Annonymous

[geronimo_appleby]

Because they want to sleep with you. *nods* That's why any of us get 5 votes.

you reckon?

 

[FallingToFly]

you reckon?

Of course. *snorts* Anyoe could have told you that.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Of course. *snorts* Anyoe could have told you that.

if anyone wants to sleep with me, i'll be surprised.

 

[neonlyte]

Did not read the story
06/09/06 By: Anonymous
voted 5 anyway

Oww fuck! They want to sleep with me as well

Dear Anonymous - your spirit is willing but my flesh is weak, don't do this... please.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

???

"I did not read this story but I voted 5 anyway"

Why?????

Hm.
That sounds familiar to me.

 

[LadyCibelle]

if anyone wants to sleep with me, i'll be surprised.

Be surprised then....I do!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Be surprised then....I do!

*blush*

 

[LadyCibelle]

*blush*

Awwww you're even cuter when you blush.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I think this was a positive from anon.

make the hubby his bitch too
06/10/06 By: Anonymous in usa
the hubby want some too.

 

[Aurora Black]

On "Absence of Desire":

Unspoken and Understood
06/04/06 By: Anonymous in USA

Wow... not often is a perspective so clearly understood in short bursts of emotion. The view as seen through her eyes - like a memory - yearning to experience something unknown ... something deserved and endlessly deprived... I truely felt the deepened sorrow... the unyielding questions as to why so lost... so painfully alone...

Thank you. That was the feeling I was going for.

 

[S-Des]

On "Absence of Desire":

Thank you. That was the feeling I was going for.

Damn, that may be the most well-thought out comment I've seen (and it was a nice one too). I'd kill for someone saying something like that. It's probably my writing style, but my comments are usually lacking in real emotion. I tried to make the last story my most erotic and didn't get a single comment about that aspect (in any of the three chapters) to even let me know if it was enjoyable or not.

I think I need to hire one of you for writing lessons. Unfortunately, I'm completely broke, but I could cut your grass or wash your car .

 

[Aurora Black]

I think I need to hire one of you for writing lessons. Unfortunately, I'm completely broke, but I could cut your grass or wash your car .

I don't have a yard or own a car. What else have you got?

 

[impressive]

I was going through some old PCs looking for a quotable from Colly, and I came across these two back-to-back PCs on Topping Love (long since pulled down from Lit). To me, they illustrate just how much more non-anonymous feedback means:

Beautifully done
01/23/05 By: dr_mabeuse
I'm amazed that you can keep so many characters going at the same time with such effortless grace: it's like watching a master juggler at work. The dialogue flows naturally, and the character interactions are great. I don't know if love is like a pizza, but it was fun finding out.

~ ~ ~

boring
01/22/05 By: Anonymous
yuppies talk to much. why dont they just shut up and fuck or something

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This message contains feedback for: RedHairedandFriendly
About the submission: The Release
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

this story was amazing it made me cum four times and i am about to come
again....my nipples hurt....thank you for my pleasure

_____


I'm blushin'.

See that is a nice anonymous.

 

[Aurora Black]

This message contains feedback for: RedHairedandFriendly
About the submission: The Release
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

this story was amazing it made me cum four times and i am about to come
again....my nipples hurt....thank you for my pleasure

_____


I'm blushin'.

See that is a nice anonymous.

Yikes. I guess it really was a release.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Yikes. I guess it really was a release.

LOL... I guess so. I blushed again just reading it. lol.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This is in regards to my "A Slut Named Carrie" story.


ummm
06/15/06 by Anonymous
I missed the contest but I know for a fact that this would never ever happen in any actual clothing free resort. While I enjoy a good erotic story, its ones like these that give naturism a bad name and public image.


**

Okay... this is a FANTASY...

This is a story entered in the NUDE DAY CONTEST ...

This is an erotic site where you write porn...

This is under the title GROUP SEX...

Anonymous... take a chill pill and sit at the beach and enjoy the orgies! (You know you want to)

 

[Guest]

 

[DanseMacabre]

I suppose Anonymous does have his moments at times.

 

[rgraham666]

Just received this via e-mail.

it was a very bad story i ever read in my life.

Oh God! All my will to write has fled! Such a deep, insightful and cutting comment has revealed to me that I have no skill as a writer at all!

 

[Darkniciad]

Just received this via e-mail.



Oh God! All my will to write has fled! Such a deep, insightful and cutting comment has revealed to me that I have no skill as a writer at all!

Something tells me that perhaps your story had entirely too many multi-syllable words, and some strange symbols at the end of sentances that confused the reader.

Dictate your stories in caveman-like grunts, with no punctuation, and I bet this one will be firmly in your camp!

 

[AchtungNight]

Deleted this anonymous remark from "The Rendezvous Chapter 5" earlier today.

"This story is lesbian. It belongs in the lesbian section."

Yes, it is lesbian. However, the characters are based on actresses. The story is actress femslash. Therefore it ended up in "Celebrities." I hope you judged the story based on its merits and didn't slam it on what you saw as improper category choice. If you did, I hereby welcome you to buy a clue. {L}

To all who have enjoyed my stories and sent good feedback on them- {Elvis impression} Thank you. Thank you very much.

AchtungNight has left the building... no, wait, he's hiding behind that plant!

 

[Aurora Black]

Oh God! All my will to write has fled! Such a deep, insightful and cutting comment has revealed to me that I have no skill as a writer at all!

LMAO. Yes, Rob. By all means be wounded to the quick by someone who fails to use proper grammar and sentence structure in their critique of your story!

 

[Boxlicker101]

Just received this via e-mail.

Quote:
it was a very bad story i ever read in my life.


Oh God! All my will to write has fled! Such a deep, insightful and cutting comment has revealed to me that I have no skill as a writer at all!

I can certainly understand how such a devestating and highly literate comment can cause you to question your talent. Perhaps the problem was that some of the letters in your story were bigger than others.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

This is in regards to my "A Slut Named Carrie" story.


ummm
06/15/06 by Anonymous
I missed the contest but I know for a fact that this would never ever happen in any actual clothing free resort. While I enjoy a good erotic story, its ones like these that give naturism a bad name and public image.


**

Okay... this is a FANTASY...

This is a story entered in the NUDE DAY CONTEST ...

This is an erotic site where you write porn...

This is under the title GROUP SEX...

Anonymous... take a chill pill and sit at the beach and enjoy the orgies! (You know you want to)

*snort*

Wait til they read mine... which takes place in a Christian nudist community... yes, that's what I said...

can't WAIT for the feedback from anonymous on this one...