Amateur Strip Contest

[Guest]

How about a story about a group of male and female co-workers that to a local strip club some night after work just to unwind and nothing more at first. When they get there, they find that the club is holding a weekly "Amateur Contest". Although they think nothing of it at first, they begin to coax one of the normally shy, consertative females into entering the contest. Although she intitally dismisses the idea, they persist in coaxing her until she finally accepts the idea and enters the contest. When she gets on stage (still fully clothed in normal business clothes), she tells the MC that "I can't believe I'm doing this". Over the course of the three songs that she is allotted, she manages to get totally naked (including taking her shoes and stockings). During the third song, she is up there walking around totally naked, her mind full of mixed thoughts.

 

[Chicklet]

I like this idea

my problem is that it doesn't seem very realistic -- maybe this girl has had a bit too much to drink, and that's why she's willing? why is she in a strip-club with friends from work?

maybe she's got a crush on one of the girls from work, and goes in because her more adventurous crush wants to. our girl goes in to spend more time with the other girl, and sees a chance to come on to the girl from on stage. once she's up there, she's frightened, but excited, and showing off to all her coworkers.

chicklet

 

[NASCARaddicted]

like Chicklet said: a shy girl doing a striptease is too unrealistic IMHO. Even after some drinks ...

Maybe she is not that shy, just "normal". So, at first, she doesn't like the idea, but after the coworkers keep on talking to her, she finally decides that she can do it. Maybe the coworkers tell her stuff like "you have a nice body - show it" ...

Or, maybe better: At first there is this person on stage, either male or female. This person dances like a moron. The striptease is totally unerotic, and the dancing just looks stupid ... the person looks like a drunken bear.

So, after some drinks and some teasing, the girl says: "I think I can do it better then this person". So she goes up on stage and does a great striptease.

Oh, but I have to ask this: So far, I have been to one stripclub, here in Germany. And there, the dancers only walked around and took the clothes off. But I saw some reports about US-stripclubs, where the dancers use this pole. Also, in this report, the girls spread their legs wide open, so that everybody can see the pussy .... Is it like this in all american strip clubs ? (by the way: I also saw a report about a mexican stripclub, where the audience could touch the dancer ... everywhere)

So, maybe this girl had too many drinks, when she enters the stage. She strips, and then, she shows everyone her pussy, especially her coworkers. Also, she does a lapdance with one of the female coworkers (even though she is not a lesbian).

But because of the alcohol, she can't remember about this, the next day. All that she can remember was the visit at the stripclub, but she forgot that she danced naked ...
Her coworkers tell her about it. At first, she says "No, you are lying, I don't believe you". But then, this one girl with the lapdance tells her: "I can prove it. Your pussy is totally shaven. And you have a small mole on your butt ...."
Now, she believes her. This 2 girls sit down and talk ... especially about the lapdance, and if they should continue it ...

 

[Chicklet]

strip-off

I like the idea of the girl getting on stage.

she gets up, and the stripper and her sort of have a little "top this" deal going.

would be cool

chicklet

 

[sirhugs]

there was once a very hot Penthouse Letters story featuring a bunch from work that went out to celebrate a big account . End up at strip bar. The strippers are baaadd. The only woman says so, they tease/challenge her to show she can do better. After they put up enough cash, she does. Then they cab back to her place ( playing in cab), and grouprsome ensues. It was hot, so the idea is doable. We, of course, would never rip off Penthouse.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: strip-off

I like the idea of the girl getting on stage.

she gets up, and the stripper and her sort of have a little "top this" deal going.

would be cool

chicklet

this works. And after, do they do the lapdancing " top this", or go back to her place?

 

[Anne Waters]

Hi!
I like this one, but am having a hard time with the girl doing it with a bunch of co-workers. How about just one?

A girl and her male co-worker go out. They're friends but not lovers. Maybe there's some sexual tension between them. They're out and she askes him what's the deal with guys and strip clubs. He takes her one to show her. She complains that the dancer's stink, they're ugly etc. He tells her, if you can do better, go ahead. She's drunk so she takes him up on it, gets into the top this with the other girl and winds up back at the friend's place. If you really want to kink it up, she winds up back at the friend's place with the stripper.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this: there is this striptease dancer in the club. She dances on stage and get's undressed. The bunch of workers sit in front of the stage. Suddenly, the striptease dancer recognizes one of the female workers. It is her good girlfriend from college. Back in college, they did some kinky stuff together, so the dancer tells her girlfriend to get up on stage and do some striptease together with her.

So now, there is this professional stripper on stage, and her girlfriend, too. Maybe the girlfriend already had some drinks .... anyway, she also get's undressed. Once they are both naked, they start to touch each other and perform some lesbian sex on stage ....

 

[Chicklet]

A girl and her male co-worker go out. They're friends but not lovers. Maybe there's some sexual tension between them.

this is good too, but i think it makes it a different type of story, not that there's anything wrong with that.

 

[Puppi]

Alcohol would not have to be a factor for a natural (perhaps still shy at certain moments) exhibitionist to get up on state during Amateur Night.

(Also, I'm not sure if it's the same where all of you live, but in Nebraska they do not serve alcohol at full nudity clubs. They are called "juice bars" and you only have to be 18 to go to them. The BARS that serve alcohol are bikini or topless only.)

I'm not sure why co-workers would even go to a strip club together. It seems in this day and age that everyone out there is worried about sexual harassment. Would a woman going to a strip club be "admitting" that she is bi or, at least, attracted to women? Wouldn't she feel awkward about going to a strip club with mixed gender CO-WORKERS?

Where as, for me, I have gone to strip clubs with various men I've dated over the years, and with mixed gender large groups of FRIENDS. And, of course, we had a blast! But, that's because it was with friends and NOT co-workers.

The concept of this idea is great, but in modern days, I just don't see co-workers going. Does anyone know when strip clubs first came to be? Perhaps in an era when women were more naturally subserviant BOTH at home and at work, so the women co-workers shyed away from telling the boss no?

 

[Chicklet]

1) here the nudity bars *do* serve alchohol and nowhere i've found will let anyone under 21 in - all the strip clubs are bars.

2) my slut-friend Jen *did* go to a strip club with about a dozen of her male coworkers and actually did end up sort of stripping for them. she's a slut, though...

I think this story is possible, just not probably. the average nonslutty person wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole

<god i love being a slutty person, though!>

 

[Puppi]

As you said, "...the average non-slutty person..."



I, too, am a proud slut, BUT, I would be cautious with people from work. Women can get busted/suid, fired for sexual harassment as well as men.

Anyway, I think a story set back when strip bars were "new" could be fun.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

sexual harassment ?

so what about this: maybe they work for a company like Victorias Secret (in the office), or something like this. You know, at work, they talk about the different type of bras and that stuff ... so I think, talking about sex in general is more or less normal amongst them.

Another possibility: Sure, this suing because of sexual harassment can happen everywhere. But I think, it is pretty bad in the USA. So maybe this story doesn't take place in the USA. It could be somewhere like Spain, Italy, France, Germany or the Netherlands. Especially the Netherlands are pretty open minded, I think.

But, no matter which country, or which company ... maybe this bunch of workers know each other for many years. You know, it could be like: They all visited the same school. Then, they visited the same college and later, they found their own company. So I guess, they are all shareholders of this company, they are equal partners. I think this would minimize the aspect of sexual harassment. I mean, a boss may harass his secretary or something like this, but harass an equal partner is different.

Also: Maybe this thing happened a few years ago. I mean, back in the 80s, this whole suing thing was not as big as it is nowadays. Or maybe in the 60s or 70s. Remember, back in 1969, with things like Woodstock, mini skirts, Russ Meyer and Marihuana .... and the 70s with things like the Studio 54 ....

Another idea could be: Maybe this story is placed in a remote area. Something like Alaska, or maybe somewhere in Arizona, Texas ... you know what I mean. There is this small town with only one bar (so if you want to go to a bar, you don't have a choice). During the afternoon, it is a normal bar, but later in the evening, they have some striptease dancers.

But common on guys and gals. This story is fictional and in a fiction, there is no sexual harassment.

 

[Puppi]

This story is fictional and in a fiction, there is no sexual harassment.

Well, I know it's a fictional story, but I prefer to write (AND read) realistic stories that could happen in real life. I think they are much better.

Even if a story is an obvious fantasy or Sci-Fi, if written well, it can seem real to the reader.

 

[PhxPlay4n6]

Well, I know it's a fictional story, but I prefer to write (AND read) realistic stories that could happen in real life. I think they are much better.

Even if a story is an obvious fantasy or Sci-Fi, if written well, it can seem real to the reader.

This could be a real idea if it wasn't co-workers...maybe just friends....or a bachelorette party or something...

 

[Chicklet]

reality is good, i like a large degree of it in my reading material

 

[sirhugs]

reality is good, i like a large degree of it in my reading material

unless its fantasy fiction.
but even that must ring true in its own set orf rules.

 

[Chicklet]

sci-fi bothers me if it's too unreal. that's why i don't read much on here, no offense gang.

 

[sirhugs]

sci-fi bothers me if it's too unreal. that's why i don't read much on here, no offense gang.

my point precisely. Good sci-fi exists according to rules that only subtly alter reality in defined ways. If its too extreme, its hokey.

nice new AV, chicklet.

 

[Guest]

Perhaps a slight change in details is that the contest is a wet t-shirt contest that gets increasingly wild and crazy as the night wears on. They have these types of contests during spring break. A lot of college coeds that would never do this type of thing back home seem to break loose and lose their inhibitions during these contests. In addition to enjoying the natural physical beauty of these ladies, it all the more fascinating to witness thier virtural transformation of being prim and proper into something totally different.