Ray Dario
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KM, I just finished reading all three chapters of Alexandra's Odyssey.
This was a fantastic story. I hope you are considering continuing the series. Chapter 2 was actually my favorite, but I gave all three 5's.
I really enjoyed the development of the character Lex and Mitch. You make them come alive in my mind and make me want to read more about them. So much so in fact that I honestly felt sorry for Lex in chapter 3. I know that is absurd, to feel sorry for a fictional character, but that is how well you wrote.
If anyone else is reading this post and hasn't read this story then I highly recommend it!
Keep writing, if not for yourself then for the rest of us.
Ray
This was a fantastic story. I hope you are considering continuing the series. Chapter 2 was actually my favorite, but I gave all three 5's.
I really enjoyed the development of the character Lex and Mitch. You make them come alive in my mind and make me want to read more about them. So much so in fact that I honestly felt sorry for Lex in chapter 3. I know that is absurd, to feel sorry for a fictional character, but that is how well you wrote.
If anyone else is reading this post and hasn't read this story then I highly recommend it!
Keep writing, if not for yourself then for the rest of us.
Ray
