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Teenage Venus

Teenage Venus

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Hi you lovely bunch.
Thanks a million to those that requested samples of my stories and took time out to comment.
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Sneeky advert slipped in:
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=151539
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As all but one comment was - being modest :D - extremely favourable, and complimentary, and you asked for more, that was EXTREMELY encouraging.

None posted yet, but I will submit more in hope rather than expectation.

The above URL is to a poem which I submitted and was accepted immediately. It - unlike me - is not erotic, however, I hope you take time to read it and vote. It is a glimpse inside the other half of me. (And I'm sure it applies to you all in some way.)

Especial thanks to 'cantdog', who took time out explain in detail so much, gave a detailed edit of what I sent him, and who taught me more in ten minutes of reading his crit than I ever learned about writing from anywhere. Hopefully I will be able to put some of that knowledge to good use.

Thanks :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
 
 
 
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Virtual_Burlesque said:
Puke, puke, puke,
Puke of URL, URL, URL,
Puke of URL, URL, URL,
Puke of URL!

Puke, puke, puke,
Puke of URL, URL, URL,
Puke of URL, URL, URL,
Puke of URL!
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PMSL!!!!!!!

Virtual, you're making me wet myself today.
Long live burlesque!!!!!!!:rose:
 
cv, I feel compelled to say you are the only person I 'know' who speaks in url's. It's rather endearing.

Perdita
 
:D

I love this place and the weird and wonderful people who inhabit it. I'll leave it up to each one of you to decide if you are weird or wonderful. :p

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Venus, go you!

Congrats, and here's to many more submissions. ;)

Lou :rose:
 
Personally, Loulou, I love weird and wonderful (with a touch of madness).

Perdita
 
Yep, always a good mix.

It's just that some people's craziness far exceeds that of others. Not that it's a bad thing. ;)

Lou
 
Hey, Loulou, how does one post the sub-text? I don't have a button for that.

Perdita :rolleyes: :p
 
Tatelou said:
Yep, always a good mix.

It's just that some people's craziness far exceeds that of others. Not that it's a bad thing. ;)

Lou
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I hate the smartasses like that Abstruse bitch.:p
 
Sub-text?

You mean as in...

"Take me, I am yours to do with as you please!"

Or,

U r th 1 4 me. plz m8 b my Mstr.

:confused:

Lou :p
 
Loulou, nevermind. I was just being a flirty post-modern literary type. Going back to the stacks. P. :(
 
perdita said:
Loulou, nevermind. I was just being a flirty post-modern literary type. Going back to the stacks. P. :(
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Awww! I know, honey! I was just trying to be funny. ;)

Loulou :kiss:
 
Sorry TV. It was an irresistable urge
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No problem - I'm always getting those. Anyway: 'If ya got it - flaunt it', is one of my beliefs.

If I don't die first, I may be able to reciprocate by adding my own erotica URL's. But I'm not holding my breath:D or I'd have died many days ago :)

Just an observation: I wish I could type as fast as Tatalou's nose - BIG SIGH.
 
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