Annonymous

[MissBri]

 

[Aurora Black]

LOL. Nope, none of those. My brother in law pointed out his hat size theory, and I didn't see anything to disprove it.

Well this is Europe we're talking about, after all. Lots of old traditions, including funny hats and costumes (funny to us, anyway).

Greek soldiers wearing 1820s style uniforms at the Tomb of the Unknown Warrior

 

[MissBri]

 

[Aurora Black]

Link didn't work.

I just refrained from adding this to a comment I left addressing others...

Oh, and to anonymous - read my responses above and below. And then feel free to bite me.

I'll bite you.

 

[MissBri]

 

[geronimo_appleby]

*purr*

Got this one today...


What the hell does that have to do with my piece? I'm not deleting any comments yet because I kinda like being all controversial and at the top of the 'most comments' list, even if my contest score does suck. But I'm not going to answer it, either - I might have responded to elaborate that I'm bi but not so interested in men in general right now (and I get far less creepy emails from strangers when my status says I'm gay), had he sent a message with a return email address. Why the hell does Anonymous always freakin' ask QUESTIONS you can't answer unless you want to add comments to your own story?

[/rant]

how come i never get creepy emails of strangers?

 

[MissBri]

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Maybe because you're not a relatively young woman?

LOL. i am neither young, nor a woman... and i'm not a relative.

 

[MissBri]

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Silly man.

now that i am.

 

[Aurora Black]

For Heart of the Dragon: The Love Scene

That Was Rough?
06/07/06 By: Anonymous in USA

If that was an example of what you consider rough, I can't wait to read your more polished stuff. This was incredibly well written; hot, sexy, and romantic without being crude. Way to go.

I said "rough" because I wrote it when I was first starting out with erotica (at the age of 19) and I was still unsure and inexperienced. Thanks so much!

 

[Darkniciad]

Always the important questions with no way to answer them

spectacular its like reading a book however...i find it odd that danica doesnt realise that the *dream* of her argument with her sister isnt real especialy since zorander did that in the past. and that if she knows that zorander cant spy her through the mage house in town why doesnt she try and gain entry there and contact her sister?

The first time this was done to her, Zoraster told her flat out what he had done. She awoke in the complex, strapped down to a table in controlled circumstances, having been there for days. She was in full control of the clone body during that entire episode. This time out, he's built it up to feel like a dream, sending her on odd dream trips and controlling the experience during her normal REM sleep for a couple of days before completing his real objective.

Don't forget, she's being constantly drugged and fed suggestions in her sleep as well. Certain things she would normally do just slip out of her mind, and contacting her sister is one of them. There is also the fact that asking Devan for help is utterly out of character for Danica, it would likely be her very last resort even without Zoraster's influence. She's lived in her sister's shadow too long.

Everything Danica *thinks* she knows is just as often another layer of lies.

 

[FallingToFly]

outstanding
06/08/06 by Anonymous in Texas
Actually, early on in the story, I almost bailed out; but in truth, I don't remember why. Overall, this is one of the most outstanding stories ever presented in this venue. Write on!

-- KVK

That is one of the best comments I have ever received. To whoever you are KVK, thank you for making my morning.

 

[Aurora Black]

That is one of the best comments I have ever received. To whoever you are KVK, thank you for making my morning.

Which one was that for?

 

[Aurora Black]

Oops, never mind. Just saw it after voting.

 

[FallingToFly]

Oops, never mind. Just saw it after voting.

This is probably the most positively recieved story I've ever done...

All I can say is wow, and thanks so much to everyone, Anonymous and not, who read this story, commented, and has been so incredibly kind in what they've said. I had serious doubts about this story when I wrote it, now I'm just so shocked that I can't even come up with words to say how over the moon I am that this story was so well-recieved. I am really, really glad you guys liked it. And now I think I may remove damn near everything else, and work on doing more that equals this one's readability.

 

[Aurora Black]

This is probably the most positively recieved story I've ever done...

All I can say is wow, and thanks so much to everyone, Anonymous and not, who read this story, commented, and has been so incredibly kind in what they've said. I had serious doubts about this story when I wrote it, now I'm just so shocked that I can't even come up with words to say how over the moon I am that this story was so well-recieved. I am really, really glad you guys liked it. And now I think I may remove damn near everything else, and work on doing more that equals this one's readability.

No, don't do that!

 

[Selena_Kitt]

This is probably the most positively recieved story I've ever done...

All I can say is wow, and thanks so much to everyone, Anonymous and not, who read this story, commented, and has been so incredibly kind in what they've said. I had serious doubts about this story when I wrote it, now I'm just so shocked that I can't even come up with words to say how over the moon I am that this story was so well-recieved. I am really, really glad you guys liked it. And now I think I may remove damn near everything else, and work on doing more that equals this one's readability.

well remember a LOT of what you have up is Fanfic, and we've had discussions here about what a limited readership that is...

THIS piece appeals to a wider audience...

 

[FallingToFly]

well remember a LOT of what you have up is Fanfic, and we've had discussions here about what a limited readership that is...

THIS piece appeals to a wider audience...

Eh, I just got three back to back requests for more of Falling, so I threw like five more chapters up. And I threw my chain story bit up, and hopefully I can finish Need Not want and Happenstance tonight to put up. That way while I'm gone they'll go up so I don't bite my nails with the waiting.

 

[angelicminx]

This message contains feedback for: angelicminx
About the submission: Silence Never Ending
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

though I am still stuggling to figure out the way a poem like this is
written, you did a fantastic job. I liked the way it flowed and gave me
the imagery of every line

This message contains feedback for: angelicminx
About the submission: Shattered Shells
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Hey! This is a good poem. I think it really conveys what you wanted it
to, plus I really like the title. LOL

I just wanted to say thanks to anonymous for the feedback.

 

[FallingToFly]

Oh No
06/08/06 By: Anonymous in USA
All that great writing and sensitivity nearly ruined by several careless stupid sentences. Words to this effect - I allowed him other women as long as he came home to me but not my sisters. Gee why not?

What great depth and feeling until those words fell like broken glass nearly dispelling the image built so carefully.

Why was that important writer? What purpose did it serve?? A cute attempt at lewdness???

To a degree it almost poisoned what followed - it distorted the sympathy felt toward her - perhaps she got what she deserved.

Think damn it.

I would have gladly, had you left me a way to contact you, clarified- many women who feel in some way inadequate will agree to anything their partner asks, just because- well, they don't feel like they're enough. It happens, and happens a lot- like women who turn a blind eye to a partner's affairs for fear that if they make a fuss, they'll be dumped. Or agree to such an arrangement, because they'd rather know than not know, and they expect it anyway.

This story was meant to portray a woman who had given away her core, her self, to a controlling and manipulative husband, because she felt inferior. It also showed where she drew her line, the one she wouldn't allow to be crossed, and how she rebuilt her sense of self.

And do you really think she would have shared Daniel with another woman? *grins* I think it also showed that it's easy, someties too easy, to be taken in by someone with a pretty facade, and not see the scales underneath. The marked contrast between david and Daniel proved that what was inside counted (although a cute skater boy never did anyone any harm).

 

[Selena_Kitt]

you realy make cops look good by this one.

*Groan*

*Banging head on keyboard* FKFASKJBWR*O#RUIVBFVJBK(@&(*#

Look...

a. can you say FANTASY!?!?!???!?!?
b. um... right... cuz a "bad cop" didn't ever exist!?!?

 

[SouthSkyEyes]

Handing Selena an icepack, after all that banging.

Dear Anonymous:

Yes, this is a true story. I don't have the time these days to spend rummaging through my dirty imagination just so others can get their rocks off.

Sky

 

[sophia jane]

???

"I did not read this story but I voted 5 anyway"

Why?????

 

[FallingToFly]

???

"I did not read this story but I voted 5 anyway"

Why?????

Because they want to sleep with you. *nods* That's why any of us get 5 votes.