Certainly the last few pages of ITJ are among the most dramatic pieces of erotic writing ever penned right down to the sex drenched creulty of the death scene of the evil Dr Charlotte. What about alternates where there is more regret, compassion, real sex, farewell pain , even something as strange as Hammer having enternal l farewell sex with Charlotte as she dies whimpering and crying and begging Hammer's forgivenance? Or Charlotte kneeling nude before Hammer saying she is an evil bitch and knows it and for him to have sex with and then kill her as she will kill again if he lets her live.
Alternent endings for 'I the Jury'
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As I recall, she was slowly stripping to try to distract him as he was explaining how he knew all about her crimes. But there was a gun on a nearby table and she was really making her sly moves in order to grab it. So he would have to tie her hands together, at least, if he was going to grace her with a final fuck.
Or, after he shot her in the gut so she would die slowly and painfully, he could whip out his cock and jerk off all over her face. Then he could say something cute like "My gun is quick, and so is my dick." Of course that would leave DNA evidence all over the place, so he'd have to do some serious clean-up.
Or, after he shot her in the gut so she would die slowly and painfully, he could whip out his cock and jerk off all over her face. Then he could say something cute like "My gun is quick, and so is my dick." Of course that would leave DNA evidence all over the place, so he'd have to do some serious clean-up.
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