An Idea For A Story I Want To Write...

stevemike08066

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I've been really getting into videos/erotica of women being mind controlled.

I already have two stories in the works, and I'm hoping to have another, let's see how many people like this one...

A prim and proper woman comes home from work late one night, it's already dark outside, before she reaches her door, she's approached by a vampire, where she gazes right into his eyes, and she is immediately hypnotized, she then offers her neck for him to bite, she passes out, only to wake up later in a strange place and stripped to her bra and panties. The vampire again enters the room, and again hypnotizes her, and has her remove her bra, where he promptly bites her on her breast, this time reawakening her, and causing her to become his undead servant.

This is just a rough idea....

Please let me know what you all think...
 
I don't know, I just always liked the idea of a snobby little entitled woman being controlled, that's all...

LOL I think there would be more conflict with someone who is more aware. But I'm sure there are readers who would prefer what you're going for.
 
Ok....

Point taken....

I just really like to play around with story ideas, I have so many stories I want to write.....

I might not even write this one...
 
Ok....

Point taken....

I just really like to play around with story ideas, I have so many stories I want to write.....

I might not even write this one...

Vamp stories, as well as mind control stories, can be erotic. It depends on what readers you want to target.
 
If you do have vampires in your story you're going to have to find a way to make it stand out because Vampires are used alot in stories on this site right after werewolves. Whatever you do, make sure it stands out. I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors.
 
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