures that should have been euthanized at birth. That's what happens to people that are totally worthless in society. They get rewarded with jobs that can give normal hard working people fits.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Some people have to go out of their way to be shitheads. Unfortunately this one ended up in a PC.

Pheasents?
12/11/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Don't you mean peasants? Isn't pheasent a flightless bird?

First of all. I meant PHEASENTS, asshole. And second they do fly. If you are going place yourself in a position of knowlege, at least get your facts straight.

If I had meant peasants the story would be in Horror not Humor

 

[rachlou]

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Comments:

youre the most depressing bitch I know.

Well feel free to go kill yourself.
Love Rach

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Well feel free to go kill yourself.
Love Rach

*snort*

 

[rachlou]

*snort*

 

[SweetWitch]

Well feel free to go kill yourself.
Love Rach

ROTFLMAO....

 

[Boxlicker101]

Bullshit
12/14/06 By: Anonymous in USofA
You are a sick motherfucker. The other queers will love this piss-poor excuse for a story.

Stink
12/14/06 By: Anonymous
not like so smelly stink storeys next time you write nice ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

useless asshole
12/14/06 By: Anonymous
boxlicker must be white coz only white men have such fantasies. asshole
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oh my god.....
12/14/06 By: Anonymous
Please don't tell me that it's only a story, you really must love shit, and for the life of me i cannot beleieve that anyone likes the taste of shit, it's as bad as reading that you ate it. Yuck!!!!! What a sad life

If you guys don't like anal stories, you shouldn't read them.

This is my latest story. I have gotten eight anon. PC on it, these four and four that were highly complimentary. I have my doubts that the guy who wrote the second comment on this post was able to actually read the story.

 

[smy3th]

Bullshit
12/14/06 By: Anonymous in USofA
You are a sick motherfucker. The other queers will love this piss-poor excuse for a story.
. . .

This is my latest story. I have gotten eight anon. PC on it, these four and four that were highly complimentary. I have my doubts that the guy who wrote the second comment on this page was able to actually read the story.

I thought that comment was actually a backhanded complement (whether intentional or not). He basically said it wasn't his genre, but would appeal to those who enjoy that particular form of art, though in somewhat less articulate expression. Or words to that effect.

And why do people read stories they know they are going to hate? The rationale escapes me. Actually, I think some people only read the ones they know they will hate. Possibly because they are sick motherfuckers. Personally, motherfucking isn't my favorite flavor of incest. I prefer brother-sister incest stories. But that's another story.

 

[rgraham666]

I thought that comment was actually a backhanded complement (whether intentional or not). He basically said it wasn't his genre, but would appeal to those who enjoy that particular form of art, though in somewhat less articulate expression. Or words to that effect.

And why do people read stories they know they are going to hate? The rationale escapes me. Actually, I think some people only read the ones they know they will hate. Possibly because they are sick motherfuckers. Personally, motherfucking isn't my favorite flavor of incest. I prefer brother-sister incest stories. But that's another story.

They're anger addicts. Reading stories they hate makes them angry. And they like being angry, it feels good.

And if they're like a lot of anger addicts I've known, anger is the only emotion they allow themselves. They've been taught one way or another that other emotions are bad.

 

[Skip1934a]

They're anger addicts. Reading stories they hate makes them angry. And they like being angry, it feels good.

And if they're like a lot of anger addicts I've known, anger is the only emotion they allow themselves. They've been taught one way or another that other emotions are bad.

I agree. And I'll add that most anger addicts see any other emotion as a sign of weakness, and heaven forbid they suffer that.

 

[smy3th]

They're anger addicts. Reading stories they hate makes them angry. And they like being angry, it feels good.

And if they're like a lot of anger addicts I've known, anger is the only emotion they allow themselves. They've been taught one way or another that other emotions are bad.

Sounds like they probably listen to a lot of "talk radio."

 

[rgraham666]

I agree. And I'll add that most anger addicts see any other emotion as a sign of weakness, and heaven forbid they suffer that.

That's a common trait as well.

Sounds like they probably listen to a lot of "talk radio."

Yep. Big time pushers the talk radio people are.

We have a newspaper here in Toronto, The Sun. I used to read it as it was a good way hear from the conservative side of the political spectrum. I stopped as its view point went from conservative to outright wacko.

 

[Skip1934a]

Chapter 2 of my We Meet Again drew this comment from a 60 year old annonymous.

Sorry. minority vote--not badly written ,but his continung effort to impress her with his wealth, influence and affluence gets a little tiring after a while. He's a little pompous for my taste. It's like he's trying to sell her, not woo her. 60 year old George

My response: I guess his showering her with gifts could be taken that way. But as the writer I attempted to show that he was doing it bexcause he loves her. I suspect the commenter is poor, and can't buy his love expensive gifts.

 

[Boxlicker101]

I thought that comment was actually a backhanded complement (whether intentional or not). He basically said it wasn't his genre, but would appeal to those who enjoy that particular form of art, though in somewhat less articulate expression. Or words to that effect.

And why do people read stories they know they are going to hate? The rationale escapes me. Actually, I think some people only read the ones they know they will hate. Possibly because they are sick motherfuckers. Personally, motherfucking isn't my favorite flavor of incest. I prefer brother-sister incest stories. But that's another story.

It wasn't any kind of a compliment, not even accidental. Calling me a motherfucker and a queer and saying my story was piss-poor is not complimentary. The genre is anal, by the way, written in the first person and involving a man and a woman, and the reference is to the narrator performing anilingus on the woman.

 

[SweetWitch]

On Shelter from the Storm, Chpt 6

wonderful ... but
12/14/06 By: Anonymous in usa
a gripping and devastatingly romantic tale ... my only complaint (besides being frustrated by how short and drawn out the installments have been) is carissa's impertinence. this is a trait of Brightly I Burn's female characters that i dislike; i suppose it is meant to be "cute," but i find it rude and bratty. not at all attractive -- too many people like this in real life! i'm sorry to see it used here ... and it seems inappropriate, given her condition. besides, a true heroine/wolfwoman who survived such an ordeal would not be impertinent. she would be humble and respectful and, most of all, grateful. if this is to be a grand love story, please give us good role models!

Um...ok...Anyway, thank you for the 5-vote.

And, just for the record--She's not "impertinent" and she isn't "cute". She's a tough woman who has had to struggle in life and fight to survive an abusive marriage to raise her children and maintain a career on her own. That, alone, should be more than enough to earn her the right to speak her mind. Add to that the issue of surviving for days in a mountain blizzard--without so much as a warm coat or decent footwear--solely on her wits, and you have a woman who doesn't need "permission" to stand up for herself, especially in the face of a man who has been so "rude" to her.

Thank you for letting me know what you think.
~SW.

 

[rachlou]

On Rose's Garden parts 1 & 2

Thanks so much to all the Anon's who left public comments and sent private email's - I really appreciate you taking the time to do this and I only wish I could thank you personally for your kind words.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

From Anon on my NON-consent/Reluctance story. . .His Secret is Out

Rape!
12/15/06 by Anonymous
Rape, can we spell rape? Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world.

From Anon on the same story. . .

GEEZ..........
12/15/06 by Anonymous
to previous poster...what part of non-consent did you not understand? If you get this upset about it DON'T READ IT!


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Thank you Anon #2! I couldn't have said it better myself.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

From Anon on my NON-consent/Reluctance story. . .His Secret is Out

Rape!
12/15/06 by Anonymous
Rape, can we spell rape? Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world.
From Anon on the same story. . .

GEEZ..........
12/15/06 by Anonymous
to previous poster...what part of non-consent did you not understand? If you get this upset about it DON'T READ IT!


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Thank you Anon #2! I couldn't have said it better myself.

Is it just me? But that paragraph just doesn't make any sense at all. I've read it a few times and...?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Some people have to go out of their way to be shitheads. Unfortunately this one ended up in a PC.



First of all. I meant PHEASENTS, asshole. And second they do fly. If you are going place yourself in a position of knowlege, at least get your facts straight.

If I had meant peasants the story would be in Horror not Humor

Spot on JJ. They do fly. Not too far off the ground, and not for any reat distance, but they do, indeed, take off. I had the misfortune to hit one that flew right across the road a few weeks back. I hate it when that shit happens.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

...and since this is the anon thread - Apologies for the slight hijack above - Here's an anon for Shattered Secret. None too shabby.

Very Interesting Story
12/13/06 by Anonymous in USA
Definitely an interesting plot. I did not expect the unusual twists in the story and the different ending. I wish you hadn't ended the story so abrubtly and continue the conversations between the daugher and her father. Perhaps another short chapter will help bring closure to my mind.

A great story.

 

[damppanties]

Is it just me? But that paragraph just doesn't make any sense at all. I've read it a few times and...?

Anon, translated.

Rape, can we spell rape? This, unequivocably, is rape.
Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? She was unwilling, she said no, she was humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, and it's RAPE! *imagine anon spraying spittle while talking by this point*
It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! It doesn't matter if she responded to him, it is still rape. *anon's eyes bulging out*
Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Divorce her or send her to jail. (??)
Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world. Everyone has fantasies, but you think your fantasies are reality. You're going to HELL. *anon feels he's done his duty and walks off*

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Anon, translated.

Rape, can we spell rape? This, unequivocably, is rape.
Unwilling, said no, humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, what do you have? She was unwilling, she said no, she was humiliated, abused, taken without permission, forced by threat, and it's RAPE! *imagine anon spraying spittle while talking by this point*
It doesnt matter if person reponds it is rape is not consensual! It doesn't matter if she responded to him, it is still rape. *anon's eyes bulging out*
Either divorce her or eliminate her by sending her to jail. Divorce her or send her to jail. (??)
Everyone has fantasies, most realize what fantasies are, and imaginary world. Everyone has fantasies, but you think your fantasies are reality. You're going to HELL. *anon feels he's done his duty and walks off*

Is there, perchance, a volume available on Amazon that deals with such transalation? Superbly done damppanties.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I wish...I wish... I wish I knew you!!!!!
12/15/06 by Anonymous in Sybianlalaland
Holymotherfuckingcow!!!. As a male that has had Sybian fantasies even before the Sybian was born, your stories about the Sybian ignite my world. Your stories bring to life what I have always imagined watching someone enjoy the Sybian would be like. Makes me want to run out and get one for myself so I can start my own club.

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awwwwwwwwwwww....! What a nice compliment... Why doesn't anon sign their posts?

Thanks, anon...

 

[damppanties]

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loved the elf stories (being one myself - but a real full sized one).

could you contain all the power that an elf could release as he cums?

And I thought I was twisted...